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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 10/06/2024
“Heather?” The customer asked as Heather finished scanning the few grocery items.
“Yes, Mrs. Pike. I thought that was you. How have you been?”
“Oh, fine. Just back to this part of the country for a little visit.”
“That’s good.”
Mrs. Pike said, “So, you never really went anywhere, huh? A shame. You could have done so much with yourself.”
Heather ignored the jab and smiled at Mrs. Pike as she would anyone else. “I hope you enjoy your visit, Mrs. Pike,” she said with sincerity and kindness.
Mrs. Pike gave a nod and left the store.
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A few days later, Heather was killed in an accident. Mrs. Pike was in her hotel room when she saw the news. She shook her head. “That girl could have really done something special with her life. What a pity that she chose to stay in this little town and settle for a grocery store job," she said aloud as she stared at the screen.
It wasn’t until she was back home again that she saw the obituary online. She could hardly believe what she was reading. Apparently, the entire town had dearly loved Heather. She was described as selfless and as someone who could be relied on to help anyone. She’d given up a music scholarship to take care of her sick grandmother, her only relative and who had raised her. After her grandmother passed away, Heather had worked at the grocery store. She had been a favorite among both customers and coworkers. She had also volunteered at the shelter. On Sundays, she had played her violin at the elderly care center. The obituary ended with something about how full and meaningful Heather’s short life had been.
Mrs. Pike sat back in her chair, realizing fully that she had been so wrong in her judgment.
Her Life(Marla)
“Heather?” The customer asked as Heather finished scanning the few grocery items.
“Yes, Mrs. Pike. I thought that was you. How have you been?”
“Oh, fine. Just back to this part of the country for a little visit.”
“That’s good.”
Mrs. Pike said, “So, you never really went anywhere, huh? A shame. You could have done so much with yourself.”
Heather ignored the jab and smiled at Mrs. Pike as she would anyone else. “I hope you enjoy your visit, Mrs. Pike,” she said with sincerity and kindness.
Mrs. Pike gave a nod and left the store.
……………..
A few days later, Heather was killed in an accident. Mrs. Pike was in her hotel room when she saw the news. She shook her head. “That girl could have really done something special with her life. What a pity that she chose to stay in this little town and settle for a grocery store job," she said aloud as she stared at the screen.
It wasn’t until she was back home again that she saw the obituary online. She could hardly believe what she was reading. Apparently, the entire town had dearly loved Heather. She was described as selfless and as someone who could be relied on to help anyone. She’d given up a music scholarship to take care of her sick grandmother, her only relative and who had raised her. After her grandmother passed away, Heather had worked at the grocery store. She had been a favorite among both customers and coworkers. She had also volunteered at the shelter. On Sundays, she had played her violin at the elderly care center. The obituary ended with something about how full and meaningful Heather’s short life had been.
Mrs. Pike sat back in her chair, realizing fully that she had been so wrong in her judgment.
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Joel Kiula
11/29/2024Sometimes we judge others choices without knowing the real reason behind them choices. And we must understans that our view of life and how we should live differs so much from what others sees life. HEATHER , was a special woman.
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Marla
11/29/2024Thanks for reading! What you said is true.
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Shirley Smothers
11/29/2024Beautiful story. We never know how much someone's life touches others. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Marla
11/29/2024Thanks!
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Cheryl Ryan
11/29/2024This is great. I love Heather's selflessness. She was busy being a blessing to the town, saving everyone's lives, and, in the end, keeping a good name for herself in death. Thank you for sharing!
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Marla
11/29/2024Thank you for reading and for your comments!
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Denise Arnault
10/09/2024This story does a good job of reminding us that you never really know someone else, and it is unwise to make assumptions based on a few moments observation (which I do all the time!) Well done!
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Marla
10/11/2024Thanks, Denise! I know that I've made an error in that way too!
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