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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
  • Published: 08/27/2025

Lost Love

By Shelly Garrod
Born 1957, F, from Mesick Michigan, United States
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Lost Love
Bitter
and sweet
the memories burn
as I lie here
on the rippling water's edge
gazing over at the setting sun.
As it slowly descends upon the horizon
my aching heart melts over and over again.
The intense warm hues of the immensely painted sky
send burning memories of your soft long-lasting enduring embrace.
The emptiness I feel runs deep like the oceans stormy squalls.
Vast waves crashing on shore as my heart cries out for you.
No longer will we wrap our sensual bodies in pure intimacy.
Gone are the days we caress each other with affection.
As the sun sinks deeper it radiates fiery hues
scorching my every emotion of love and loneliness.
I reach out my arms for you
but only your memory I grasp.
Just sand through my fingertips.
Lost love forever intact
in my dreams.
Bitter and
Sweet
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Charlene Soper

03/12/2026

Oh how sweet, Everyone who lost a loved one can relate to this, Wee done just loved it

Oh how sweet, Everyone who lost a loved one can relate to this, Wee done just loved it

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Shelly Garrod

03/12/2026

Thanks Char. This poem came so easy to me. It was emotional to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Blessings, Shelly

Thanks Char. This poem came so easy to me. It was emotional to write. I'm glad you liked it.
Blessings, Shelly

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Kimberly Barnhart

02/09/2026

Beautiful Shelly! This must have been hard to write but very moving.

Beautiful Shelly! This must have been hard to write but very moving.

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Shelly Garrod

02/10/2026

Thanks Kim. Yes. It was a little emotional to write.
Blessings, Shelly

Thanks Kim. Yes. It was a little emotional to write.
Blessings, Shelly

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Holly hunt

10/27/2025

So beautiful! You can feel the emotions and the pain.

So beautiful! You can feel the emotions and the pain.

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Shelly Garrod

10/27/2025

Awe, thanks sweetie. Glad you enjoyed it. That poem his hard right now.
Blessings, Shelly

Awe, thanks sweetie. Glad you enjoyed it. That poem his hard right now.
Blessings, Shelly

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Gerald R Gioglio

09/02/2025

Beautiful, Shelly. I felt the sadness and longing. Happy StoryStar day.

Beautiful, Shelly. I felt the sadness and longing. Happy StoryStar day.

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Hi Gerald, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Much appreciated.
Blessings, Shelly

Hi Gerald, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Much appreciated.
Blessings, Shelly

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Kevin Hughes

09/02/2025

Congratulations Shelly!
Not only did I love the poem, but the intro and exit lines were brilliant. And suprisingly I liked the "Shape" of the Poem, as the phrases shaped a bell curve on its side. And that shape is apparent in all relationsships...a small beginning, a thicker middle, and a fade out at the end. It was a visual metaphor for me.

Lovely. Just lovely.

Congratulations Shelly!
Not only did I love the poem, but the intro and exit lines were brilliant. And suprisingly I liked the "Shape" of the Poem, as the phrases shaped a bell curve on its side. And that shape is apparent in all relationsships...a small beginning, a thicker middle, and a fade out at the end. It was a visual metaphor for me.

Lovely. Just lovely.

Smiles, Kevin

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Aww, thank you so much Kevin for your insightful comments. I'm really happy you enjoyed the poem. Yes, it was written in a little different format. I wanted this poem to show both happiness and sadness and I think I pulled that off in a unique way.Read More

Aww, thank you so much Kevin for your insightful comments. I'm really happy you enjoyed the poem. Yes, it was written in a little different format. I wanted this poem to show both happiness and sadness and I think I pulled that off in a unique way.
Blessings, Shelly

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Shirley Smothers

09/02/2025

Welcome back Shelly. A grand poem in a few words. Lovely and heartbreaking.
Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.

Welcome back Shelly. A grand poem in a few words. Lovely and heartbreaking.
Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Hi Shirley, I hope I'm back. I've had a lot going on the last couple of years that took me away from my writing. Now I have major 'writer's block.' Thats why I started with a short poem. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you.
Blessings, Shelly

Hi Shirley, I hope I'm back. I've had a lot going on the last couple of years that took me away from my writing. Now I have major 'writer's block.' Thats why I started with a short poem. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you.
Blessings, Shelly

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Jessica M.

09/02/2025

Excellent poem, Shelly! I hope you get over your writers block very soon and just enjoy writing again because you clearly do it so well!

Excellent poem, Shelly! I hope you get over your writers block very soon and just enjoy writing again because you clearly do it so well!

