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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Pain / Problems / Adversity
- Published: 09/13/2025
The Crowded City Sidewalk
Born 1960, F, from San Antonio Texas, United States
I am on a crowded
city sidewalk,
the crowd squeezes,
shoves and pushes.
Like blood through
a too small artery.
Claustrophobia threatens
to swallow me.
A small opening appears, I
rush to it. But it quickly
fills in and once again,
the crowd squeezes, shoves
and pushes.
I reach my destination.
AWW, I have room. I
can breath! I am
safe for a few hours.
In too short a time
the rush of the too
small artery will begin
in the opposite direction.
city sidewalk,
the crowd squeezes,
shoves and pushes.
Like blood through
a too small artery.
Claustrophobia threatens
to swallow me.
A small opening appears, I
rush to it. But it quickly
fills in and once again,
the crowd squeezes, shoves
and pushes.
I reach my destination.
AWW, I have room. I
can breath! I am
safe for a few hours.
In too short a time
the rush of the too
small artery will begin
in the opposite direction.
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Aziz
09/23/2025Very deep meanings, Shirley. Your work let the readers build many and different interpretations.
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Shirley Smothers
09/23/2025Thank you Aziz. I love your words. I hope my words reach others the way they reach you. Thank you again.
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