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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Creatures & Monsters
- Published: 10/19/2025
Lucian and the Fliers
Born 1991, M, from Florida, United States
Lucian and the Fliers
The Dive
Lucian sits rigid in the cockpit of his modified P-51, the air thick with the smell of old fuel and ozone. He banks left, his gaze sweeping the unnatural expanse of mist below--a permanent, choking haze that defines the world after. His headset squeals, overriding the low thrum of the engine.
"Widowmaker... Ground teams confirm. The creature is the same one that wiped out Spiretown and Spiretower. Weapons hot, cleared to engage. Stop that thing before it reaches our settlements."
Lucian’s breath catches, heavy and cold. He sees his two wingmen, their faces grim behind their reflective visors. Flipping down his thermal and radar vision, he activates the comms. "Let's go, Cloud Fliers! Keep a safe distance and stay fast."
He shoves the stick forward. The P-51 pitches into a brutal, screaming dive.
In his HUD, the target is a hideous, glowing red and blue image. It looks like a primordial nightmare--a massive, reptilian skull-crawler with disproportionately powerful back legs. Lucian lines up the crosshairs.
Mist swirls violently around their wings. "Ready... open fire!" he orders the five aircraft in his formation. Time seems to stretch, the world hushed just before the storm.
With a mechanical click, the assault begins. The six synchronized tracer and armor-piercing fifty-caliber guns roar, momentarily carving holes of white light in the dense mist. The plane rattles violently around Lucian.
The rounds impact the creature's back with the sound of stones hitting steel--a sick pinging that chills him to the core. The red and green streaks ricochet, flying harmlessly away into the unknown fog.
"No Good!" Lucian’s voice cracks over the comms as he pulls the stick back, slamming the throttle open. The P-51 groans under the impossible G-force.
"The creature’s armored hide deflected the bullets like raindrops," he grits out.
Below, the massive beast swivels with instinctual, lethal fury. Its skull-like head turns, and its huge, antler-like growths--wet with mist--catch the dim light. Lucian glimpses the cruel, primal intelligence burning in its eyes as the six planes scream past.
"Break left! Break left!" a panicked voice--his wingman, 'Trash Can'--screams over the radio.
"No, pull up!" Lucian counters, but it's already too late.
The creature lunges. A horn-like antler tears a gash through the wing of his Number 3. An instant later, a red-orange burst of searing light explodes from within the mist. The dense vapor swirls violently, hiding the horrific outcome.
"Trash Can... you don't give the orders here," Lucian spits, his voice shaking with anger and grief. "Understand?"
The Hunting Pack
The remaining pilots form up around Lucian, their formation tight and grim in the sudden sunlight. The creature’s silhouette remains visible against the swirling gray clouds--a massive, unsettled purpose.
"We need to hit it where it's not armored," Lucian mutters, scanning the thermal readout. The head and underside glow a dangerous, vulnerable white against the red armor. "All of you, focus fire on its underbelly and head. Keep it disoriented." He banks hard, sweeping the formation around for another run.
He glances at his wingman's modified P-51, a Frankenstein machine held together by necessity, the twin 7.62 mini-guns mounted externally, manned by two exposed gunners. The sight is a stark reminder of their desperation.
The creature moves with terrifying speed through the mist below, glimpsed only in brief flashes as it leaps and sprints. Lucian’s heart pounds--the creature’s thermal signature is an angry red mass, occasionally flaring white when it snaps at the mist around it.
"On my mark," he says through the comm, his voice steady. "One... two... three--NOW!"
The air is instantly torn by the thunder of synchronized gunfire. All five aircraft unleash their weapons.
Just then, a clear, sharp female voice cuts through the chaos on the radio. "Rain Maker here. Heard you guys were in trouble. Had to ignore orders to come save you again, huh?"
Lucian smiles, the tension easing infinitesimally. "Patterson. If you had that F-22, why not just bomb this thing earlier?"
She scoffs. "Haven't you heard? I killed two just around our Spire in the Sky. Only have one missile left and the twenty-millimeter cannon. There are dozens of these things across the country."
He squints. "That's crazy."
