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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Inspirational
  • Subject: Mystery
  • Published: 10/12/2024

The Shrine Door

By Vishesh Panthi
Born 2005, M, from India, India
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The Shrine Door

Many people have gathered in an ancient village, held a Discussion,

All the people of this small village have come near a tree, and are interacting among themselves. A very ancient person who is very old in age comes and all people respect them.


 The old man said, "One month is left".

 That the last day to open that door is coming, then it can never be opened,


Actually this village is called a cursed village, and the ancient intelligent saints of this village have hidden a mystery in the temple many years ago,



The secret in the forest is closed in a temple, and many dangerous animals are protecting that mystery.


Only that mystery can free the village from curse. But according to the ancient book, that mystery has to be found ahead of time. If this is not done, then after the time that the secret can be found and difficulties can also be difficult.


The people of the village asked "what we should do" the old man said, "Only a brave person can beat those animals and open that door." And from the secret we can be free from curse,



Made a lot of efforts to the people of the village and went to the forest with a powerful warrior, but he became a victim of the animals,

The people of the village came to that old man and said, "That animal is very dangerous, a powerful warrior has lost his life."


The old man said, "Nothing will happen like this, it is written in this book that those dangerous animals can be defeated by the great sword."


The old man gave the sword and said that with this sword, the child can also beat the animals.


The people of the village again tried and celebrated the great warrior for war,


He gave the warrior the sword and went to the temple with that warrior, the warrior defeated the animals and reached near the temple door, peoples said to worrier ‘you are very powerful’, the warrior said, "Yes it was very easy."


Let's open the door, the warrior tried his best, but did not open the door, worrier and all peoples came back to the old man, the warrior said, "I defeated all the animals but did not open the door."


Everyone was very sad, because that day is tomorrow, after the day that the door can never open.




The old man said, "Who told you that there is a need for a warrior, according to this book, if there is a magical sword, the child can also open the door by defeating the animals,


The second day the old man said, "Come on with me, today the last day to open that door". People of all the villages and old people going in the forest, many wild animals had come again in the forest.


An ordinary person from the village took the sword and all the people came to the door while losing the animals, that ordinary person was very happy and he said "you saw I defeated all dangerous animals". All the people tried to open the door, it was too late but the door did not open and he was disappointed.


Then a dangerous lion came there, and everyone was scared to see that.


All got away from the door, when a child picked up the sword and fought with the lion, 


in some time the child defeated the lion, everyone was surprised to see that all the people said to the child, "You defeated the lion." ", The child said," No, I cannot beat the lion, this sword defeated the lion. "


As soon as the child said, "That mysterious door opened.


When all of them reached inside the temple, they found a book on which it was written on the page


"Your curse is your ego”

The Shrine Door(Vishesh Panthi) Many people have gathered in an ancient village, held a Discussion,

All the people of this small village have come near a tree, and are interacting among themselves. A very ancient person who is very old in age comes and all people respect them.


 The old man said, "One month is left".

 That the last day to open that door is coming, then it can never be opened,


Actually this village is called a cursed village, and the ancient intelligent saints of this village have hidden a mystery in the temple many years ago,



The secret in the forest is closed in a temple, and many dangerous animals are protecting that mystery.


Only that mystery can free the village from curse. But according to the ancient book, that mystery has to be found ahead of time. If this is not done, then after the time that the secret can be found and difficulties can also be difficult.


The people of the village asked "what we should do" the old man said, "Only a brave person can beat those animals and open that door." And from the secret we can be free from curse,



Made a lot of efforts to the people of the village and went to the forest with a powerful warrior, but he became a victim of the animals,

The people of the village came to that old man and said, "That animal is very dangerous, a powerful warrior has lost his life."


The old man said, "Nothing will happen like this, it is written in this book that those dangerous animals can be defeated by the great sword."


The old man gave the sword and said that with this sword, the child can also beat the animals.


The people of the village again tried and celebrated the great warrior for war,


He gave the warrior the sword and went to the temple with that warrior, the warrior defeated the animals and reached near the temple door, peoples said to worrier ‘you are very powerful’, the warrior said, "Yes it was very easy."


Let's open the door, the warrior tried his best, but did not open the door, worrier and all peoples came back to the old man, the warrior said, "I defeated all the animals but did not open the door."


Everyone was very sad, because that day is tomorrow, after the day that the door can never open.




The old man said, "Who told you that there is a need for a warrior, according to this book, if there is a magical sword, the child can also open the door by defeating the animals,


The second day the old man said, "Come on with me, today the last day to open that door". People of all the villages and old people going in the forest, many wild animals had come again in the forest.


An ordinary person from the village took the sword and all the people came to the door while losing the animals, that ordinary person was very happy and he said "you saw I defeated all dangerous animals". All the people tried to open the door, it was too late but the door did not open and he was disappointed.


Then a dangerous lion came there, and everyone was scared to see that.


All got away from the door, when a child picked up the sword and fought with the lion, 


in some time the child defeated the lion, everyone was surprised to see that all the people said to the child, "You defeated the lion." ", The child said," No, I cannot beat the lion, this sword defeated the lion. "


As soon as the child said, "That mysterious door opened.


When all of them reached inside the temple, they found a book on which it was written on the page


"Your curse is your ego”

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FairyTaless

01/05/2025

heyy, really luvv ya work

heyy, really luvv ya work

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Denise Arnault

10/12/2024

Yes. We are often our own worst enemies! A good story.

Yes. We are often our own worst enemies! A good story.

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Vishesh Panthi

10/12/2024

Thank you. You have a good point of view.

Thank you. You have a good point of view.

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