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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 08/25/2025
DEEP DOWN BELOW
Born 1988, M, from ENGLAND, United Kingdom
One night I had a dream
About entering a hill side
In the Andes
Where was I heading?
Where was I going to end up?
I went through a passage
Which led to a cavern
With stalagmites and stalactites
And a lake in the centre
Beyond that point
There were caves and passages
Leading down and down
Into the bowels of the Earth
How far had I gone?
How deep was I now?
I did not know
At one point
I saw a purple light
At the end of a passage
I went towards the light
Until I reached the passage end
Beyond the passage
There was a vast cavern
Lit up by purple light
Gigantic crystals grew everywhere
And mighty tunnels branched
Off into the unknown
I longed to know
Where they led
But I never found out
Because the dream ended
About entering a hill side
In the Andes
Where was I heading?
Where was I going to end up?
I went through a passage
Which led to a cavern
With stalagmites and stalactites
And a lake in the centre
Beyond that point
There were caves and passages
Leading down and down
Into the bowels of the Earth
How far had I gone?
How deep was I now?
I did not know
At one point
I saw a purple light
At the end of a passage
I went towards the light
Until I reached the passage end
Beyond the passage
There was a vast cavern
Lit up by purple light
Gigantic crystals grew everywhere
And mighty tunnels branched
Off into the unknown
I longed to know
Where they led
But I never found out
Because the dream ended
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Shirley Smothers
08/25/2025I have dreams like this. I wish I could have closure with more of them. I felt like I was there with you. Excellent story. Satisfying read.
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BEN BROWN
08/26/2025I also have dreams like it. Thank you.
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