Ali and Rahul

Ali and Rahul(Mohammad Samin Mondal) Ali and Rahul were close friends. They used to live in Goa. Every evening they used to go play together, sing songs with the baker and having bread after that. Truly their friend ship was very strong. However sadly after the partition of India ,Ali and his family migrated to Bangladesh. Rahul felt very lonely and used to miss Ali terribly. After 23 years when Rahul went to a MNC to apply for a job he was surprised to see Ali as the CEO of the company. Both the friends embraced each other affectionately.

Barry

09/16/2024

Mohammad,
I found your story interesting and relatively well written. It would have been much more interesting if your had developed both the two main characters and the plot a just bit more. But it certainly was a nice beginning.

Mohammad,
I found your story interesting and relatively well written. It would have been much more interesting if your had developed both the two main characters and the plot a just bit more. But it certainly was a nice beginning.

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