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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Fairy Tale / Folk Tale
- Published: 12/01/2024
Une Histoire D'amour
Born 2007, F, from Florida, United StatesOnce upon a time, there was a whole new world and 2 souls- The sun and the moon. Each has to fulfill their role in life. At first, they didn't know of each other's existence; they were only focused on the role that was given to them by god.
While the sun could ease his mind watching the days go by; the moon had nothing but a dark sky.
Soon, more souls were born and became what we know today- the stars and the clouds.
Both, the sun and the moon were happy to have finally some company, till' they realized it wasn't going to last because in this world, only the sun and the moon are the eternal ones.
Their days became weeks, weeks became months, and those months into years. It has been so long since those 2 souls have been born.
The happiness they once felt at their role was now replaced with the vastness of loneliness.
The sun pleaded to find someone to spend his life with; the moon dreamed of finding someone to rest with.
2 unfortunate souls that never knew they were one but separated.
Until one day- god gave them the chance to meet, falling into each other's embrace- the time they spent suffering alone seemed worthless in front of their first encounter. Declaring a love forever
But tho the time felt timeless for them- it wasn't. They still needed to fulfill their roles and while doing so, once again separating
They cried and begged; screaming each other's name.
God couldn't bear to see those souls in pain so -let them meet once in a few years. Those years could be a few, or decades, to even centuries but they will wait- those meetings have been known to us as eclipses
Now, the sun sings and radiates to the world while waiting to see his love, and the moon smiles at the night thinking about her love.
Though their time is always short, it's enough to feel love- Though others call them unfortunate, to them- they are the luckiest- lucky to have found one another...and until they see once again, they tell the stars, the clouds, and the world how much they love each other.
(this is the story of the sun and the moon)
Une Histoire D'amour(Michelle)
Once upon a time, there was a whole new world and 2 souls- The sun and the moon. Each has to fulfill their role in life. At first, they didn't know of each other's existence; they were only focused on the role that was given to them by god.
While the sun could ease his mind watching the days go by; the moon had nothing but a dark sky.
Soon, more souls were born and became what we know today- the stars and the clouds.
Both, the sun and the moon were happy to have finally some company, till' they realized it wasn't going to last because in this world, only the sun and the moon are the eternal ones.
Their days became weeks, weeks became months, and those months into years. It has been so long since those 2 souls have been born.
The happiness they once felt at their role was now replaced with the vastness of loneliness.
The sun pleaded to find someone to spend his life with; the moon dreamed of finding someone to rest with.
2 unfortunate souls that never knew they were one but separated.
Until one day- god gave them the chance to meet, falling into each other's embrace- the time they spent suffering alone seemed worthless in front of their first encounter. Declaring a love forever
But tho the time felt timeless for them- it wasn't. They still needed to fulfill their roles and while doing so, once again separating
They cried and begged; screaming each other's name.
God couldn't bear to see those souls in pain so -let them meet once in a few years. Those years could be a few, or decades, to even centuries but they will wait- those meetings have been known to us as eclipses
Now, the sun sings and radiates to the world while waiting to see his love, and the moon smiles at the night thinking about her love.
Though their time is always short, it's enough to feel love- Though others call them unfortunate, to them- they are the luckiest- lucky to have found one another...and until they see once again, they tell the stars, the clouds, and the world how much they love each other.
(this is the story of the sun and the moon)
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Denise Arnault
12/02/2024I just loved how you wove in the celestial facts with your story line. Very inventive!
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Michelle
12/05/2024Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
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