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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Action
- Published: 09/13/2024
Anchients
Born 2007, M, from Pensilvania, United StatesAncients
Darkness was the first thing I saw, the cold void enveloping me. Suddenly, a glimmer of light appeared, piercing through the darkness, bringing hope. A low rumble followed, gradually growing louder until it rang in my ears like a bell in a tornado. As the light and sound intensified, the world around me exploded into colors, shapes, and heat, creating a breathtaking display of nebulas and stars. Amidst the wonder, a strange image appeared before me. It was of a creature with six arms, each tipped with three-fingered hands with razor-sharp claws as dark as the void. Its head split open into a spiral of eight tendrils, revealing a maw of curved sickle-like teeth spiraling into an abyss of darkness. Its eight eyes, as yellow as a new star, were all locked onto me. The creature stood hunched over, with a frill of red-tipped spines running down its back to its sickle-shaped tail, as black as the space around me. Its two muscular legs were tan, and striped with a deep maroon like an old nebula. However, whatever I did, whether talking, moving, or breathing, it mirrored my every move with remarkable precision, making me realize that it was a reflection of me. As I extended my arm and looked down, I was surprised to find that it was a replica of the strange creature before me. I was astonished at this fact and had to create a title for these strange visions. But what to call it…no..that won't work…yes, of course that's it! Thoughts, I shall call these thoughts! Well, with that sorted out, I had more pressing matters to attend to. I need a base of operations a planet would do. Now, how do I get a planet…
Finally! It took far too long but I did it. I found a planet, a gas giant, a pallet of tans vertically striped getting lighter in color the closer to the center with dark, brown edges. It had many moons, at least over 50. Some were rocks of a dark gray, others entirely made of ice. I named it Jupiter after a constellation of a warrior. I flew in fast like a speeding missile right to the center. When I got there surprisingly, there was floating rock and debris. But now I had to make a base, and there was no way I could move it by hand. I screamed, furious I screamed until my voice gave out. But I noticed that the rocks blasted away from me when I Screamed this gave me an idea. I focused my rage on a single rock, it moved very slightly, I tried again this time with better results. This time I flung the rock a solid 20 feet away, now I was getting somewhere…
One…More…Rock… there finished, I collapsed Exhausted it had been weeks of tireless effort moving the rocks one by one. It was massive, and by that I mean the city I built. At least 800 miles long and 300 wide towering overhead at 30 miles looming like a titanic beast of space debris. Both imposing and beautiful, somehow, I used friction to fuse the rocks it was shaped like a serpentine dragon wrapping its endless coils around the planet. While I was admiring the beauty of it, I noticed a small light geting brighter in the distance, then I heard a deep rumble like an earthshaking dragon roaring a victory in battle. It shook me to the core not so much a sound as a feeling as a deep raging vibration. It took me a while but I figured out what I was looking at. From what I remember, it looked like me only, jet black and holding a massive sword as tall as him as black as a black hole drawing in light the same way, and about to swing said sword…
He was ridiculisly fast, moving as fast as a speeding comet. And in the blink of an eye he was on me, sword slashing into my waist with zero resitance. I used my energy to blast him back a solid 900 feet. He spoke, not a sound but put words into my mind,”Astrai, ancient of balance, I am leonstrei, ancient of war.”
Astrai? Was that my name? Before I could finish processing, he spoke again,
“You have built quite a fortress here, and I see you learned to use you gifts. A shame I have to end you.” Just like that he was on me and, swinging his sword. I shoved him back with my energy then, I grabbed two rocks smashed them together his head between them. I followed up by piling more rocks on him until he was surrounded by over 50 rocks. Suddenly, I saw a black tip of a sword witch was my only warning for a flurrey of swings curtiosy of leonstrei. He wasnt even affected by 800 tons of space rock bombardig him into a small pulp. That plan was disqualified, so what to do now? There was no time to think for, he was on me again just like that. I had one idea left, I focused all my energy into a shape, a sword with intricate edges and as white as a dying star. He swung again but I was ready this time, blocking his swords swing with my own a clear note that sounded like pure beauty, like the purest tone tangled with the most evil note sending chills down my spine. I could see the shock in his face reflected in light of my sword. I kicked him in the waist and chopped the back of his neck, folding him over and shoved the tip of my sword into the center of his spine.I followed up by ripping the sword out his left side, then swinging the leading edge across the back of his neck, chopping it clean off. He fell to the ground of the temple, black blood oozing out the wounds seepig into the stone. He was dead, gone forever, and I had killed him, I dropped the sword, it disingrated after a few seconds. I fell to my knees, a single tear fell out of eye landing on leonstrei head, it rolled down his cheek then falling silentnly to the clouds below.
