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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Life Experience
- Published: 11/23/2024
Love of the birds
Born 2008, F, from Sarasota Florida, United StatesThe sorrow of the bird with no mate, to think it was just fate,
The bird cry’s with many tears in her eye’s, her only comfort was looking into the skies
She i caught by a stranger, who promise to take her away from all dangers
The boy looks her in a cage, And leaves her to be laughed at on stage
She locks her heart in a chest, all her emotions are suppressed
Her beauty no longer shows, as her pain only grows
The men cut down her home, leaving her to only roam and feel so alone,
They clip her wings so she cannot fly, when the crowd looks at her and they give her a blank eye
She falls down in to a river left to drown, there was nobody who could save her that was in town
She swam till she reached shore, her body felt so sore
She longed for her mate, and in her tree she is left to wait
She waits and waits, till the tree’s branches have became to old and they break
Winter comes and buries her in the snow, with nothing of her left to show,
The mate arrives to see he was to late, And had nothing left to do but cry and hate,
He to was just left to die, nobody bothers to ask why
Love of the birds(Trinity)
The sorrow of the bird with no mate, to think it was just fate,
The bird cry’s with many tears in her eye’s, her only comfort was looking into the skies
She i caught by a stranger, who promise to take her away from all dangers
The boy looks her in a cage, And leaves her to be laughed at on stage
She locks her heart in a chest, all her emotions are suppressed
Her beauty no longer shows, as her pain only grows
The men cut down her home, leaving her to only roam and feel so alone,
They clip her wings so she cannot fly, when the crowd looks at her and they give her a blank eye
She falls down in to a river left to drown, there was nobody who could save her that was in town
She swam till she reached shore, her body felt so sore
She longed for her mate, and in her tree she is left to wait
She waits and waits, till the tree’s branches have became to old and they break
Winter comes and buries her in the snow, with nothing of her left to show,
The mate arrives to see he was to late, And had nothing left to do but cry and hate,
He to was just left to die, nobody bothers to ask why
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Trinity
11/23/2024I'd love feedback on this !!! I'm not a snowflake so all feedback is good to me
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JD
11/24/2024Sad story, but please work on perfecting your writing skills with proper grammar and punctuation before you ask for feedback, IF you want to get better results.
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