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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Survival / Healing / Renewal
- Published: 11/20/2024
The Quiet one??
Born 2005, M, from Lagos, NigeriaTHE QUIET ONE
In a sleepy town surrounded by dense forests, there was a boy named Danny. If you were to pass him in the hallways of West Hill High School, you might not even notice him. Danny had mastered the art of being invisible, the quiet one in every classroom, the shadow at every lunch table. But behind his silence was a storm brewing a storm no one could have predicted.
Home Life: A Silent War
Danny's home was anything but a sanctuary. His father, a stern man with an addiction to cheap beer and old grievances, believed in discipline through fear. His mother, frail and submissive, lived her life in whispers, perpetually apologizing for everything and nothing. Their two-bedroom house felt more like a battlefield, with Danny caught in the crossfire.
On most nights, Danny would sit in his small room, listening to the muffled sounds of his parents' fights. His only escape was a notebook where he sketched intricate mazes. He once joked to himself that they were his way of finding a way out of home, of school, of himself.
School: A Nightmare in Broad Daylight
If Danny thought home was bad, school was worse. West Hill High was a breeding ground for bullies, and Danny was their favorite target. They’d call him names, shove him into lockers, and spread rumors about him. One particularly mean-spirited jock, Brad, loved to toss Danny's notebook into the trash, laughing as he scrambled to retrieve it.
One day, Brad took things too far. He stole Danny's notebook and read one of the mazes aloud in front of the entire cafeteria. “What’s this, Danny? Your escape plan? Gonna disappear into the woods?” The cafeteria erupted in laughter. Danny just stood there, quiet as ever, but his fists clenched so hard his nails cut into his palms.
The Breaking Point
That night, Danny sat in his room, staring at the blank pages of his notebook. Something inside him shifted. The quiet storm that had been brewing for years finally broke. He drew a new maze, more intricate than any he’d ever created. This one wasn’t an escape it was a trap.
Danny began to study. He read books on psychology, watched videos on misdirection, and practiced his charm or rather, the appearance of it. For the first time, he smiled at his classmates, but his smile didn’t reach his eyes. He started talking to Brad, acting as though he wanted to be friends.
The First Act: Comedy
At first, Danny’s newfound friendliness was harmlessly strange. He’d pull small pranks on Brad and his friends replacing Brad's protein powder with flour, gluing the soles of his sneakers to the floor. The school laughed at these stunts, and Brad started to feel the sting of humiliation.
Danny’s classmates began to see him differently. “Danny’s kind of funny,” one girl said. Another chimed in, “I think he’s actually smart, like, scary smart.” Danny basked in their shifting opinions but kept his real plans to himself.
The Final Straw: Horror
One foggy October night, Danny invited Brad and his friends to an abandoned barn on the edge of town. He pitched it as a challenge: “Let’s see who’s brave enough to make it through my maze.”
Curious and cocky, Brad accepted. He brought along a few others, laughing and joking as they entered the barn. Inside, Danny had set up his masterpiece a life-sized maze filled with mirrors, flickering lights, and eerie sounds.
At first, it seemed like a harmless haunted house. But as they ventured deeper, the laughter died. The mirrors reflected not just their faces but warped, horrifying versions of themselves. The sounds grew more sinister echoes of Brad’s mocking laughter, distorted and menacing.
One by one, they started to panic. Doors slammed shut behind them. The maze seemed alive, shifting and closing in. And then came the whispers.
“Danny,Danny…”
Brad was the last one standing, trembling in the center of the maze. He shouted, “This isn’t funny anymore, Danny!”
Danny appeared, stepping out from the shadows with a calm smile. “Oh, Brad,” he said quietly. “You always wanted me to speak up, didn’t you?”
Brad never made it out of the maze.
A Psychopath’s Legacy
Years later, Danny’s story became local legend. The barn burned down shortly after the incident, and Danny disappeared. Some said he moved to a new town, still quiet, still unnoticed. Others swore they saw him lurking in the woods, sketching new mazes.
For those who knew Danny, the lesson was clear: never underestimate the quiet ones. You never know what storms they’re hiding or what they might unleash.