One last rock, there complete. There it stood, a 100 foot tall stature of leontrei lifting his mighty sword over his head. It was a memorial of his sacrifice to shape a new future. A future of peace, kindess and balance.he would have been a better leader but hes gone and now its my job, and it's a lot of work. Civilains moved in millions of years proved that someone would show. Amaru was my military leader, commading our army and leadig our future along with me. With our furter shaped, I turned away from the statue and saw a terrifying sight, another ancient point a sword of lightning at me and following him was raging red storm…
Anchients(Dingus)
Ancients
Darkness was the first thing I saw, the cold void enveloping me. Suddenly, a glimmer of light appeared, piercing through the darkness, bringing hope. A low rumble followed, gradually growing louder until it rang in my ears like a bell in a tornado. As the light and sound intensified, the world around me exploded into colors, shapes, and heat, creating a breathtaking display of nebulas and stars. Amidst the wonder, a strange image appeared before me. It was of a creature with six arms, each tipped with three-fingered hands with razor-sharp claws as dark as the void. Its head split open into a spiral of eight tendrils, revealing a maw of curved sickle-like teeth spiraling into an abyss of darkness. Its eight eyes, as yellow as a new star, were all locked onto me. The creature stood hunched over, with a frill of red-tipped spines running down its back to its sickle-shaped tail, as black as the space around me. Its two muscular legs were tan, and striped with a deep maroon like an old nebula. However, whatever I did, whether talking, moving, or breathing, it mirrored my every move with remarkable precision, making me realize that it was a reflection of me. As I extended my arm and looked down, I was surprised to find that it was a replica of the strange creature before me. I was astonished at this fact and had to create a title for these strange visions. But what to call it…no..that won't work…yes, of course that's it! Thoughts, I shall call these thoughts! Well, with that sorted out, I had more pressing matters to attend to. I need a base of operations a planet would do. Now, how do I get a planet…
Finally! It took far too long but I did it. I found a planet, a gas giant, a pallet of tans vertically striped getting lighter in color the closer to the center with dark, brown edges. It had many moons, at least over 50. Some were rocks of a dark gray, others entirely made of ice. I named it Jupiter after a constellation of a warrior. I flew in fast like a speeding missile right to the center. When I got there surprisingly, there was floating rock and debris. But now I had to make a base, and there was no way I could move it by hand. I screamed, furious I screamed until my voice gave out. But I noticed that the rocks blasted away from me when I Screamed this gave me an idea. I focused my rage on a single rock, it moved very slightly, I tried again this time with better results. This time I flung the rock a solid 20 feet away, now I was getting somewhere…
One…More…Rock… there finished, I collapsed Exhausted it had been weeks of tireless effort moving the rocks one by one. It was massive, and by that I mean the city I built. At least 800 miles long and 300 wide towering overhead at 30 miles looming like a titanic beast of space debris. Both imposing and beautiful, somehow, I used friction to fuse the rocks it was shaped like a serpentine dragon wrapping its endless coils around the planet. While I was admiring the beauty of it, I noticed a small light geting brighter in the distance, then I heard a deep rumble like an earthshaking dragon roaring a victory in battle. It shook me to the core not so much a sound as a feeling as a deep raging vibration. It took me a while but I figured out what I was looking at. From what I remember, it looked like me only, jet black and holding a massive sword as tall as him as black as a black hole drawing in light the same way, and about to swing said sword…
He was ridiculisly fast, moving as fast as a speeding comet. And in the blink of an eye he was on me, sword slashing into my waist with zero resitance. I used my energy to blast him back a solid 900 feet. He spoke, not a sound but put words into my mind,”Astrai, ancient of balance, I am leonstrei, ancient of war.”
Astrai? Was that my name? Before I could finish processing, he spoke again,
“You have built quite a fortress here, and I see you learned to use you gifts. A shame I have to end you.” Just like that he was on me and, swinging his sword. I shoved him back with my energy then, I grabbed two rocks smashed them together his head between them. I followed up by piling more rocks on him until he was surrounded by over 50 rocks. Suddenly, I saw a black tip of a sword witch was my only warning for a flurrey of swings curtiosy of leonstrei. He wasnt even affected by 800 tons of space rock bombardig him into a small pulp. That plan was disqualified, so what to do now? There was no time to think for, he was on me again just like that. I had one idea left, I focused all my energy into a shape, a sword with intricate edges and as white as a dying star. He swung again but I was ready this time, blocking his swords swing with my own a clear note that sounded like pure beauty, like the purest tone tangled with the most evil note sending chills down my spine. I could see the shock in his face reflected in light of my sword. I kicked him in the waist and chopped the back of his neck, folding him over and shoved the tip of my sword into the center of his spine.I followed up by ripping the sword out his left side, then swinging the leading edge across the back of his neck, chopping it clean off. He fell to the ground of the temple, black blood oozing out the wounds seepig into the stone. He was dead, gone forever, and I had killed him, I dropped the sword, it disingrated after a few seconds. I fell to my knees, a single tear fell out of eye landing on leonstrei head, it rolled down his cheek then falling silentnly to the clouds below.
One last rock, there complete. There it stood, a 100 foot tall stature of leontrei lifting his mighty sword over his head. It was a memorial of his sacrifice to shape a new future. A future of peace, kindess and balance.he would have been a better leader but hes gone and now its my job, and it's a lot of work. Civilains moved in millions of years proved that someone would show. Amaru was my military leader, commading our army and leadig our future along with me. With our furter shaped, I turned away from the statue and saw a terrifying sight, another ancient point a sword of lightning at me and following him was raging red storm…
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