A dense stream of bullets peppers the creature. It turns toward the threat to attack, but its softer head and chest take a long burst. The massive beast reels back. Thick, viscous ichor sprays from the wounds as it lets out an ear-splitting shriek that shakes the air. The pilots watch as it thrashes in the mist, momentarily stunned by the concentrated firepower.
"Yeah! Get some!" Patterson's voice crackles with excitement as she pulls into a punishing high-G turn, lining up her last missile.
"All units, break off!" she shouts, her tone turning urgent. "I'm going to finish this!"
She fires the missile as she pulls into a falling leaf maneuver. The ordnance streaks away into the mist and finishes the creature.
The Catch
A sudden, violent change in wind slams the Raptor. "Oh... that's not good at all." Patterson’s voice is sharp with focus. The F-22’s engines stall, and systems switch to battery power. "Lucian, have you ever done that parachute-capture rescue training? If I can't restart the engines, you're gonna have to use that hook for the wire grabs to catch my chute."
Lucian’s hands tighten on the controls, his voice steady. "Patterson, I've got the gear deployed." He signals his wingmen to form a protective circle around the falling aircraft. "Stay tight, boys. We're not losing her today."
He watches as Patterson initiates the emergency restart sequence. An orange light flashes. Success. Patterson rockets far above the mist, her gun raised, firing at the retreating black and gray bird-like creatures that were drawn by the conflict.
Lucian rolls his plane into a dive as her chute opens. The waiting creatures, sensing a vulnerable meal, swirl the vapors below.
His P-51 roars, the massive wire-grab hook deployed. The mist below churns and writhes with dozens of smaller, winged horrors. They swarm, drawn to the falling human.
"Patterson, I've got a visual on you," he calls. "You're about three hundred feet above the mist line. Ten seconds."
"Got it," she replies, her voice strained. "Those damn things are getting bolder. They're flying right up to my legs now."
The wire-grab hook glints in the sunlight. Lucian lines up the shot. "Almost there. Keep your arms and legs in tight--less wind resistance means less movement for me to account for."
"I'm coming up on the mist line," she warns.
Lucian pulls up into a stall maneuver. The hook swings out and snags the parachute lines. Pushing the power up and the nose forward, the chute stays caught, and Patterson is yanked hard, trailing behind the P-51. She pulls a tab, and a Kevlar fabric unravels, shielding her from the punishing wind as they ascend. The smaller creatures screech in frustration, their wings beating futilely against the retreating plane.
"I've got you," he assures her over the rushing air.
Groundfall and Blacklisting
As they near the air strip of his Spire, he climbs high. Patterson, cutting away her main chute and deploying her reserve, drifts to the safety of the Spire top runway. Lucian, Widowmaker, glides smoothly toward the landing strip.
Before the P-51 has even taxied to its hangar, the comms crackle with cold, official static. A new voice, clipped and severe, overrides all channels.
"Rain Maker--designation revoked. Due to insubordination, unauthorized engagement, and the non-sanctioned expenditure of a Mark IV air-to-ground ordnance... your security clearance for Spire-Alpha has been terminated. You are currently blacklisted from all major Spire settlements. Remain at your current location. An internal review panel will follow."
Patterson stands frozen on the pristine runway. Her home, her career in the high clouds--gone. Lucian cuts his engine. The sudden silence is deafening.
"You're stuck, Patterson," Lucian says, climbing out. "Welcome to the ground floor."
The Weight of the Walk
Patterson is escorted into the Walled Zone--a massive patchwork of steel and containers bolted to the Spire’s base. She still wears her flight suit, a symbol of the Mist of Spires, but down here, it only brings scorn.
"Look at her," a greasy mechanic mutters. "Cloud Dancer. Thinks she's better than us."
She tries to offer advice to a crew chief. "Need a hand? I’m certified for Raptor maintenance."
The chief glances up, spits near her boots. "Rain Maker, right? We don't need help from a spoiled high-flier who wastes ordnance and loses her plane. You’d scratch the chrome on the floor." He returns to his work, his message clear.
Later, near the central barracks, a grizzled scrounger named Mags is sorting metal.
"Hey, Mags," Patterson says, attempting civility. "That aluminum alloy looks like something from a Mark III transport. Light, but brittle."
