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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Childhood / Youth
- Published: 10/09/2024
To My Elder Child
Born 1989, F, from Patiala, IndiaOh, my elder child, you're a prized gift,
I am pondering what I did, to deserve your lift
My devotions were responded to, and I found you,
a sensitive soul, beautiful and true
We have survived, life storms together,
seen good and bad times of harsh weather
You wiped away my tears and hugged me tight,
You embraced me with love in the darkest night
Your maturity is beyond your years,
your voice carrying soul through smiles and tears
"Are you okay, mamma?" brings me so much joy,
knowing all my faults, you love me, Oh my boy!
I'm thankful for life and the sweetest you,
obliged for love which is pure and true
You grow into an exceptional man with a heart of gold,
spread humanity and happiness and never be cold
May HE guide you to love and shine bright,
keep spreading joy and be full of light
To My Elder Child(Talwinder kaur)
Oh, my elder child, you're a prized gift,
I am pondering what I did, to deserve your lift
My devotions were responded to, and I found you,
a sensitive soul, beautiful and true
We have survived, life storms together,
seen good and bad times of harsh weather
You wiped away my tears and hugged me tight,
You embraced me with love in the darkest night
Your maturity is beyond your years,
your voice carrying soul through smiles and tears
"Are you okay, mamma?" brings me so much joy,
knowing all my faults, you love me, Oh my boy!
I'm thankful for life and the sweetest you,
obliged for love which is pure and true
You grow into an exceptional man with a heart of gold,
spread humanity and happiness and never be cold
May HE guide you to love and shine bright,
keep spreading joy and be full of light
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Cheryl Ryan
10/14/2024A sweet and charming poem to share with your little one. I love it.
Thank you for sharing!
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Joel Kiula
10/14/2024This is beautiful and pure love from a parent to a child. I hope and pray that one day i will be able to say these lovely words to my kids.
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Kristin Dockar
10/14/2024Just lovely. Makes me think about my daughters and now my grandchildren.
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Kanesha Andrews
10/14/2024Reading this brought a smile to my face. There is something so wonderful when a mother expresses her love for her child. Much congrats on being the Short Story Star of the Day!
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Shirley Smothers
10/14/2024What a loving tribute to your Child. I can empathize with this. Loved reading this. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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JD
10/13/2024That was very sweet and inspirational. Thank you for sharing the story of your elder child, Divya. Happy short story star of the day.
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Talwinder kaur
10/14/2024I am glad that you liked it and gave me the honor of being "Short story Star of the Day." Thank You.
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