And sometimes, in the stillness of the night, you might hear faint whispers carried on the wind, calling out to someone who isn’t there:
“Danny…”
The Quiet one??(Ultistory)
THE QUIET ONE
In a sleepy town surrounded by dense forests, there was a boy named Danny. If you were to pass him in the hallways of West Hill High School, you might not even notice him. Danny had mastered the art of being invisible, the quiet one in every classroom, the shadow at every lunch table. But behind his silence was a storm brewing a storm no one could have predicted.
Home Life: A Silent War
Danny's home was anything but a sanctuary. His father, a stern man with an addiction to cheap beer and old grievances, believed in discipline through fear. His mother, frail and submissive, lived her life in whispers, perpetually apologizing for everything and nothing. Their two-bedroom house felt more like a battlefield, with Danny caught in the crossfire.
On most nights, Danny would sit in his small room, listening to the muffled sounds of his parents' fights. His only escape was a notebook where he sketched intricate mazes. He once joked to himself that they were his way of finding a way out of home, of school, of himself.
School: A Nightmare in Broad Daylight
If Danny thought home was bad, school was worse. West Hill High was a breeding ground for bullies, and Danny was their favorite target. They’d call him names, shove him into lockers, and spread rumors about him. One particularly mean-spirited jock, Brad, loved to toss Danny's notebook into the trash, laughing as he scrambled to retrieve it.
One day, Brad took things too far. He stole Danny's notebook and read one of the mazes aloud in front of the entire cafeteria. “What’s this, Danny? Your escape plan? Gonna disappear into the woods?” The cafeteria erupted in laughter. Danny just stood there, quiet as ever, but his fists clenched so hard his nails cut into his palms.
The Breaking Point
That night, Danny sat in his room, staring at the blank pages of his notebook. Something inside him shifted. The quiet storm that had been brewing for years finally broke. He drew a new maze, more intricate than any he’d ever created. This one wasn’t an escape it was a trap.
Danny began to study. He read books on psychology, watched videos on misdirection, and practiced his charm or rather, the appearance of it. For the first time, he smiled at his classmates, but his smile didn’t reach his eyes. He started talking to Brad, acting as though he wanted to be friends.
The First Act: Comedy
At first, Danny’s newfound friendliness was harmlessly strange. He’d pull small pranks on Brad and his friends replacing Brad's protein powder with flour, gluing the soles of his sneakers to the floor. The school laughed at these stunts, and Brad started to feel the sting of humiliation.
Danny’s classmates began to see him differently. “Danny’s kind of funny,” one girl said. Another chimed in, “I think he’s actually smart, like, scary smart.” Danny basked in their shifting opinions but kept his real plans to himself.
The Final Straw: Horror
One foggy October night, Danny invited Brad and his friends to an abandoned barn on the edge of town. He pitched it as a challenge: “Let’s see who’s brave enough to make it through my maze.”
Curious and cocky, Brad accepted. He brought along a few others, laughing and joking as they entered the barn. Inside, Danny had set up his masterpiece a life-sized maze filled with mirrors, flickering lights, and eerie sounds.
At first, it seemed like a harmless haunted house. But as they ventured deeper, the laughter died. The mirrors reflected not just their faces but warped, horrifying versions of themselves. The sounds grew more sinister echoes of Brad’s mocking laughter, distorted and menacing.
One by one, they started to panic. Doors slammed shut behind them. The maze seemed alive, shifting and closing in. And then came the whispers.
“Danny,Danny…”
Brad was the last one standing, trembling in the center of the maze. He shouted, “This isn’t funny anymore, Danny!”
Danny appeared, stepping out from the shadows with a calm smile. “Oh, Brad,” he said quietly. “You always wanted me to speak up, didn’t you?”
Brad never made it out of the maze.
A Psychopath’s Legacy
Years later, Danny’s story became local legend. The barn burned down shortly after the incident, and Danny disappeared. Some said he moved to a new town, still quiet, still unnoticed. Others swore they saw him lurking in the woods, sketching new mazes.
For those who knew Danny, the lesson was clear: never underestimate the quiet ones. You never know what storms they’re hiding or what they might unleash.
And sometimes, in the stillness of the night, you might hear faint whispers carried on the wind, calling out to someone who isn’t there:
“Danny…”
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