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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 12/02/2024
Candles of the Night
Born 1997, F, from MO, United StatesA light in the night,
So big and so bright,
Has gone out in my very sight.
The hole it leaves is so very hollow.
It swallows me up.
I wish I could follow.
A tear from mine own eye,
And I still do try,
To continue my part.
This has torn mine own heart.
So a candle I light this very eve,
To pacify my sorrows as I still grieve.
This light shall not replace those who are lost.
It will, however, ease the pain it has cost
A light in the night,
So big and so bright,
Has gone out in mine own sight.
I, too, will follow one beautiful day.
When does the day come?
I shall pray.
Till then, I light these very candles
And cry every night hanging tight to my own handle.
A light in the night,
So big and so bright,
Has gone out of mine own sight.
The hole it leaves is so very hollow.
It swallows me up.
I wish I could follow.
Candles of the Night(Odette Rivers)
A light in the night,
So big and so bright,
Has gone out in my very sight.
The hole it leaves is so very hollow.
It swallows me up.
I wish I could follow.
A tear from mine own eye,
And I still do try,
To continue my part.
This has torn mine own heart.
So a candle I light this very eve,
To pacify my sorrows as I still grieve.
This light shall not replace those who are lost.
It will, however, ease the pain it has cost
A light in the night,
So big and so bright,
Has gone out in mine own sight.
I, too, will follow one beautiful day.
When does the day come?
I shall pray.
Till then, I light these very candles
And cry every night hanging tight to my own handle.
A light in the night,
So big and so bright,
Has gone out of mine own sight.
The hole it leaves is so very hollow.
It swallows me up.
I wish I could follow.
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Cheryl Ryan
01/14/2025Such an amazing poem. I was blown away by how well I immediately felt the pain in the author's writing.
Thank you for sharing!
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Gerald R Gioglio
01/13/2025A wonderful little piece. I feel your pain. Congrats on Story Star week.
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Joel Kiula
01/12/2025Wonderful poem. Losing someone you love or someone close to you is always the hardest thing.
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