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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Kids
  • Theme: Family & Friends
  • Subject: Pets / Animal Friends
  • Published: 12/30/2024

My faithful fish who passed away: Part 2

By Erik
Born 2015, M, from Ho Chi Minh, Viet Nam
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My faithful fish who passed away: Part 2
One fine day, I went catching fishes in my tank outside in my beautiful garden. That time, there were so many fishes including black ones, red ones, green ones and lots more... Some were twins, some, were triplets! But some, WERE QUADRUPLETS! EPIC! When I caught the green guppy, I was so surprised that I caught a green one. It was hard to catch the green one because:
1. It hidden deep under the duckweed.
2. It blends in with the duckweed.
"Sister!" I came calling out, "I caught this and I shall bring this to you."
My sister came running down the stairs of my old house.
"Oh my goodness" she hollered, "That is the best fish you've ever caught!"
"Well..." I replied, "It's just a tiny of a fish."
"Wow, what a excellent fish catcher" my sister remarked.
I was just, too happy to speak another word, as I rushed into my house and put the glorious, shining fish in my tank. With really no other name in my head and my sister's, I recommended the name Vivid Green. So I and my sister agreed to name Vivid Green.

As you know, to of my favorites are Vivid Green and Phoenix (if you don't know who Phoenix is, he is my fish who is strong, orange and red that I wrote about in my story "My faithful fish who passed away 10 months ago (till 29/12/2024)). Vivid Green was also small and strong just like his buddy Phoenix, and just as flustered as him. And as you know, he tried to jump out of the tank just like the cute Phoenix. So I put the cap on the tank, but it was too dangerous to put the cap on the tank, so I put it out.

Vivid Green and Phoenix were best buddies. Like whenever I change the water in the tank, they were always together and swim around. I think they have a bond with each other. Well, Vivid Green is also a boy. So I mean "bond" for expressing the friendship between each other. They swam around and suddenly, a wipe out appeared out of nowhere. As you know, around 10 fish passed away. There were a few fishes left like Phoenix, Vivid Green, chubby ones, baby ones.

Suddenly, wipe out came after wipe out. The both buddies were still strong together. But just when I was about to graduate grade 3, Vivid Green was lining, motionless on the ground of the tank, when I came home, he took his last breath. I and my sister just couldn't bare the scene of my green fish die. So I scooped Vivid Green out of the tank and said the last goodbye to him and promise to meet in Heaven. And Phoenix just kept on living with out his buddy by his side for the rest three months.

To my beloved Vivid Green...
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