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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 02/05/2026
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Born 2006, F, from ., Hungary
I watch the old lady on her balcony
While listening to Lana del Ray
She is watering her plants
To tackle the hours of this humid day.
I think about aging and I can’t help
But feel a sort of sorrow and dread
I think about walking down the street
Slowly carrying my weekly bread.
I think about losing track of time
In an unforgiving world that
Leaves you behind with memories
Carrying you on their back.
And I think about counting down
The dormant days of summer
Knowing very well
You’re fading away forever.
I look at the old lady
Watering her dead flowers
They must hold a fragment of time
A fragment that perfectly devours.
While listening to Lana del Ray
She is watering her plants
To tackle the hours of this humid day.
I think about aging and I can’t help
But feel a sort of sorrow and dread
I think about walking down the street
Slowly carrying my weekly bread.
I think about losing track of time
In an unforgiving world that
Leaves you behind with memories
Carrying you on their back.
And I think about counting down
The dormant days of summer
Knowing very well
You’re fading away forever.
I look at the old lady
Watering her dead flowers
They must hold a fragment of time
A fragment that perfectly devours.
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Kankana Kriti
02/05/2026This poem is a poignant reflection on aging, mortality, and the passage of time !!
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