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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
  • Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
  • Published: 08/23/2024

Ravine - The Sacred Spring

By Satnampreet Pandher
Born 2007, M, from Punjab, India
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Ravine - The Sacred Spring
Once upon a time, in a quaint village nestled between lush forests and rolling hills, a girl named Rutaaba dwelled in a unique home. This home was no ordinary residence; it was once the house of her deceased parents but had been transformed into a haven for plants and scientific exploration by Rutaaba.

Adopted by a loving couple named Jim Morris and Windy, Rutaaba found solace and purpose in nurturing the flora that filled every corner of the house. Her love for plants and the changing seasons led her to convert the dwelling into a nursery and biological research center, where she spent her days discovering new plant species and studying their intricate beauty.

Ten years prior, Rutaaba had bravely saved a ravine from a timeless curse that loomed over the land. However, as fate would have it, the time had come for her to face the reality of the curse once again.

In a remote corner of the village, an old woman, once a powerful priestess, lay on her deathbed. In her final moments, she expressed a deep regret for the curse she had bestowed upon the land and its inhabitants. With her last breath, she bestowed upon her grandson, Muhazzim, a set of magical and sacred seeds, urging him to sow them on the cursed lands to cleanse them of their negativity.

Driven by a sense of duty and love for his grandmother, Muhazzim embarked on a perilous journey to save the ravine and potentially reunite with his unknown lover.

Under the cloak of night, Muhazzim reached the cursed lands where only a few tribal communities now resided near the enchanted forests. As he obediently sowed the magical seeds, the earth shook beneath his feet, and monstrous roots emerged from the ground, tearing through the land and homes, bringing devastation in their wake. Misunderstood by the tribes as a bringer of chaos, Muhazzim found himself fleeing for his life, chased by enraged villagers.

With courage and desperation fueling his actions, Muhazzim leaped off a cliff into the unknown, only to land in a secluded area where the cursed trees stood tall and foreboding, echoing the legacy of his grandmother's wrath. It was there that he received a call from his mother, conveying the news of his grandmother's passing and a cryptic request to deliver her ashes.

Meanwhile, as Rutaaba drove towards an elusive destination in search of new plant species, unaware of the looming danger chasing her, the cursed roots and sands of the ancient curse stirred behind her. A malevolent force took shape, manifesting as a faceless monster made of blackened sand that pursued her with a relentless hunger for destruction.

In a harrowing turn of events, the cursed sands enveloped Rutaaba, transforming her into a giant, barren tree—a stark symbol of the darkness that threatened to consume her essence.

Trapped within the confines of the monstrous tree, Rutaaba encountered the spectral forms of her deceased parents, who revealed the tragic truth behind their untimely demise at the hands of a tribe seeking forbidden powers. Determined to break free from the curse that bound them, Rutaaba and her spectral parents embarked on a perilous journey within the heart of the tree, seeking to unearth its source of power and end the curse once and for all.

In a heart-wrenching revelation, Rutaaba discovered that the key to breaking the curse lay within her—her parents had unwittingly sacrificed their own hearts to sustain the cursed tree. With tears in her eyes and a heavy heart, Rutaaba made the ultimate sacrifice, freeing her parents from the curse that had plagued them for so long.

As the cursed tree stood dormant, a flicker of hope emerged in the form of Rutaaba's lover, who climbed the vine-covered branches and scattered the ashes of Muhazzim's grandmother upon the barren tree. In a burst of radiant energy, the tree bloomed with vibrant flowers, heralding the arrival of spring and the renewal of life within the once-barren landscape.

Amidst this breathtaking transformation, Rutaaba and Muhazzim found themselves reunited, their hearts intertwined with the beauty of nature's resilience. With the curse lifted, the ravine she had saved stood as a testament to her courage and compassion, a living reminder of the power of love and redemption.

In a moment of serenity and understanding, the two lovers met, their voices harmonizing in a chorus of unity as they spoke in unison, "I am Rutaaba," and "I am Muhazzim," their names intertwined in a tapestry of destiny and love.

And so, in the embrace of nature's splendor, Rutaaba and Muhazzim embarked on a new journey together, bound by the threads of fate and the unbreakable bond forged in the crucible of adversity and triumph.
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Denise Arnault

08/23/2024

I really liked this story. It had so much in it, I wish that you had filled in the spaces a little more.

I really liked this story. It had so much in it, I wish that you had filled in the spaces a little more.

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Satnampreet Pandher

08/24/2024

Thankyou for your review, Always learning :)

Thankyou for your review, Always learning :)

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