Mags straightens up, his eyes hard. "Cloud Dancer. Talking about salvage like you know anything about earning it. We risk our lives down here for every ounce of metal, while you play hero and get your fancy jet clipped." He sneers. "Now get out of my way, ground walker. You’re bad luck."
Widowmaker Intervenes
Just as the insult hangs in the air, a metallic creak announces the arrival of Lucian. He stops a few feet away, sensing the sharp tension.
"Mags," Lucian says, his voice sharp. "What's the problem here?"
"This one. Spreading her bad luck around," Mags insists. "She needs to understand that down here, we work. We don’t just fall out of the sky and expect a parade."
Lucian steps closer to Patterson, shielding her slightly. "She fell out of the sky because she was doing your job, Mags." He looks directly at the scrounger, his authority silencing the surrounding workers.
"She’s Patterson, the one who killed the Spire Climber today--the same creature that wiped out Spiretown," Lucian states, projecting his voice into the sudden quiet. "That thing was armored like a tank, and our fifty-cals just bounced off. It was heading right for the bottom of this Spire."
He gestures back toward the churning mist. "Patterson ignored a direct order to stay away, risked her life, and put the only missile she had left right through that thing’s soft underside, stopping it cold. She saved your wives, your kids, and the metal you're sorting."
Lucian lets the information settle, then delivers the final, scathing blow. "And for that," he says, with clear scorn, "her own people blacklisted her. They stripped her of her rank and banned her from her home. She killed a city-killer to protect us, and they banished her for it."
He turns back to Mags, his gaze unyielding. "She’s stuck here. She is a Cloud Flier without a cloud, and she is the only reason we're not digging bodies out of the wreck right now. So you're going to treat her with the respect she earned, or you can find a new place to sort scrap. Understood?"
Mags looks from Lucian to Patterson, the weight of the story shifting the balance. He slowly lowers his arm. "Understood, Widowmaker."
Lucian nods, and Patterson, standing tall despite the humiliation, simply nods back.
.
.
.
The Dive
Lucian sits rigid in the cockpit of his modified P-51, the air thick with the smell of old fuel and ozone. He banks left, his gaze sweeping the unnatural expanse of mist below--a permanent, choking haze that defines the world after. His headset squeals, overriding the low thrum of the engine.
"Widowmaker... Ground teams confirm. The creature is the same one that wiped out Spiretown and Spiretower. Weapons hot, cleared to engage. Stop that thing before it reaches our settlements."
Lucian’s breath catches, heavy and cold. He sees his two wingmen, their faces grim behind their reflective visors. Flipping down his thermal and radar vision, he activates the comms. "Let's go, Cloud Fliers! Keep a safe distance and stay fast."
He shoves the stick forward. The P-51 pitches into a brutal, screaming dive.
In his HUD, the target is a hideous, glowing red and blue image. It looks like a primordial nightmare--a massive, reptilian skull-crawler with disproportionately powerful back legs. Lucian lines up the crosshairs.
Mist swirls violently around their wings. "Ready... open fire!" he orders the five aircraft in his formation. Time seems to stretch, the world hushed just before the storm.
With a mechanical click, the assault begins. The six synchronized tracer and armor-piercing fifty-caliber guns roar, momentarily carving holes of white light in the dense mist. The plane rattles violently around Lucian.
The rounds impact the creature's back with the sound of stones hitting steel--a sick pinging that chills him to the core. The red and green streaks ricochet, flying harmlessly away into the unknown fog.
"No Good!" Lucian’s voice cracks over the comms as he pulls the stick back, slamming the throttle open. The P-51 groans under the impossible G-force.
"The creature’s armored hide deflected the bullets like raindrops," he grits out.
Below, the massive beast swivels with instinctual, lethal fury. Its skull-like head turns, and its huge, antler-like growths--wet with mist--catch the dim light. Lucian glimpses the cruel, primal intelligence burning in its eyes as the six planes scream past.
"Break left! Break left!" a panicked voice--his wingman, 'Trash Can'--screams over the radio.
"No, pull up!" Lucian counters, but it's already too late.
The creature lunges. A horn-like antler tears a gash through the wing of his Number 3. An instant later, a red-orange burst of searing light explodes from within the mist. The dense vapor swirls violently, hiding the horrific outcome.
