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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 10/29/2024
Gilded Deception
Born 2011, F, from Jackson, United StatesEmily sat by the window of her small, cozy bedroom, watching the autumn leaves flutter to the ground. The house was eerily quiet without the comforting hum of her mom’s voice. It had been two years since her mother, Sarah, had passed away in a tragic accident—or so she had been told. Her dad, Robert, had always been there for her, a rock of support in their tightly knit suburban neighborhood.
One cold, rainy afternoon, while rummaging through the attic in search of old family photos, Emily stumbled upon a small, dust-covered diary. It had a delicate floral pattern on the cover, clearly something from her mom’s past. Intrigued, she opened it to the first page and immediately recognized her mother’s elegant handwriting. The entries began innocently enough—notes about daily life, recipes, and garden tips. But as Emily read on, the tone shifted.
March 15th, 2015 "I feel so trapped. Robert’s obsession with wealth is growing. It scares me. I found another stash of gold coins today, hidden under the floorboards in the study. He says it’s for our future, but at what cost?"
Emily’s heart pounded. What was her mom talking about? She flipped through the pages, her hands trembling.
April 8th, 2015 "I can’t shake this feeling of dread. Robert has been out late every night this week. He says it’s work, but the lies are becoming harder to believe. I’m afraid to confront him. The gold he brings home—where is it really coming from?"
The diary ended abruptly, with no further explanation. Emily’s mind raced with questions. Could her dad, the man who had always been so kind and caring, really be hiding something so sinister? Determined to find answers, she started searching through the house, looking for any clues.
Late one night, while her dad was asleep, Emily tiptoed down to the basement. The flickering light from her flashlight revealed a small, hidden compartment behind a stack of old boxes. Inside, she found a heavy, dusty chest. She opened it with some effort and gasped at the sight of glittering gold coins and old, ornate jewelry. It was like a pirate’s treasure trove, but the sense of excitement was quickly overshadowed by a deep, sinking feeling in her stomach.
Over the next few weeks, Emily’s investigation led her to the local library, where she scoured old newspaper archives. To her horror, she found a series of articles about unsolved murders of wealthy women. Each victim had been found with their jewelry missing, and the dates matched her father’s late-night absences.
Her worst fears were confirmed when she discovered an old news article about her own mother’s death. The circumstances were suspicious, and the article hinted at foul play, with no concrete evidence to prove it.
One evening, unable to contain her anxiety any longer, Emily confronted her father. She showed him the diary and the articles, her voice shaking with anger and fear. Robert’s face turned pale as he tried to explain, but his feeble excuses only made things worse. In a moment of desperate honesty, he revealed the truth: his insatiable greed had driven him to commit unspeakable acts, including the murder of his own wife for her family’s wealth.
Emily's world crumbled as she processed her father's confession. The man she had looked up to, trusted, and loved was a cold-blooded killer. Fear and anger surged within her, but she knew she had to stay calm. With a trembling voice, she told her father she needed some time to think and retreated to her room.
She locked the door and immediately called the police, her hands shaking as she described the situation. Emily knew that she had to be cautious; if her father suspected that she had contacted the authorities, she might never escape the house alive.
The minutes felt like hours as she waited for the sound of sirens. She could hear her father pacing downstairs, muttering to himself. Emily’s heart raced every time the floorboards creaked beneath his heavy footsteps.
Finally, the distant wail of police sirens filled the night air. Emily heard the officers burst into the house, shouting commands. Her father’s angry voice rose in protest, but she didn’t dare leave her room until an officer knocked gently on her door.
"Emily, it's safe now. You can come out," the officer said softly.
She unlocked the door and stepped into the hallway, her legs feeling like jelly. The sight of her father being led away in handcuffs was surreal. Robert’s face was a mask of fury and despair as he met her eyes one last time.The next few weeks were a blur of police interviews, media attention, and court hearings. Emily felt like she was living in a nightmare, her reality fractured by the horrifying revelations about her father. The small, once-peaceful town was rocked by the scandal, and whispers followed Emily wherever she went.
Despite the overwhelming stress, Emily found solace in the support of her friends and the community. They rallied around her, providing comfort and helping her through the darkest days. She realized that she was stronger than she had ever known, and she was determined to rebuild her life.
As Robert’s trial progressed, more gruesome details about his crimes emerged. The stories about her father made Emily feel distressed but even in all that her friends uplifted her.
