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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 12/30/2025
I drove along the road and suddenly I saw an old fashion dress shop that I had never seen before. Then I decided to take a look, hoping to find something special. Then I walked into the shop and the light in that shop was really pale. I saw some people walking around, the atmosphere in the shop was really cold and didn’t feel anything like the mall.
I looked around but I couldn’t find anything that suited me. So, I decided to leave. I walked to the exit and felt warmth near a room, that looked like a box make of glass. Inside that box, a dress displayed on a dress form caught my attention.
A red dress. It even looked like it was made of blood.
I walked in front of that box and stared at the dress. The dress itself looked alive and my reflection on the glass looked like I wearing that dress.
“Who even made that beautiful dress? It’s exactly my vibe”, I talked to myself.
Then, I decided to buy that incredible dress.
I opened the box, took the dress off from the dress form and walked to the counter to pay. I couldn’t even waste a second to calling the staff.
At the counter the sale staff was smiling and staring at me, she didn’t even blink and said: “You going to be the most beautiful one in that party and you’re going to get all the attentions”. Her voice was cracking and looked like haven’t drink water for weeks. I felt strange so, I bought that dress and came out from that shop quickly. On the way home, I imagined how beautiful I would be at the party.
On the night of the party, I wore that dress and looked at myself in the mirror. The asymmetric neckline swept across my collarbone; the warp-around neck design hugged my neck like a ribbon. The fabric clung gently to my frame. While I wore this dress, I felt so elegant and so comfortable and warm, I even felt like the dress became another layer of my skin. I was so satisfied with my look. Then I went to the party.
When I stepped into the party room, everyone stopped and stared at me, I was so proud of my dress. I enjoyed the best time of my life making new friends, drinking together and even dancing with a handsome guy. I could hear the romantic song, clinking of champagne glasses and the song of laughter from the people. We smiled and shared looks each other while we dance. I almost felt like time had frozen. This was the most perfect moment of my life; I had never been this happy before.
Suddenly, the light went off and the countdown started. Everybody prepared to shout “Happy New Year.”
10..9...8…7…6…
At that moment, I felt my dress getting tighter, the fabric around my neck started squeezing me. I tried to asked for help but I couldn’t make the sound. I couldn’t breathe. I tried to take the fabric off from my neck but I couldn’t. Every time I tried to move it, it only got tighter.
5.. 4.. 3.. 2..1…
Something fell from body.
I could see my body lying on the ground and the thing that had fallen from my body was my head.
Now it was twelve. Instead of new year cheers, the room was filled with the creepy screaming noises. The floor was covered with my blood, my blood-red dress had become even darker from soaking in it.
At that moment, I noticed the dress was never made with thread. It was woven from something that should never exist in our world. Now, I stand in the glass box, instead of the dress form and I will never know where my head is. Until the next customer with a same desire I once had.
After ten years of New Year….
A girl stands before the glass box…..
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Shirley Smothers
01/02/2026Yikes! I did not expect this. I love it. A creepy and spectacular story. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Kimbraith
01/02/2026Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it. Your words means a lot to me.
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Noah Redondo
01/02/2026This was very well-written. I love all of the tension that comes out even despite the positive feelings and this was creepy in a good way. Great job!
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Kimbraith
01/02/2026Thank you so much! I'm really glad you love the tension that's means a lot to me.
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Kanesha Andrews
01/02/2026Well written, immersive and creepy! Good Job and Congrats on being Story Star of the Day!
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Kimbraith
01/02/2026Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it.
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Kimbraith
01/02/2026Thank you so much! Building tension is something I really enjoy, so I'm really happy you felt it.
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Christopher Long
01/02/2026A very atmosphoric and creepy story, which reminds me of the work of Edgar Alan Poe nicely done! well done on being awrded Story Star of the Day Kimbraith
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Kimbraith
01/02/2026Thank you so much, Christopher! I truly appreciate your kind words. I'm really glad you enjoyed the atmosphere of my story. It means a lot to me.
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DA
01/01/2026you put all the elements of a good story in this short piece. Happy Story STAR of the Day!
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Kimbraith
01/01/2026Thank you so much! I'm really honored to be Story STAR of the Day. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and I really appreciate your encouragement.
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Kankana Kriti
12/30/2025This is a dark and twisted tale! The dress, with its mesmerizing beauty and sinister intent, is a masterful creation. The ending, with the protagonist trapped in the glass box, is haunting.
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Kimbraith
12/30/2025Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughtful comment. I'm really glad the ending stayed with you. Your words mean a lot to me.
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