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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Aging / Maturity
- Published: 11/09/2024
Young Lady.
Born 1951, M, from Wilmington NC, United StatesHe sighed.
His thoughts were slow, soft, gentle. Sixty three years with that woman had passed in what seemed like (to him) a heartbeat.
A heartbeat was exactly what was missing now. She was gone. He had held her hand to the last. Even a bit longer, as the Nurses had huddled outside the door. Unwilling witnesses to the most intimate of scenes. Unable to control either their tears or their hearts.
They had come to know him, and his “young lady” as he referred to her when speaking to them - and her. At first they thought it was just cute. Later, well…they realized that in his mind, and in her heart, it was always an accurate description.
He loved her in a way that spoke to the very center of their female souls. He had treated all of them with great respect for their knowledge and care…without an ounce of artifice in any of his compliments. They tried their best to make her last days as easy on her as possible. They tried to do the same for him, but he would live…so there was only so much they could do for him.
When she passed, they ignored protocol. Instead they stood like warriors in white shoes and gowns - stopping anyone from coming in the room to disturb his last goodbyes. When he crawled in next to his wife, and spoke softly to her while gently stroking her hair, tears fell in torrents from the gathering of Nurses outside the door.
No. He would not be disturbed. They turned their backs to the quiet one way conversation in the room, and faced the hallway like valkyries - daring any Doctor, Administrator, or Functionary to intrude on the scene behind them. No one did.
A half hour later. His eyes dry with no more tears to shed, he emerged from the room. He hugged each of them, thanked them, and said:
“You were so good to my young lady. She wanted me to thank you for her.”
No one had words. They were useless things. But his words rang in their hearts for ever more. After that night, they were better Nurses, better people, and better lovers. They had learned what love was…and could do.
He went home. He never said a word in the Uber. He paid the bill on his smartphone, leaving a large tip, and giving the man a "Five Star.” He smiled as he entered the tip and rating.
“Thank you, Young Lady, for buying a smartphone for me, and taking the time to teach me how to use it.”
When he closed the app, her face appeared as the screenshot. It was a picture he took while she was cutting strawberries up for her homemade strawberry shortcakes. She was unaware that he took the picture, because as she cut the strawberries up into the right size pieces, she wasn’t really there. She was back in her childhood, on the porch of Grandma’s house, cutting strawberries along side her Mother, two sisters and her little brother.
Grandma was merely supervising. Making the children laugh as she ate all the “mistakes” that were either cut too small, or left too large. The red juice dripping from her grandmother’s lips, and the giggles of her family beside her rose up to erase any signs of old age from her face. And that…is when he snapped the picture.
He unlocked the front door. Hung his hat on the stem of the coat rack. Out of habit he said out loud:
“I am home Young Lady.”
There was no answer.
Young Lady.(Kevin Hughes)
He sighed.
His thoughts were slow, soft, gentle. Sixty three years with that woman had passed in what seemed like (to him) a heartbeat.
A heartbeat was exactly what was missing now. She was gone. He had held her hand to the last. Even a bit longer, as the Nurses had huddled outside the door. Unwilling witnesses to the most intimate of scenes. Unable to control either their tears or their hearts.
They had come to know him, and his “young lady” as he referred to her when speaking to them - and her. At first they thought it was just cute. Later, well…they realized that in his mind, and in her heart, it was always an accurate description.
He loved her in a way that spoke to the very center of their female souls. He had treated all of them with great respect for their knowledge and care…without an ounce of artifice in any of his compliments. They tried their best to make her last days as easy on her as possible. They tried to do the same for him, but he would live…so there was only so much they could do for him.
When she passed, they ignored protocol. Instead they stood like warriors in white shoes and gowns - stopping anyone from coming in the room to disturb his last goodbyes. When he crawled in next to his wife, and spoke softly to her while gently stroking her hair, tears fell in torrents from the gathering of Nurses outside the door.
No. He would not be disturbed. They turned their backs to the quiet one way conversation in the room, and faced the hallway like valkyries - daring any Doctor, Administrator, or Functionary to intrude on the scene behind them. No one did.
