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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 11/06/2024
Poetry Analysis
Born 1975, M, from Manchester, United KingdomThe poem is dragged into the interview room
in hand-cuffs,
the officer points to the chair
ordering the poem to take a seat.
What have you got to say for yourself?
The cop asks the poem.
The poem replies,
you have my statement.
It’s all in there.
The officer dons a pair of reading glasses,
and reads out a line.
What’s the significance of colour?
Green? Does that mean youth? Innocence?
The poem shrugs.
You tell me. It could mean everything,
it could mean nothing.
I want you to tell us
what this all means.
It’s about death isn’t it?
It’s always about death
with you lot, the officer says.
You are going to have to co-operate,
you know? the cop insists.
The poem smiles and repeats
the opening line of the statement.
Tell me what that means. Says the cop.
Can you not just enjoy beauty
for what it is, how it makes you feel?
The poem says.
When you watch the sunrise,
you don’t ask why the sky is blue
A verse can be wonderful
and can make you feel things,
you don’t have to scrutinise
every little detail.
The officer sighs and gathers up
the stack of papers on the desk
before removing the hand-cuffs
from the poem’s wrists.
Okay, the police officer says,
you are free to go.
The poem stands up on shaky legs,
rubbing its sore wrists,
and staggers from the room,
a weaker poem than when it walked in.
Poetry Analysis(CPlatt)
The poem is dragged into the interview room
in hand-cuffs,
the officer points to the chair
ordering the poem to take a seat.
What have you got to say for yourself?
The cop asks the poem.
The poem replies,
you have my statement.
It’s all in there.
The officer dons a pair of reading glasses,
and reads out a line.
What’s the significance of colour?
Green? Does that mean youth? Innocence?
The poem shrugs.
You tell me. It could mean everything,
it could mean nothing.
I want you to tell us
what this all means.
It’s about death isn’t it?
It’s always about death
with you lot, the officer says.
You are going to have to co-operate,
you know? the cop insists.
The poem smiles and repeats
the opening line of the statement.
Tell me what that means. Says the cop.
Can you not just enjoy beauty
for what it is, how it makes you feel?
The poem says.
When you watch the sunrise,
you don’t ask why the sky is blue
A verse can be wonderful
and can make you feel things,
you don’t have to scrutinise
every little detail.
The officer sighs and gathers up
the stack of papers on the desk
before removing the hand-cuffs
from the poem’s wrists.
Okay, the police officer says,
you are free to go.
The poem stands up on shaky legs,
rubbing its sore wrists,
and staggers from the room,
a weaker poem than when it walked in.
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Kevin Hughes
11/06/2024Absolutely loved this!
A poem can tell a story
a storry cannot,
readers can what or whatnot,
In the end,
it is what it is...or isnot.
Smiles, Kevin
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CPlatt
11/11/2024Thanks a lot, Kevin. Yeah, some of my ideas are more suited to a poem rather than a story. Cheers, Chris.
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