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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 10/03/2024
"That Fateful Night"
Born 2010, M, from Jackson , Mississippi, United States!["That Fateful Night"](/storage/story/26A49860-9F1E-39F0-058D-7328E0F44DFA_1727993085-image(415x234-crop).jpeg)
Once upon a time, in a quaint village nestled between rolling hills and dense forests, lived a woman named Elara. She was known for her beauty, kindness, and the mysterious air that surrounded her. Elara had always been drawn to the unknown, the stories whispered in the dark corners of the village tavern, and the secrets hidden in the shadows.
One evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow over the village, a stranger arrived. His name was Adrian, a man of striking appearance with an enigmatic charm that captivated everyone he met. He was a traveler, or so he claimed, with tales of distant lands and adventures that seemed too fantastical to be true. But there was something about him that drew Elara in, something she couldn’t quite place.
Adrian and Elara’s paths crossed at the village market. Their eyes met, and in that moment, an unspoken connection was formed. They began to spend time together, exploring the village and its surroundings, sharing stories and dreams. Adrian was unlike anyone Elara had ever met. He was attentive, charming, and seemed to understand her in ways no one else did.
As days turned into weeks, their bond grew stronger. Adrian proposed, and despite the whispers and warnings from the villagers, Elara accepted. They were married in a small, intimate ceremony under the ancient oak tree that stood at the edge of the village. The villagers watched with a mix of awe and apprehension, for they knew of Adrian’s dark secret—a secret that Elara was blissfully unaware of.
Adrian had a sinister past. He was a man cursed, or perhaps driven by a dark compulsion, to kill every woman he married after seven nights. The villagers had seen it happen before, but they were too afraid to intervene. They hoped, perhaps foolishly, that Elara’s fate would be different.
The first night of their marriage was filled with joy and laughter. Adrian and Elara danced under the stars, their hearts full of love and hope. The second night was equally enchanting, with whispered promises and tender moments. As the nights passed, Elara began to notice a change in Adrian. He became distant, his eyes clouded with a darkness she couldn’t understand.
On the seventh night, a storm raged outside their cottage. The wind howled, and the rain lashed against the windows. Elara sat by the fire, waiting for Adrian to return from his walk. She felt a growing sense of unease, a chill that seemed to seep into her very bones. When Adrian finally returned, his face was pale, and his eyes were filled with a torment she had never seen before.
He approached her slowly, his hands trembling. “Elara,” he whispered, his voice breaking. “There’s something I need to tell you.”
Elara’s heart pounded in her chest. She reached out to him, her fingers brushing against his. “What is it, Adrian?”
He took a deep breath, his eyes locking onto hers. “I love you more than anything in this world. But there’s a darkness inside me, a curse that I cannot escape. Every woman I marry… I am compelled to kill after seven nights.”
Elara’s breath caught in her throat. She had heard the stories, the whispers, but she had never believed them. Now, faced with the truth, she felt a surge of fear and sorrow. But she also felt something else—a determination to break the cycle, to save the man she loved.
“Adrian,” she said softly, “we can fight this together. We can find a way to break the curse.”
Adrian shook his head, tears streaming down his face. “I don’t know if it’s possible, Elara. But I will try, for you.”
The night stretched on, filled with tension and uncertainty. As the storm raged outside, Elara and Adrian held each other close, their hearts beating as one. The villagers watched from their windows, waiting for the dawn, wondering if Elara would be the one to break the curse or if she would become another tragic tale in the village’s dark history.
The sun rose, casting a pale light over the village. The storm had passed, leaving a calm in its wake. The villagers gathered outside Elara and Adrian’s cottage, their breaths held in anticipation. The door creaked open, and…
The story ends here, leaving the fate of Elara and Adrian shrouded in mystery. Did they find a way to break the curse, or did the darkness claim another victim?
"That Fateful Night"(Joshua Swinney)
Once upon a time, in a quaint village nestled between rolling hills and dense forests, lived a woman named Elara. She was known for her beauty, kindness, and the mysterious air that surrounded her. Elara had always been drawn to the unknown, the stories whispered in the dark corners of the village tavern, and the secrets hidden in the shadows.
One evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a golden glow over the village, a stranger arrived. His name was Adrian, a man of striking appearance with an enigmatic charm that captivated everyone he met. He was a traveler, or so he claimed, with tales of distant lands and adventures that seemed too fantastical to be true. But there was something about him that drew Elara in, something she couldn’t quite place.
Adrian and Elara’s paths crossed at the village market. Their eyes met, and in that moment, an unspoken connection was formed. They began to spend time together, exploring the village and its surroundings, sharing stories and dreams. Adrian was unlike anyone Elara had ever met. He was attentive, charming, and seemed to understand her in ways no one else did.
As days turned into weeks, their bond grew stronger. Adrian proposed, and despite the whispers and warnings from the villagers, Elara accepted. They were married in a small, intimate ceremony under the ancient oak tree that stood at the edge of the village. The villagers watched with a mix of awe and apprehension, for they knew of Adrian’s dark secret—a secret that Elara was blissfully unaware of.
Adrian had a sinister past. He was a man cursed, or perhaps driven by a dark compulsion, to kill every woman he married after seven nights. The villagers had seen it happen before, but they were too afraid to intervene. They hoped, perhaps foolishly, that Elara’s fate would be different.
The first night of their marriage was filled with joy and laughter. Adrian and Elara danced under the stars, their hearts full of love and hope. The second night was equally enchanting, with whispered promises and tender moments. As the nights passed, Elara began to notice a change in Adrian. He became distant, his eyes clouded with a darkness she couldn’t understand.
On the seventh night, a storm raged outside their cottage. The wind howled, and the rain lashed against the windows. Elara sat by the fire, waiting for Adrian to return from his walk. She felt a growing sense of unease, a chill that seemed to seep into her very bones. When Adrian finally returned, his face was pale, and his eyes were filled with a torment she had never seen before.
He approached her slowly, his hands trembling. “Elara,” he whispered, his voice breaking. “There’s something I need to tell you.”
Elara’s heart pounded in her chest. She reached out to him, her fingers brushing against his. “What is it, Adrian?”
He took a deep breath, his eyes locking onto hers. “I love you more than anything in this world. But there’s a darkness inside me, a curse that I cannot escape. Every woman I marry… I am compelled to kill after seven nights.”
Elara’s breath caught in her throat. She had heard the stories, the whispers, but she had never believed them. Now, faced with the truth, she felt a surge of fear and sorrow. But she also felt something else—a determination to break the cycle, to save the man she loved.
“Adrian,” she said softly, “we can fight this together. We can find a way to break the curse.”
Adrian shook his head, tears streaming down his face. “I don’t know if it’s possible, Elara. But I will try, for you.”
The night stretched on, filled with tension and uncertainty. As the storm raged outside, Elara and Adrian held each other close, their hearts beating as one. The villagers watched from their windows, waiting for the dawn, wondering if Elara would be the one to break the curse or if she would become another tragic tale in the village’s dark history.
The sun rose, casting a pale light over the village. The storm had passed, leaving a calm in its wake. The villagers gathered outside Elara and Adrian’s cottage, their breaths held in anticipation. The door creaked open, and…
The story ends here, leaving the fate of Elara and Adrian shrouded in mystery. Did they find a way to break the curse, or did the darkness claim another victim?
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Denise Arnault
10/04/2024Rats! Leaving us in the cold like that! We all know that she broke the curse, but now we don't know how. Good story. Had me gripped till the end.
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