"Trash Can... you don't give the orders here," Lucian spits, his voice shaking with anger and grief. "Understand?"
The Hunting Pack
The remaining pilots form up around Lucian, their formation tight and grim in the sudden sunlight. The creature’s silhouette remains visible against the swirling gray clouds--a massive, unsettled purpose.
"We need to hit it where it's not armored," Lucian mutters, scanning the thermal readout. The head and underside glow a dangerous, vulnerable white against the red armor. "All of you, focus fire on its underbelly and head. Keep it disoriented." He banks hard, sweeping the formation around for another run.
He glances at his wingman's modified P-51, a Frankenstein machine held together by necessity, the twin 7.62 mini-guns mounted externally, manned by two exposed gunners. The sight is a stark reminder of their desperation.
The creature moves with terrifying speed through the mist below, glimpsed only in brief flashes as it leaps and sprints. Lucian’s heart pounds--the creature’s thermal signature is an angry red mass, occasionally flaring white when it snaps at the mist around it.
"On my mark," he says through the comm, his voice steady. "One... two... three--NOW!"
The air is instantly torn by the thunder of synchronized gunfire. All five aircraft unleash their weapons.
Just then, a clear, sharp female voice cuts through the chaos on the radio. "Rain Maker here. Heard you guys were in trouble. Had to ignore orders to come save you again, huh?"
Lucian smiles, the tension easing infinitesimally. "Patterson. If you had that F-22, why not just bomb this thing earlier?"
She scoffs. "Haven't you heard? I killed two just around our Spire in the Sky. Only have one missile left and the twenty-millimeter cannon. There are dozens of these things across the country."
He squints. "That's crazy."
A dense stream of bullets peppers the creature. It turns toward the threat to attack, but its softer head and chest take a long burst. The massive beast reels back. Thick, viscous ichor sprays from the wounds as it lets out an ear-splitting shriek that shakes the air. The pilots watch as it thrashes in the mist, momentarily stunned by the concentrated firepower.
"Yeah! Get some!" Patterson's voice crackles with excitement as she pulls into a punishing high-G turn, lining up her last missile.
"All units, break off!" she shouts, her tone turning urgent. "I'm going to finish this!"
She fires the missile as she pulls into a falling leaf maneuver. The ordnance streaks away into the mist and finishes the creature.
The Catch
A sudden, violent change in wind slams the Raptor. "Oh... that's not good at all." Patterson’s voice is sharp with focus. The F-22’s engines stall, and systems switch to battery power. "Lucian, have you ever done that parachute-capture rescue training? If I can't restart the engines, you're gonna have to use that hook for the wire grabs to catch my chute."
Lucian’s hands tighten on the controls, his voice steady. "Patterson, I've got the gear deployed." He signals his wingmen to form a protective circle around the falling aircraft. "Stay tight, boys. We're not losing her today."
He watches as Patterson initiates the emergency restart sequence. An orange light flashes. Success. Patterson rockets far above the mist, her gun raised, firing at the retreating black and gray bird-like creatures that were drawn by the conflict.
Lucian rolls his plane into a dive as her chute opens. The waiting creatures, sensing a vulnerable meal, swirl the vapors below.
His P-51 roars, the massive wire-grab hook deployed. The mist below churns and writhes with dozens of smaller, winged horrors. They swarm, drawn to the falling human.
"Patterson, I've got a visual on you," he calls. "You're about three hundred feet above the mist line. Ten seconds."
"Got it," she replies, her voice strained. "Those damn things are getting bolder. They're flying right up to my legs now."
The wire-grab hook glints in the sunlight. Lucian lines up the shot. "Almost there. Keep your arms and legs in tight--less wind resistance means less movement for me to account for."
"I'm coming up on the mist line," she warns.
Lucian pulls up into a stall maneuver. The hook swings out and snags the parachute lines. Pushing the power up and the nose forward, the chute stays caught, and Patterson is yanked hard, trailing behind the P-51. She pulls a tab, and a Kevlar fabric unravels, shielding her from the punishing wind as they ascend. The smaller creatures screech in frustration, their wings beating futilely against the retreating plane.
"I've got you," he assures her over the rushing air.