Gilded Deception(Autumn Swinney)
Emily sat by the window of her small, cozy bedroom, watching the autumn leaves flutter to the ground. The house was eerily quiet without the comforting hum of her mom’s voice. It had been two years since her mother, Sarah, had passed away in a tragic accident—or so she had been told. Her dad, Robert, had always been there for her, a rock of support in their tightly knit suburban neighborhood.
One cold, rainy afternoon, while rummaging through the attic in search of old family photos, Emily stumbled upon a small, dust-covered diary. It had a delicate floral pattern on the cover, clearly something from her mom’s past. Intrigued, she opened it to the first page and immediately recognized her mother’s elegant handwriting. The entries began innocently enough—notes about daily life, recipes, and garden tips. But as Emily read on, the tone shifted.
March 15th, 2015 "I feel so trapped. Robert’s obsession with wealth is growing. It scares me. I found another stash of gold coins today, hidden under the floorboards in the study. He says it’s for our future, but at what cost?"
Emily’s heart pounded. What was her mom talking about? She flipped through the pages, her hands trembling.
April 8th, 2015 "I can’t shake this feeling of dread. Robert has been out late every night this week. He says it’s work, but the lies are becoming harder to believe. I’m afraid to confront him. The gold he brings home—where is it really coming from?"
The diary ended abruptly, with no further explanation. Emily’s mind raced with questions. Could her dad, the man who had always been so kind and caring, really be hiding something so sinister? Determined to find answers, she started searching through the house, looking for any clues.
Late one night, while her dad was asleep, Emily tiptoed down to the basement. The flickering light from her flashlight revealed a small, hidden compartment behind a stack of old boxes. Inside, she found a heavy, dusty chest. She opened it with some effort and gasped at the sight of glittering gold coins and old, ornate jewelry. It was like a pirate’s treasure trove, but the sense of excitement was quickly overshadowed by a deep, sinking feeling in her stomach.
Over the next few weeks, Emily’s investigation led her to the local library, where she scoured old newspaper archives. To her horror, she found a series of articles about unsolved murders of wealthy women. Each victim had been found with their jewelry missing, and the dates matched her father’s late-night absences.
Her worst fears were confirmed when she discovered an old news article about her own mother’s death. The circumstances were suspicious, and the article hinted at foul play, with no concrete evidence to prove it.
One evening, unable to contain her anxiety any longer, Emily confronted her father. She showed him the diary and the articles, her voice shaking with anger and fear. Robert’s face turned pale as he tried to explain, but his feeble excuses only made things worse. In a moment of desperate honesty, he revealed the truth: his insatiable greed had driven him to commit unspeakable acts, including the murder of his own wife for her family’s wealth.
Emily's world crumbled as she processed her father's confession. The man she had looked up to, trusted, and loved was a cold-blooded killer. Fear and anger surged within her, but she knew she had to stay calm. With a trembling voice, she told her father she needed some time to think and retreated to her room.
She locked the door and immediately called the police, her hands shaking as she described the situation. Emily knew that she had to be cautious; if her father suspected that she had contacted the authorities, she might never escape the house alive.
The minutes felt like hours as she waited for the sound of sirens. She could hear her father pacing downstairs, muttering to himself. Emily’s heart raced every time the floorboards creaked beneath his heavy footsteps.
Finally, the distant wail of police sirens filled the night air. Emily heard the officers burst into the house, shouting commands. Her father’s angry voice rose in protest, but she didn’t dare leave her room until an officer knocked gently on her door.
"Emily, it's safe now. You can come out," the officer said softly.
She unlocked the door and stepped into the hallway, her legs feeling like jelly. The sight of her father being led away in handcuffs was surreal. Robert’s face was a mask of fury and despair as he met her eyes one last time.The next few weeks were a blur of police interviews, media attention, and court hearings. Emily felt like she was living in a nightmare, her reality fractured by the horrifying revelations about her father. The small, once-peaceful town was rocked by the scandal, and whispers followed Emily wherever she went.
Despite the overwhelming stress, Emily found solace in the support of her friends and the community. They rallied around her, providing comfort and helping her through the darkest days. She realized that she was stronger than she had ever known, and she was determined to rebuild her life.
As Robert’s trial progressed, more gruesome details about his crimes emerged. The stories about her father made Emily feel distressed but even in all that her friends uplifted her.
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