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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 12/26/2024
The known beer disaster
Born 2015, M, from Ho Chi Minh, Viet NamAverill picked up her mobile phone and read the message on the screen. The message was really disturbing. It was some boy's stuff like, beer. Well, she hate beer, though. And here's the message:
"Hey Averill, want to go to the pub? If you don't, you're going to have your last breathe, fool."
Her mind started to think of bad things that could happen and her mind was running against the clock. She asked herself:
"Hey, who's this ratty-guy? Is he a hacker? Is he a kidnapper or something?"
Considering the worst case scenario, she made her final decision.
"No, I will never go even in a hundred years." she fought back
The guy just replied:
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY NO? YOU SHOULD GO NOW! NOW, I'M GOING TO USE MY DRONE AND FIND YOU IF YOU DON'T COME! MY DRONE HAS NEVER FAILED TO FIND ANYONE!"
"Dude, you're just a pea-brained rat who doesn't knows that you're a rat. Anyways, who are you?"
The time she replied, this guy called her.
"Hey, if you don't come, meet your doom! And my identity isn't crucial!" he loomed.
"N O spells NO! NEVER!" she defended with her smartness.
"Come on! Just com-"
"NO!" she interrupted "YOU WILL MEET YOUR DOOM, MORE LIKELY!" she shouted.
She scanned around for the name of the band and it was on the name of the chat box.[did the guy who texted her mentioned about the band and left their names somewhere in the text?] and it is Quinn Band Star. She was starting to think of killing the Quinn Band Star, not only the guy because she hated how they acted.
"Pfft. Loser" he said as he hung the phone
Then her brain got a great idea! She will sneak some Thallium and put into everyone's beer! That way, they will meet their DOOM!
Here's the plan:
SECRET PLAN TO KILL THE QUINN BAND STAR
1. Prepare some Thallium.
2. Go to the pub.
3. She will pretend to go to the WC.
4. She did some research about the men's behavior of going to the toilet and turns out, they will also go if she does.
5. Run as quick as possible to the beer and put the Thallium in the beer.
6. Men will come out, and drink beer.
7. THALLIUM POISONING!
She went past a shop that sells some of the elements of the Periodic Table, she bought Thallium and ready for the kill!
"I'm here, men from the band!"
Averill had arrived at the pub and found the men, sitting on the table. They smiled their toothless smiles at her and beamed.
"Oh! Hello! Welcome, Averill!"
"I want to ask you a question. What is your name?" she asked.
"My name? Well, I'm William." he answered, politely.
"Oh hi Williams! If you may excuse me, I need to go to WC, please?" she said, with a grin on her face.
"Oh! We need to go too!" they said, in unison.
As all of them charged to the WC, Averill just went in, and went out. She snuck and dropped Thallium into. The men went out. And drunk the beer. There was a sinister grin on Averill's face. The men suddenly fainted and she went into her car and drove home, always having the grin and knowing she just murdered a whole band of gross, and ghastly guys. She always woke up with a sinister grin on her face. After doing her daily personal needs, she was always found driving past the pub, delighted of the disaster she caused. But what may happen to her? Tune in for the next part!
The known beer disaster(Erik)
Averill picked up her mobile phone and read the message on the screen. The message was really disturbing. It was some boy's stuff like, beer. Well, she hate beer, though. And here's the message:
"Hey Averill, want to go to the pub? If you don't, you're going to have your last breathe, fool."
Her mind started to think of bad things that could happen and her mind was running against the clock. She asked herself:
"Hey, who's this ratty-guy? Is he a hacker? Is he a kidnapper or something?"
Considering the worst case scenario, she made her final decision.
"No, I will never go even in a hundred years." she fought back
The guy just replied:
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY NO? YOU SHOULD GO NOW! NOW, I'M GOING TO USE MY DRONE AND FIND YOU IF YOU DON'T COME! MY DRONE HAS NEVER FAILED TO FIND ANYONE!"
"Dude, you're just a pea-brained rat who doesn't knows that you're a rat. Anyways, who are you?"
The time she replied, this guy called her.
"Hey, if you don't come, meet your doom! And my identity isn't crucial!" he loomed.
"N O spells NO! NEVER!" she defended with her smartness.
"Come on! Just com-"
"NO!" she interrupted "YOU WILL MEET YOUR DOOM, MORE LIKELY!" she shouted.
She scanned around for the name of the band and it was on the name of the chat box.[did the guy who texted her mentioned about the band and left their names somewhere in the text?] and it is Quinn Band Star. She was starting to think of killing the Quinn Band Star, not only the guy because she hated how they acted.
"Pfft. Loser" he said as he hung the phone
Then her brain got a great idea! She will sneak some Thallium and put into everyone's beer! That way, they will meet their DOOM!
Here's the plan:
SECRET PLAN TO KILL THE QUINN BAND STAR
1. Prepare some Thallium.
2. Go to the pub.
3. She will pretend to go to the WC.
4. She did some research about the men's behavior of going to the toilet and turns out, they will also go if she does.
5. Run as quick as possible to the beer and put the Thallium in the beer.
6. Men will come out, and drink beer.
7. THALLIUM POISONING!
She went past a shop that sells some of the elements of the Periodic Table, she bought Thallium and ready for the kill!
"I'm here, men from the band!"
Averill had arrived at the pub and found the men, sitting on the table. They smiled their toothless smiles at her and beamed.
"Oh! Hello! Welcome, Averill!"
"I want to ask you a question. What is your name?" she asked.
"My name? Well, I'm William." he answered, politely.
"Oh hi Williams! If you may excuse me, I need to go to WC, please?" she said, with a grin on her face.
"Oh! We need to go too!" they said, in unison.
As all of them charged to the WC, Averill just went in, and went out. She snuck and dropped Thallium into. The men went out. And drunk the beer. There was a sinister grin on Averill's face. The men suddenly fainted and she went into her car and drove home, always having the grin and knowing she just murdered a whole band of gross, and ghastly guys. She always woke up with a sinister grin on her face. After doing her daily personal needs, she was always found driving past the pub, delighted of the disaster she caused. But what may happen to her? Tune in for the next part!
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Shelly Garrod
12/27/2024Interesting story Erik. She had a plan and it pays off.
Blessings, Shelly
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