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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 10/19/2025
Strangers
Born 1964, F, from Gordon, ACT, Australia
She felt like killing someone. Just walking away from the house and stabbing a stranger in the neck, watching the fascination of their blood pooling, spreading.
She lit another cigarette and paced the garden, feeling the anxiety accelerate until she thought she would scream.
In the distance, sirens. Lots of sirens.
Screaming and shouting from not so far away, maybe the school oval?
The doorbell rang.
She threw the cigarette to the ground, opened the gate, and walked up the driveway to the front door.
A stranger was standing there.
She walked closer and stopped. The stranger had a knife.
Before she could move, he sprang at her and stabbed her in the neck, watching the fascination of her blood pooling and spreading.
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Cheryl Ryan
10/30/2025This was short and hauntingly effective! The buildup of tension was so well done; it really captured the feeling of anxiety turning into dread. Thank you for sharing!
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Hazel Dow
10/30/2025Thanks Cheryl, I was surprised at the love for this one, to be honest :) It was a very short one that wrote itself in my head in a couple of minutes flat.
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Hazel Dow
10/30/2025Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Just to be clear, I'm not a chain smoker or a homicidal maniac. Yet ...
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Shirley Smothers
10/30/2025Yikes! Did not expect this ending. Clever and Heart Stopping! Creative and scary.
Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Jason James Parker
10/23/2025Very cool. You've communicated so much with razor-sharp economy. Really dig this one.
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Hazel Dow
10/28/2025Thanks Jason, I wasn't so sure about this story, defo one of the shortest ones I've ever written! Thanks for your kind words :-) Cheers
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Denise Arnault
10/21/2025Oh that was it! What a turn around, AKA payback AKA karma, etc. Wow!
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Hazel Dow
10/20/2025Thanks JD, I wasn't very sure about this one. It just popped into my head and wrote itself in two minutes flat. Weather can do strange things to people! Cheers and thanks, Hazel
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JD
10/20/2025Nothing like karma for your thoughts! Wow.... this is very SHORT, but certainly among your darkest tales. Thanks for expelling the dark and dastardly thoughts from your brain onto Storystar, Hazel.
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