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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: General Interest
  • Published: 10/21/2024

A Conversation

By Martin Green
Born 1929, M, from Roseville/CA, United States
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A Conversation

2024Conversation (Approx. 300 wds.)
A Conversation

Paul Lerner was sitting in the waiting area of his retirement community’s restaurant. He was waiting for his friend Abe Silverman, who’d driven them, dropped Paul off, and gone to look for a parking space. A woman stopped before him and said, “Is that you, Paul?”
Paul recognized her as Annette Cole, who’d been a friend of his late wife Sally. Annette, like Sally, was in the retirement community’s chorus and he and Sally had occasionally gone to play bridge with her and her husband George. Paul remembered that Annette and George always argued about their bridge playing. Annette liked to bid wildly and George was cautious. And when they weren’t playing bridge George would recount in detail his latest golf game.
“Yes. It is,” said Paul.
“I thought you’d moved out to some senior place.”
“No, I’m still here.”
“So you’re rattling around all by yourself in that house? How do you manage? Do you have a caretaker? I know Sally used to do everything for you.”
“”No, I’m managing all by myself.”
“Poor Paul. I know you don’t cook. What do you do about eating?”
“I have a lot of tv dinners.”
“”Ugh! I’m so sorry about Sally. We miss her at Singers, although at the end she really couldn’t keep up.”
“Mmm,” said Paul.
“Well, it must have been a blessing when she went. At least she wouldn’t have been in pain.”
“Mmm,” said Paul.
“”She did have a long life. And now she’s in a better place.”
“Yes,” said Paul.
“Well, I must run. I have a bridge game. I’ll call you sometime and we’ll have you over for dinner.”
“Uh, huh,” said Paul. To himself, he thought, if she did call he’d have to think of an excuse not to go. But he really didn’t think he had to worry about that. She’d never call. At this moment, Abe came up. “Had a hell of a time finding a place to park,” he said. “Who was that woman you were talking to?”
“Nobody. Let’s go in and have lunch.”

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A Conversation(Martin Green) 2024Conversation (Approx. 300 wds.)
A Conversation

Paul Lerner was sitting in the waiting area of his retirement community’s restaurant. He was waiting for his friend Abe Silverman, who’d driven them, dropped Paul off, and gone to look for a parking space. A woman stopped before him and said, “Is that you, Paul?”
Paul recognized her as Annette Cole, who’d been a friend of his late wife Sally. Annette, like Sally, was in the retirement community’s chorus and he and Sally had occasionally gone to play bridge with her and her husband George. Paul remembered that Annette and George always argued about their bridge playing. Annette liked to bid wildly and George was cautious. And when they weren’t playing bridge George would recount in detail his latest golf game.
“Yes. It is,” said Paul.
“I thought you’d moved out to some senior place.”
“No, I’m still here.”
“So you’re rattling around all by yourself in that house? How do you manage? Do you have a caretaker? I know Sally used to do everything for you.”
“”No, I’m managing all by myself.”
“Poor Paul. I know you don’t cook. What do you do about eating?”
“I have a lot of tv dinners.”
“”Ugh! I’m so sorry about Sally. We miss her at Singers, although at the end she really couldn’t keep up.”
“Mmm,” said Paul.
“Well, it must have been a blessing when she went. At least she wouldn’t have been in pain.”
“Mmm,” said Paul.
“”She did have a long life. And now she’s in a better place.”
“Yes,” said Paul.
“Well, I must run. I have a bridge game. I’ll call you sometime and we’ll have you over for dinner.”
“Uh, huh,” said Paul. To himself, he thought, if she did call he’d have to think of an excuse not to go. But he really didn’t think he had to worry about that. She’d never call. At this moment, Abe came up. “Had a hell of a time finding a place to park,” he said. “Who was that woman you were talking to?”
“Nobody. Let’s go in and have lunch.”

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Joel Kiula

02/20/2025

I understand Paul and his decision to keep distance. Sometimes people will just show up and start making things awkward for you for no reason. A very good story

I understand Paul and his decision to keep distance. Sometimes people will just show up and start making things awkward for you for no reason. A very good story

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Shirley Smothers

02/20/2025

I often wonder do people try to make small talk. You never really know what to say to someone who has lost a loved one. You

I often wonder do people try to make small talk. You never really know what to say to someone who has lost a loved one. You

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Shirley Smothers

02/20/2025

Congratulations on a very realistic Short Story Star of the Day.

Congratulations on a very realistic Short Story Star of the Day.

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Cheryl Ryan

02/20/2025

I understand Paul's perspective on the conversation. He tried to avoid Annette's gaslighting and the imposed shame of being in a retirement community with no wife or help at home. Such shame can have an adverse impact on mental health and I am glad he turned down her dinner offer mentally to avoid it. Thank you for sharing!

I understand Paul's perspective on the conversation. He tried to avoid Annette's gaslighting and the imposed shame of being in a retirement community with no wife or help at home. Such shame can have an adverse impact on mental health and I am glad he turned down her dinner offer mentally to avoid it. Thank you for sharing!

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Barry

02/20/2025

I particularly liked the realism. There are tons of crass and thoughtless people that one needs to 'negotiate' and your character did an excellent job.

I particularly liked the realism. There are tons of crass and thoughtless people that one needs to 'negotiate' and your character did an excellent job.

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BEN BROWN

02/20/2025

A very well written story. Well done for being todays star.

A very well written story. Well done for being todays star.

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JD

02/19/2025

Unfortunately there are too many people in the world like her, who are oblivious to the suffering and struggles of others. Paul handled her well. Happy short story star of the day, Martin.

Unfortunately there are too many people in the world like her, who are oblivious to the suffering and struggles of others. Paul handled her well. Happy short story star of the day, Martin.

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Gerald R Gioglio

11/01/2024

Hey Martin. Continuing to enjoy the joys and sorrows in Paul Lerner's life.

Hey Martin. Continuing to enjoy the joys and sorrows in Paul Lerner's life.

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Marla

10/27/2024

Good job on this. It's very realistic.

Good job on this. It's very realistic.

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Denise Arnault

10/22/2024

A good version of a common occurrence. I like the way you handled his thoughts as the conversation progressed.

A good version of a common occurrence. I like the way you handled his thoughts as the conversation progressed.

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