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Aww, thank you so much Jessica for your kind and inspirational words. I've sat at my lap top numerous times staring at a blank screen. The words just are not ready to flow yet. Hopefully soon. The poem was easy. Ideas for short stories are not. Glad... Read More

Aww, thank you so much Jessica for your kind and inspirational words. I've sat at my lap top numerous times staring at a blank screen. The words just are not ready to flow yet. Hopefully soon. The poem was easy. Ideas for short stories are not. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Blessing, Shelly

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Barry

09/02/2025

Nice sentiments. I like the way you structured the poem.

Nice sentiments. I like the way you structured the poem.

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Thank you so much Barry. Glad you enjoyed.
Blessings, Shelly

Thank you so much Barry. Glad you enjoyed.
Blessings, Shelly

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Cheryl Ryan

09/02/2025

Your words flow like tides between sorrow and light,
a dance of flame and salt upon fading night.
I feel the ache in each crashing wave,
yet also the beauty in the love you gave.
Though the sun sinks low, it promises rise,
hope painted softly across tommorow skies.

Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing!

Your words flow like tides between sorrow and light,
a dance of flame and salt upon fading night.
I feel the ache in each crashing wave,
yet also the beauty in the love you gave.
Though the sun sinks low, it promises rise,
hope painted softly across tommorow skies.

Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing!

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Thank you so much Cheryl. I love your added intake on the poem. Your words are filled with so much emotion. Wow!
Blessings, Shelly

Thank you so much Cheryl. I love your added intake on the poem. Your words are filled with so much emotion. Wow!
Blessings, Shelly

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CPlatt

09/02/2025

A powerful poem with some lovely imagery. Congrats on a well-deserved Star of the Day!

A powerful poem with some lovely imagery. Congrats on a well-deserved Star of the Day!

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Thanks Chris, always appreciate your comments.
Blessings, Shelly

Thanks Chris, always appreciate your comments.
Blessings, Shelly

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JD

09/01/2025

I love the emotion behind this short story, the beautiful way you've woven and constructed it, and especially the way you cleverly started with one word line building up word by word with each line to ten words, then all the way back down to one again. So well done. Happy short story star of the day, Shelly.

I love the emotion behind this short story, the beautiful way you've woven and constructed it, and especially the way you cleverly started with one word line building up word by word with each line to ten words, then all the way back down to one again. So well done. Happy short story star of the day, Shelly.

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Shelly Garrod

12/09/2025

Hopefully I can reach you this way. Hi JD, there seems to be a problem with my storystar site. On my home page the daily and weekly stories have been the same for over 2 weeks. Also, when I leave a comment or reply to someone who left a comment on m... Read More

Hopefully I can reach you this way. Hi JD, there seems to be a problem with my storystar site. On my home page the daily and weekly stories have been the same for over 2 weeks. Also, when I leave a comment or reply to someone who left a comment on my story I'm flagged, why? Hopefully you can figure out what's going on. Sorry to bother you with this. I've left questions on the 'contact us' page and no one has responded. I'm hoping you can find out what is wrong.
Thanks, Shelly

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Shelly Garrod

09/02/2025

Aww, thank you so much JD. Your words are very inspiring. There's been a lot going on in my life the last couple of years and some of those emotions and feelings went into this poem. I like this style of writing. I think it's more difficult than just... Read More

Aww, thank you so much JD. Your words are very inspiring. There's been a lot going on in my life the last couple of years and some of those emotions and feelings went into this poem. I like this style of writing. I think it's more difficult than just writing paragraphs. I believe this is my 4th story/poem written in this format. I find it challenging and fun. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem JD. Thank you for choosing this story for story of the day. It's always an honor. Thanks
Blessings, Shelly

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Marla

08/28/2025

Great job on this! Your word choice was excellent.

Great job on this! Your word choice was excellent.

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Shelly Garrod

08/28/2025

Aww thank you so much Marla. I haven't written anything in about 3 years due to personal and family issues. So I'm out of the swing of it. I'm having writers block for short stories so I thought I'd start with a poem. Thanks for your kind words. Read More

Aww thank you so much Marla. I haven't written anything in about 3 years due to personal and family issues. So I'm out of the swing of it. I'm having writers block for short stories so I thought I'd start with a poem. Thanks for your kind words.
Blessings, Shelly

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Pam Garcia

08/28/2025

So sad to lose the love of your life but still grateful for having it. So poignant.

So sad to lose the love of your life but still grateful for having it. So poignant.

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Shelly Garrod

08/28/2025

Lucky are the ones who find true love. And yes the loss can be bitter sweet.
Blessings, Shelly

Lucky are the ones who find true love. And yes the loss can be bitter sweet.
Blessings, Shelly

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