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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Culture / Heritage / Lifestyles
- Published: 12/04/2024
Beyond the Pedestal
Born 2006, F, from Lahore, PakistanKim stood alone in his grand, empty house, his hands skillfully crafting a statue of a beautiful girl. Flashbacks revealed snippets of their love story, showcasing tender moments they shared together. The statue began to take shape, and as Kim's hands touched its face, the girl's eyes flickered open.
She stepped off the pedestal, and Kim's eyes lit up with joy. They spent their days together, laughing and dancing in the empty halls. But Kim's birthday party revealed a shocking truth. He had created multiple statues to celebrate with, but they were imperfect, lacking the life and spark of his beloved girl.
As Kim gazed at the flawed statues, a figure emerged from the shadows. It was Kim himself, dressed in black, with an air of malevolence surrounding him. But as he drew closer, a cross symbol on his neck caught Kim's attention. The black-clad Kim was a statue, one that Kim himself had created.
Visions flooded Kim's mind, revealing the shocking truth. He had broken the statue of himself, and the black-clad Kim was bleeding from the same spot. As Kim touched his own neck, he felt a cross symbol etched into his skin. The realization hit him like a ton of bricks: he was also a statue.
Kim's world crumbled around him. He stumbled through the empty halls, the statues he created watching him with cold, dead eyes. The girl, his love, stood before him, but as he reached out, she vanished into thin air.
Kim was left alone, surrounded by the remnants of his shattered reality. He closed his eyes, remembering the laughter, the tears, and the love they shared. But as he opened his eyes, he was met with the harsh truth: he was a statue, created by an unknown hand, living a life that was never truly his own.
The grand house, once filled with laughter and joy, was now a hollow shell, a reminder of the life Kim thought he had. He stood frozen, a statue among statues, lost in a world that was never real.
Beyond the Pedestal(Meena)
Kim stood alone in his grand, empty house, his hands skillfully crafting a statue of a beautiful girl. Flashbacks revealed snippets of their love story, showcasing tender moments they shared together. The statue began to take shape, and as Kim's hands touched its face, the girl's eyes flickered open.
She stepped off the pedestal, and Kim's eyes lit up with joy. They spent their days together, laughing and dancing in the empty halls. But Kim's birthday party revealed a shocking truth. He had created multiple statues to celebrate with, but they were imperfect, lacking the life and spark of his beloved girl.
As Kim gazed at the flawed statues, a figure emerged from the shadows. It was Kim himself, dressed in black, with an air of malevolence surrounding him. But as he drew closer, a cross symbol on his neck caught Kim's attention. The black-clad Kim was a statue, one that Kim himself had created.
Visions flooded Kim's mind, revealing the shocking truth. He had broken the statue of himself, and the black-clad Kim was bleeding from the same spot. As Kim touched his own neck, he felt a cross symbol etched into his skin. The realization hit him like a ton of bricks: he was also a statue.
Kim's world crumbled around him. He stumbled through the empty halls, the statues he created watching him with cold, dead eyes. The girl, his love, stood before him, but as he reached out, she vanished into thin air.
Kim was left alone, surrounded by the remnants of his shattered reality. He closed his eyes, remembering the laughter, the tears, and the love they shared. But as he opened his eyes, he was met with the harsh truth: he was a statue, created by an unknown hand, living a life that was never truly his own.
The grand house, once filled with laughter and joy, was now a hollow shell, a reminder of the life Kim thought he had. He stood frozen, a statue among statues, lost in a world that was never real.
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Denise Arnault
12/04/2024What an inventive story idea! I really loved it. I made me wonder about the reality of my own existence. (Hint, I still think I'm real.) Keep up the good work Meena!
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