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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Time: PAST/Present/FUTURE
- Published: 03/13/2025
Yes Or No
Born 2007, M, from Punjab, India
The year was 1995. Corduroy jackets and dial-up internet were the norm, and for two archaeologists, Dr. Alistair Humphrey and Dr. Marcus Thorne, the hunt for a rare fossil consumed their days. Alistair, a man of quiet kindness, saw the world with a gentle curiosity. Marcus, however, was a different story. His brilliance in the field of theoretical physics was overshadowed by a dark past. He was a convicted murderer, a scientist who’d sacrificed a young life in pursuit of forbidden knowledge – the secrets of time travel. Today was his last day of freedom before being remanded to prison.
He’d promised Alistair he’d accompany him on this expedition. Perhaps a flicker of genuine friendship, perhaps just a desperate clinging to a life outside prison walls. Alistair, ever the optimist, hoped it was the former.
They scoured the dusty, sun-baked landscape of a remote archaeological site. Days blurred into a monotonous routine of digging and sifting. Then, in the heart of a forgotten temple ruin, they found it. Not the fossil they sought, but something far more extraordinary: a vast, antique painting. It depicted a stern, bearded man, his eyes radiating an unnerving intensity.
As they stared, transfixed, a voice resonated from the painting. "I am Chronos, the guardian of time. I offer you a gift. Would you deduct time from your future to enrich your present? Answer me truthfully, with Yes or No!"
Alistair, content with his life, his work, his relationships, immediately answered, "No."
Marcus, however, saw an opportunity. "Yes," he rasped, his heart pounding. He needed one more day, just one more day to complete his time machine, to leap into the future and escape his impending incarceration.
Chronos’s voice echoed again, "Your wish is granted."
The next day dawned with an unnerving clarity. A day stolen from his future. Marcus, driven by a frenzied desperation, worked tirelessly. He pieced together the final components of his time machine, a chaotic assemblage of scavenged parts and stolen technology. As the final bolt tightened, he threw the switch.
The machine whirred, sputtered, and then… nothing. Instead of a surge of temporal energy, a disorienting wave washed over him, a nausea that twisted his gut. He opened his eyes, not to the gleaming cities of the future, but to a canvas of swirling colors. He was within the painting, trapped within the gaze of Chronos. He was Chronos.
Before him materialized a young boy, no older than ten, his eyes wide with a knowing fear. The boy pointed a trembling finger at Marcus, the Chronos, and spoke in a surprisingly firm voice. "I know what you plan to do, what you will do. Take the days meant for me, the days I will never experience because of you. Take them and add them to my future. Prevent what is to come."
The deal was struck. The time was redistributed. The canvas swirled once more, and Marcus felt himself dissolving, his essence being rewritten, his memories shifting like sand.
He awoke with a gasp in his own bed. Confused, he looked around. He wasn’t scheduled to be sent to jail today. In fact, he’d never been convicted of murder. He was just Marcus Thorne, a scientist, a friend of Alistair Humphrey. The world felt… different. Lighter. He remembered the time travel experiments, but they were just theoretical, never put into practice.
The next day, Alistair invited Marcus over for tea. As they sat in Alistair’s cluttered living room, surrounded by books and artifacts, they discussed their shared passion: archaeology, the mysteries of time, the whispers of forgotten gods.
"Remember that painting we found?" Alistair chuckled. "Quite a find, wasn't it? Almost felt… real."
Marcus nodded, a strange unease creeping into his heart. He felt like he was missing something, a piece of his past, a vital truth buried just beneath the surface.
Alistair poured another cup of tea and then, almost casually, picked up a framed photograph from the mantelpiece. It was a picture of a young boy, no older than ten, smiling brightly at the camera.
Marcus froze. He knew that face. He knew that face. It was the boy from the painting, the boy he had murdered. But something was different. There was no fear in those eyes, only innocent joy.
"That's me," Alistair said, his voice filled with affection. "When I was a kid. Crazy how fast time flies, eh, Marcus?"
Marcus stared at the photograph, his mind reeling. The pieces fell into place with a terrifying clarity. He was the murderer, Chronos, but the boy had changed the timeline. He'd been spared a brutal death, given a future he wouldn't have had. And Alistair, the kind-hearted archaeologist, was the same boy, living the life that Marcus had tried to steal.
The weight of what he had almost done, the scale of the temporal manipulation, crashed down on him. He had been given a second chance, a clean slate, and the man who had given him that chance was the very person he had once victimized.
