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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Pain / Problems / Adversity
- Published: 08/09/2025
The House Made of Stars and Tears
Born 1978, F, from Fort Worth, Texas, United States
There was no other way to describe it, except to say it was a place decorated with stars and dreams of unusual shapes. Hopes painted in colors that were bright, dark, and sometimes sparkly.
Her prayers were colorful, yet oddly shaped.
Nothing was normal in Kara’s home—her world.
From the outside, it looked ordinary.
But once people stepped inside, the uniqueness of her home—her world—could be unsettling.
Some liked visiting, but never stayed for long. Others enjoyed staying, yet always wanted to redecorate it to suit their own comfort.
And while she would sometimes compromise, it never worked out.
Too much of the other person would overtake her space, leaving very little of her true self for anyone to see.
So, once again, she was alone.
Alone in her unique home—her world.
Would anyone ever want to share it with her? Probably not.
Her home—her world—was too strange, too difficult to understand.
And so, Kara sat in the living room of her unique home—her world—and she cried.
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Barry
08/10/2025Good writing! I particularly like the thoughtfulness coupledd with with the lyrical/poetic quality of many of the passages. Simple and straightforward narrative yet there's a subtle depth to the language. I picture the main character eventually coming fully into her own (i.e. in terms of relationships) as her life unfolds, but that's just my optimistic take on things.
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Kanesha Andrews
08/10/2025Thank for commenting Barry! And who knows, perhaps something wonderful could unfold for her.
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Denise Arnault
08/10/2025A lot of truth in this short but powerful example of how relationships leave many people feeling. We are left hoping that the stars will finally line up properly for her happily ever after.
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Kanesha Andrews
08/10/2025I don't know if that 'Happily Ever After' will ever come for her. But one can hope. And yes, this is about me.
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