Groundfall and Blacklisting
As they near the air strip of his Spire, he climbs high. Patterson, cutting away her main chute and deploying her reserve, drifts to the safety of the Spire top runway. Lucian, Widowmaker, glides smoothly toward the landing strip.
Before the P-51 has even taxied to its hangar, the comms crackle with cold, official static. A new voice, clipped and severe, overrides all channels.
"Rain Maker--designation revoked. Due to insubordination, unauthorized engagement, and the non-sanctioned expenditure of a Mark IV air-to-ground ordnance... your security clearance for Spire-Alpha has been terminated. You are currently blacklisted from all major Spire settlements. Remain at your current location. An internal review panel will follow."
Patterson stands frozen on the pristine runway. Her home, her career in the high clouds--gone. Lucian cuts his engine. The sudden silence is deafening.
"You're stuck, Patterson," Lucian says, climbing out. "Welcome to the ground floor."
The Weight of the Walk
Patterson is escorted into the Walled Zone--a massive patchwork of steel and containers bolted to the Spire’s base. She still wears her flight suit, a symbol of the Mist of Spires, but down here, it only brings scorn.
"Look at her," a greasy mechanic mutters. "Cloud Dancer. Thinks she's better than us."
She tries to offer advice to a crew chief. "Need a hand? I’m certified for Raptor maintenance."
The chief glances up, spits near her boots. "Rain Maker, right? We don't need help from a spoiled high-flier who wastes ordnance and loses her plane. You’d scratch the chrome on the floor." He returns to his work, his message clear.
Later, near the central barracks, a grizzled scrounger named Mags is sorting metal.
"Hey, Mags," Patterson says, attempting civility. "That aluminum alloy looks like something from a Mark III transport. Light, but brittle."
Mags straightens up, his eyes hard. "Cloud Dancer. Talking about salvage like you know anything about earning it. We risk our lives down here for every ounce of metal, while you play hero and get your fancy jet clipped." He sneers. "Now get out of my way, ground walker. You’re bad luck."
Widowmaker Intervenes
Just as the insult hangs in the air, a metallic creak announces the arrival of Lucian. He stops a few feet away, sensing the sharp tension.
"Mags," Lucian says, his voice sharp. "What's the problem here?"
"This one. Spreading her bad luck around," Mags insists. "She needs to understand that down here, we work. We don’t just fall out of the sky and expect a parade."
Lucian steps closer to Patterson, shielding her slightly. "She fell out of the sky because she was doing your job, Mags." He looks directly at the scrounger, his authority silencing the surrounding workers.
"She’s Patterson, the one who killed the Spire Climber today--the same creature that wiped out Spiretown," Lucian states, projecting his voice into the sudden quiet. "That thing was armored like a tank, and our fifty-cals just bounced off. It was heading right for the bottom of this Spire."
He gestures back toward the churning mist. "Patterson ignored a direct order to stay away, risked her life, and put the only missile she had left right through that thing’s soft underside, stopping it cold. She saved your wives, your kids, and the metal you're sorting."
Lucian lets the information settle, then delivers the final, scathing blow. "And for that," he says, with clear scorn, "her own people blacklisted her. They stripped her of her rank and banned her from her home. She killed a city-killer to protect us, and they banished her for it."
He turns back to Mags, his gaze unyielding. "She’s stuck here. She is a Cloud Flier without a cloud, and she is the only reason we're not digging bodies out of the wreck right now. So you're going to treat her with the respect she earned, or you can find a new place to sort scrap. Understood?"
Mags looks from Lucian to Patterson, the weight of the story shifting the balance. He slowly lowers his arm. "Understood, Widowmaker."
Lucian nods, and Patterson, standing tall despite the humiliation, simply nods back.
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Cheryl Ryan
11/03/2025This is beautiful. The revelation that Patterson was both a savior and an outcast adds real emotional weight to the story. Thank you for sharing!
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Shirley Smothers
11/03/2025An exciting story. A well written Sci-Fi. I hope to read more on these people.
Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day!
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Jessica M.
11/03/2025A very thrilling story, Justin! Patterson saved the day and shouldn't be punished for it.
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Justin
11/06/2025Its a play on real corruption in politics. They can't replace the jet easily as she disobeyed orders and is the fall guy... they take her saving the settlements into consideration. Just banned from the superpower settlements and not in prison...
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