He didn't deserve this. He didn't deserve Alistair's friendship, his kindness, his second chance. But he had it. And he knew, with a sickening certainty, that he could never, ever tell him the truth. The timeline may have been rewritten, but the guilt remained, etched deep within his soul, a constant reminder of the darkness he had once embraced. He was free, but trapped in a prison of his own making, bound to a secret he could never share, with a man he could never truly repay. The gift of time had become his curse.
He’d promised Alistair he’d accompany him on this expedition. Perhaps a flicker of genuine friendship, perhaps just a desperate clinging to a life outside prison walls. Alistair, ever the optimist, hoped it was the former.
They scoured the dusty, sun-baked landscape of a remote archaeological site. Days blurred into a monotonous routine of digging and sifting. Then, in the heart of a forgotten temple ruin, they found it. Not the fossil they sought, but something far more extraordinary: a vast, antique painting. It depicted a stern, bearded man, his eyes radiating an unnerving intensity.
As they stared, transfixed, a voice resonated from the painting. "I am Chronos, the guardian of time. I offer you a gift. Would you deduct time from your future to enrich your present? Answer me truthfully, with Yes or No!"
Alistair, content with his life, his work, his relationships, immediately answered, "No."
Marcus, however, saw an opportunity. "Yes," he rasped, his heart pounding. He needed one more day, just one more day to complete his time machine, to leap into the future and escape his impending incarceration.
Chronos’s voice echoed again, "Your wish is granted."
The next day dawned with an unnerving clarity. A day stolen from his future. Marcus, driven by a frenzied desperation, worked tirelessly. He pieced together the final components of his time machine, a chaotic assemblage of scavenged parts and stolen technology. As the final bolt tightened, he threw the switch.
The machine whirred, sputtered, and then… nothing. Instead of a surge of temporal energy, a disorienting wave washed over him, a nausea that twisted his gut. He opened his eyes, not to the gleaming cities of the future, but to a canvas of swirling colors. He was within the painting, trapped within the gaze of Chronos. He was Chronos.
Before him materialized a young boy, no older than ten, his eyes wide with a knowing fear. The boy pointed a trembling finger at Marcus, the Chronos, and spoke in a surprisingly firm voice. "I know what you plan to do, what you will do. Take the days meant for me, the days I will never experience because of you. Take them and add them to my future. Prevent what is to come."
The deal was struck. The time was redistributed. The canvas swirled once more, and Marcus felt himself dissolving, his essence being rewritten, his memories shifting like sand.
He awoke with a gasp in his own bed. Confused, he looked around. He wasn’t scheduled to be sent to jail today. In fact, he’d never been convicted of murder. He was just Marcus Thorne, a scientist, a friend of Alistair Humphrey. The world felt… different. Lighter. He remembered the time travel experiments, but they were just theoretical, never put into practice.
The next day, Alistair invited Marcus over for tea. As they sat in Alistair’s cluttered living room, surrounded by books and artifacts, they discussed their shared passion: archaeology, the mysteries of time, the whispers of forgotten gods.
"Remember that painting we found?" Alistair chuckled. "Quite a find, wasn't it? Almost felt… real."
Marcus nodded, a strange unease creeping into his heart. He felt like he was missing something, a piece of his past, a vital truth buried just beneath the surface.
Alistair poured another cup of tea and then, almost casually, picked up a framed photograph from the mantelpiece. It was a picture of a young boy, no older than ten, smiling brightly at the camera.
Marcus froze. He knew that face. He knew that face. It was the boy from the painting, the boy he had murdered. But something was different. There was no fear in those eyes, only innocent joy.
"That's me," Alistair said, his voice filled with affection. "When I was a kid. Crazy how fast time flies, eh, Marcus?"
Marcus stared at the photograph, his mind reeling. The pieces fell into place with a terrifying clarity. He was the murderer, Chronos, but the boy had changed the timeline. He'd been spared a brutal death, given a future he wouldn't have had. And Alistair, the kind-hearted archaeologist, was the same boy, living the life that Marcus had tried to steal.
The weight of what he had almost done, the scale of the temporal manipulation, crashed down on him. He had been given a second chance, a clean slate, and the man who had given him that chance was the very person he had once victimized.
He didn't deserve this. He didn't deserve Alistair's friendship, his kindness, his second chance. But he had it. And he knew, with a sickening certainty, that he could never, ever tell him the truth. The timeline may have been rewritten, but the guilt remained, etched deep within his soul, a constant reminder of the darkness he had once embraced. He was free, but trapped in a prison of his own making, bound to a secret he could never share, with a man he could never truly repay. The gift of time had become his curse.
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