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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Survival / Success
  • Subject: Education / Instruction
  • Published: 08/25/2024

Wonder world

By Meena
Born 2006, F, from Lahore, Pakistan
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_Wonder World_

Jihoon spent months developing Wonder World, a virtual school where 22 players could interact, complete tasks, and vote each other off. He poured his heart into the game, eager to share it with the world.

Finally, Jihoon published Wonder World under a pseudonym, nervous but excited. The next day, the game exploded in popularity, with teenagers everywhere playing and talking about it.

As Jihoon played anonymously, he watched as alliances formed and tempers flared. Players like "Sparkles" and "GameOn" became leaders, while others like "Newbie" struggled to keep up.

But on the day Jihoon planned to reveal himself, a girl named Sara claimed she created Wonder World.

"I'm the genius behind this game!" Sara declared in a live stream, flashing a fake smile.

Jihoon was stunned. "That's not true!" he typed, but his message was drowned out by Sara's fans.

Determined to expose her, Jihoon created a hidden level, accessible only by solving a complex puzzle. The solution was hidden in the game's code, a secret only Jihoon knew.

"Good luck solving this, Sara!" Jihoon taunted, posting a cryptic hint.

As players struggled to complete the level, Sara grew desperate. "I'll pay anyone who can solve this!" she offered, trying to buy her way to victory.

But Jihoon's puzzle was too clever. Players like Sparkles and GameOn tried to help Sara, but they failed.

Finally, Jihoon revealed himself, exposing Sara's deception.

"Check the code, Sara. You'll find my name," Jihoon said, sharing his development notes and screenshots.

Sara's reputation was ruined. "I...I was just trying to be famous," she stammered, her fake smile gone.

Jihoon smiled. "Fame comes from hard work, not lies."

With Sara defeated, Jihoon continued to update and expand Wonder World, cementing his legacy as a master game designer.

As the game's popularity soared, Jihoon became a hero to his players. Sparkles and GameOn became his allies, and together they created a thriving community.

But Jihoon knew that with great power comes great responsibility. He vowed to always protect his players and keep Wonder World a safe and fun place.

And so, Jihoon's game continued to thrive, a wonderland of adventure and friendship, where players could be themselves and shine.
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BEN BROWN

08/25/2024

A great story. Plenty of humour. Well done.

A great story. Plenty of humour. Well done.

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Marla

08/25/2024

Interesting! Thanks for sharing your story.

Interesting! Thanks for sharing your story.

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Denise Arnault

08/25/2024

An interesting concept, Meena. As Jihoon discovers, anominty has its own price, but I think he handled it well. I wonder if the game will ever be released.

An interesting concept, Meena. As Jihoon discovers, anominty has its own price, but I think he handled it well. I wonder if the game will ever be released.

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Meena

08/25/2024

Thanks Arnault
This game concept is feom a k drama i relly want to make this but im not so coalefide now so...wish i can do it later

Thanks Arnault
This game concept is feom a k drama i relly want to make this but im not so coalefide now so...wish i can do it later

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