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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: Poems & Songs
  • Published: 11/25/2024

Don't Be Like Me, She Says

By CPlatt
Born 1975, M, from Manchester, United Kingdom
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Don't Be Like Me, She Says

He goes round to see his grandmother
for his weekly after-school visit.
She offers him a cup of tea and
they settle down at the table.

How’s things? she asks.
Yeah, okay, I suppose, he shrugs.
As they sip their mugs of tea they chat,
put the world to rights.

She mentions a new art exhibition
at the Lowry gallery next month.
We should go during half-term.
That sounds like a plan.

Are you okay, love? She asks.
You don’t seem yourself today.
He explains about the school restructure
how he doesn’t fit in with his new class mates.

Don’t be like me, she says.
Stop worrying about what people think,
stop worrying and do what pleases you.
Don’t be like me, she says again.


He says nothing, merely nods in agreement.
It’s only when he’s alone, on the bus home,
that the words start to flow,
what he should have said, the reply that didn’t come.

Don’t be like me, she says.
But he is like her, he has her interest
in history, in art, in literature,
in museums, in writing and language.

She taught him about the Second World War,
about Shakespeare and Charles Dickens,
she has taught him more than any teacher,
in any class-room, ever could.

Don’t be like me, she says.
As the bus nears his stop, he shakes his head.
Way too late for that, he says aloud,
and I wouldn’t change a thing.

Don't Be Like Me, She Says(CPlatt) He goes round to see his grandmother
for his weekly after-school visit.
She offers him a cup of tea and
they settle down at the table.

How’s things? she asks.
Yeah, okay, I suppose, he shrugs.
As they sip their mugs of tea they chat,
put the world to rights.

She mentions a new art exhibition
at the Lowry gallery next month.
We should go during half-term.
That sounds like a plan.

Are you okay, love? She asks.
You don’t seem yourself today.
He explains about the school restructure
how he doesn’t fit in with his new class mates.

Don’t be like me, she says.
Stop worrying about what people think,
stop worrying and do what pleases you.
Don’t be like me, she says again.


He says nothing, merely nods in agreement.
It’s only when he’s alone, on the bus home,
that the words start to flow,
what he should have said, the reply that didn’t come.

Don’t be like me, she says.
But he is like her, he has her interest
in history, in art, in literature,
in museums, in writing and language.

She taught him about the Second World War,
about Shakespeare and Charles Dickens,
she has taught him more than any teacher,
in any class-room, ever could.

Don’t be like me, she says.
As the bus nears his stop, he shakes his head.
Way too late for that, he says aloud,
and I wouldn’t change a thing.

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Kevin Hughes

11/28/2024

First, I loved the poem. Barry said it better than I could, so I will just point to his comment. And that the two of you can have a dialog over "beat poets" from the early fifties, and sixties. Robert Hayden and Lawrence Ferlinghetti are not names bandied about much outside of Literary Classes. So it was lovely just to read your conversation too.

A poem with remarkable insight...lo...
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First, I loved the poem. Barry said it better than I could, so I will just point to his comment. And that the two of you can have a dialog over "beat poets" from the early fifties, and sixties. Robert Hayden and Lawrence Ferlinghetti are not names bandied about much outside of Literary Classes. So it was lovely just to read your conversation too.

A poem with remarkable insight...lovely, just lovely.

Smiles, Kevin

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CPlatt

11/30/2024

Aw bless you. That's lovely to hear, Kevin. Have a good weekend, my friend.

Aw bless you. That's lovely to hear, Kevin. Have a good weekend, my friend.

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Kevin Hughes

11/29/2024

I loved your comment about being like your Mother- and it inspired me to go back and than my Parents for the gifts they gave me that are like them! Sadly they have both passed, but I told my grandkids after reading your response how much like them, i... Read More

I loved your comment about being like your Mother- and it inspired me to go back and than my Parents for the gifts they gave me that are like them! Sadly they have both passed, but I told my grandkids after reading your response how much like them, in some areas, I am.

Smiles, Kevin

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CPlatt

11/28/2024

Thanks so much, Kevin. Really appreciated. Yeah, it was the Beat poets, and a poet called John Cooper Clarke (from my city in NW of UK) that got me into poetry in the first place. Kerouac and the way he wrote On The Road on a roll of telex paper is j... Read More

Thanks so much, Kevin. Really appreciated. Yeah, it was the Beat poets, and a poet called John Cooper Clarke (from my city in NW of UK) that got me into poetry in the first place. Kerouac and the way he wrote On The Road on a roll of telex paper is just the stuff of legend. This poem is actually about the relationship I have with my mum. We're both worriers, and she says, don't be like me. I'm like, I am like you, and my dad, and that's a good thing. Tbh I'm into books and literature etc because of them. Thanks again.

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Barry

11/25/2024

Wow! What a superb poem. Exceptional poetry almost always tells a story in addition to literary finesse and your did just that and more. There's more here than meets the superficial eye. This is a really good poem, but I already said that.

Wow! What a superb poem. Exceptional poetry almost always tells a story in addition to literary finesse and your did just that and more. There's more here than meets the superficial eye. This is a really good poem, but I already said that.

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CPlatt

11/26/2024

And Happy Thanksgiving for Thursday!

And Happy Thanksgiving for Thursday!

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CPlatt

11/26/2024

As a massive fan of Kerouac and the Beats, your reply made my day. Thanks a lot.

As a massive fan of Kerouac and the Beats, your reply made my day. Thanks a lot.

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Barry

11/25/2024

Two poets who come to mind regarding those who write with a deeper message beyond sheer linguistic artistry would be the black American poet, Robert Hayden, and the 'beat' poet from the 1960's, Lawrence Ferlinghetti. This poem of yours possesses a si... Read More

Two poets who come to mind regarding those who write with a deeper message beyond sheer linguistic artistry would be the black American poet, Robert Hayden, and the 'beat' poet from the 1960's, Lawrence Ferlinghetti. This poem of yours possesses a similar introspective quality that is both refreshing and original.

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