A half hour later. His eyes dry with no more tears to shed, he emerged from the room. He hugged each of them, thanked them, and said:
“You were so good to my young lady. She wanted me to thank you for her.”
No one had words. They were useless things. But his words rang in their hearts for ever more. After that night, they were better Nurses, better people, and better lovers. They had learned what love was…and could do.
He went home. He never said a word in the Uber. He paid the bill on his smartphone, leaving a large tip, and giving the man a "Five Star.” He smiled as he entered the tip and rating.
“Thank you, Young Lady, for buying a smartphone for me, and taking the time to teach me how to use it.”
When he closed the app, her face appeared as the screenshot. It was a picture he took while she was cutting strawberries up for her homemade strawberry shortcakes. She was unaware that he took the picture, because as she cut the strawberries up into the right size pieces, she wasn’t really there. She was back in her childhood, on the porch of Grandma’s house, cutting strawberries along side her Mother, two sisters and her little brother.
Grandma was merely supervising. Making the children laugh as she ate all the “mistakes” that were either cut too small, or left too large. The red juice dripping from her grandmother’s lips, and the giggles of her family beside her rose up to erase any signs of old age from her face. And that…is when he snapped the picture.
He unlocked the front door. Hung his hat on the stem of the coat rack. Out of habit he said out loud:
“I am home Young Lady.”
There was no answer.
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Shirley Smothers
12/01/2024A sad but beautiful story. Love like this is once in a lifetime. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024Aloha Shirley,
Yes, it is for most folks. I do know a few lucky folks who have found "true love" twice. And one, believe it or not, who found it three times! But that is a very rare feat.
Smiles, Kevin
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Barry
12/01/2024Kevin,
Best thing you have ever written. A virtuosic tour de force. You may write things every bit as good as this in the future - and I'm sure you will - but nothing as well thought out and certainly nothing better.
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Rachel
12/01/2024A very good story indeed! Very heart-wrenching and I want to say both Happy Short Story of the Day and an early Merry Christmas!
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024Aloha Rachel,
Thanks for the kind words, and I wish a very merry Christmas for you too!
Smiles, Kevin
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Shelly Garrod
12/01/2024Another heartbreaking and yet warm Story Kevin. You never cease to amaze. You are truly a very talented writer. Happy Short Story Star of the Day.
Blessings, Shelly
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024Aloha Shelly,
Well that comment would make any would be Writer Blush...and since I have Irish genes...well, I probably look like the surface of the sun! Thanks for the kind words and have a great day.
smiles, Kevin
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Gerald R Gioglio
12/01/2024Beautiful, Kevin. Nicely written. Take care. Happy Story Star day.
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Gerald R Gioglio
12/03/2024No rectory, but taking your advice on the treats....think Santa can slip a slice into my stocking? Oh wait, wasn't that in one of your wonderful stories.
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024Thanks Gerald,
Hope you aren't so busy this Christmas with your Church stuff, that you skimp on the time for your self! Maybe make a stocking for yourself, stuff it with your favorite treats and hang it in your rectory.
Smiles, Kevin
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Marla
12/01/2024Kevin! I wasn't ready for big emotions. I read this way too early in the morning. :)
Anyway, yet again you have given us a gem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. This particular one makes me think that it would be wonderful to hear read aloud. Have you considered making an audiobook with your stories?
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024Aloha Maria,
I know what you mean about emotions catching you at the wrong time, especially before tea or coffee. No audio books for me, StoryStar is more than enough.
Thanks for the comments!
Smiles, Kevin
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Cheryl Ryan
12/01/2024Grief is such a rough emotion and a gruelling process to undergo.
We've seen that dying is not the hard part. it is the loved ones left behind whom had the hard part of living with you.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024Aloha Cheryl,
Yeah, it is no fun watching grief unfold, and loved ones leave. Those of us who are older, know we will have to face it head on. Sigh.
Smiles, Kevin
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JD
11/30/2024Another heart tugging love story for the ages, Kevin. Happy short story star of the day.
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Kevin Hughes
12/01/2024As always, I lavish as much thanks as I can on you for all the wonderful Awards. Thank you! May you get a stocking full of dark chocolate soon!
smiles, Kevin
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