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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Friends / Friendship
- Published: 12/03/2010
The Longest Journey
Born 1998, F, from Vic, AustraliaThe Longest Journey
Chapter 1: The Journey
This story is a journey of four friends with secret crushes. Romance and tests of friendship; everything will be put to the ultimate test for bravery, sacrifices, confidence and especially friendship. It takes place at a cafe of where four friends hang out. Their names were Rose, Angel, Eric and Cameron.
They were sitting down at their table talking. Cameron has a crush on Angel and Angel has a crush on Cameron but they don’t know they have a crush on each other. And Rose and Eric also didn’t know that they had a crush on each other. Anyway, back to the story... so they were sitting at their table talking when Angel pulled out a book that said, 'The longest Journey'. Rose said, “what about it?” Angel then answered, “well why don’t we go on the longest journey?” Cameron said, “that’s a great idea, we will go tomorrow.”
Angel said, “then it's set, we will go.” So they set off for The Longest Journey. They all got packed but little did they know there was going to be a test of trust, friendship and bravery. Angel then called Cameron and said “hey Cameron you want to come with me to the shop to get some equipment for the trip?” Cameron then replied “sure.” Angel then replied “Great meet you there soon.”
Angel and Cameron meet at the shop. But when they entered the shop Angel didn’t notice the wet sign and when she was about to fall Cameron caught her in his arms. Angel then said “thanks Cam.” Cameron answered “that’s okay, as long as you’re safe that’s all that matters to me.” A few hours later they got what they needed and called Rose and Eric to get ready.
Chapter 2: We're Superhero’s
A few hours later they got to the mountain and put on what they needed to climb the mountain. Angel went first, then Rose, next was Cameron, lastly was Eric. When they were climbing the mountain Eric and Cameron’s harness got lost and they fell off the mountain. Angel and Rose said “noooooo.” Before they reached the bottom Angel and Rose transformed into superhero’s. Angel had the dragon fire power and Rose had Ice powers.
So when they finished transforming they caught Eric and Cameron and put them back on their harness, and put it tighter for them so they won’t fall off the mountain again. Once they reached the top of the mountain Cameron said, “you two are superhero’s". Angel said, “yep, I have the strongest power, it’s called dragon fire, and Rose has Ice powers. It’s not the strongest, but it will do for her.” Eric and Cameron said, “well that’s cool. We always thought you both were special ever since we became friends with both of you.”
When they reached the top of the mountain it started raining. Rose said, “well, we're stuck here until the rain stops so we might as well sleep here for the night.” Later, while it was still dark, Cameron woke up and went over to Angel and said, “hey are you up? I need to talk to you.” Angel then woke up and said “okay.”
Cameron said, “Angel, I like you a lot and, if you want to, do you want to be my girlfriend?” Angel then said, “I would love to. I’ve been waiting for you to ask me that question.” Then they hugged and went back to sleep. Then all of a sudden Eric woke up and asked if Rose was still up, and guess what Eric asked Rose? The same thing what Cameron asked Angel a while ago. And Rose said yes.
Chapter 3: The Waterfall
Then the next day they all woke up and Angel and Cameron said to Eric and Rose that they were boyfriend and girlfriend now, and Eric and Rose said they were boyfriend and girlfriend too, and they were all happy for each other. At 3:00pm they continued their journey. They left the mountain and continued on foot. They reached the waterfalls. Angel found a map in the book. Rose then asked, “why have we stopped?” Angel said, “because we can’t get through. It says right here in the book that there is no way of getting through the waterfall.” All of a sudden, when Angel and Rose were about to give up, Angel then flicked through the pages and found a way to get in. She then said to everyone, “hey wait, I found a way to get in. Rose and I must transform and use our powers.” So they transformed and Rose used her ice powers to make an ice fall, then Angel used her fire ball to break through, then their powers combined with each other and they broke through the waterfall. Rose and Angel flew while Cameron and Eric went on foot. But Angel then said, “hey Cameron and Eric, do you want a lift?.” They both said “okay.” So Angel summoned her dragon so Cameron could fly on the dragon, and Rose summoned her ice board so Eric went on the ice board and they got to their next stop quicker.
Chapter 4: Legendary Trees of Faith and Hope
They reached the legendary trees of faith and hope. Rose and Angel said, “this place is so beautiful.” Angel said “The book says it’s the legendary tress of hope and faith. It’s where it brings everyone who ever comes here hope and faith forever.” Eric then said, “guys look, the trees are dead.” Rose replied, “but how did they die?” Angel then looked through her book and found the page and said to Rose, Cameron and Eric, “the book says the trees can only die if they are destroyed.” So Rose and Angel walked over to the trees and touched them. When Angel touched the tree she saw what happened. She then said to all of them, “guys, I know what happened... a man came here, he was very angry at someone or something, and he took all that anger out on the trees and destroyed them. It’s like whenever I touch someone or something I can see what happened in the past, present and future.” Rose replied, “Angel, this means you have a new power.” Angel then said, “that’s so cool.” Cameron said, “is there any way you can bring the trees back to life?” Rose said, “maybe I could use some of my power to bring it back to life.” So Rose used all of her powers to try to bring the trees back to life, but it didn’t work so Angel summoned her dragon and used all of her powers and it worked. When the trees where alive again they where all given faith and hope.
Chapter 5: The Guardian of Hawks Nest
After, they traveled to their next destination, which was Hawks Nest. A few hours later they reached Hawks Nest, then Cameron asked, “why is it called Hawks Nest if there’s nothing here?” Angel explained, “they call it Hawks Nest because somewhere on this island there is a guardian hawk which watches over the island to keep it safe from intruders and whoever wishes to destroy it.” Eric asked, “Angel, if the hawk watches over the island to keep intruders out then won't the hawk attack us?” Angel said, “You are right, the hawk will attack us. Quickly, we have to find somewhere to hide before the hawk see’s us.” So they all went to hide, but before they could they hawk saw them and started to attack them. But before the hawk could attack them Angel and Rose quickly used a forcefield around them. Rose then tried to communicate with the hawk and it worked. When the hawk heard what she had to say he just went away and let them pass.
Chapter 6: Bravery, Confidence, Sacrifice = The Mythical Island
When they left they continued on to their final and last part of the journey. The only way they can get off this island is they have to have bravery, confidence, and must make a sacrifice. The island is called… the Mythical Island. Once they reached the island Rose said, “wow it’s so beautiful.” Indeed, Rose was right about the island being beautiful, but on some islands there’s always a story, and traps. So when they were walking they stepped on a trap and they unleashed a humongous monster called the Fury. And the Fury was the strongest monster in the world. Eric, Rose, Angel and Cameron where all scared. But then Cameron said, “guys, we can defeat this monster if we just stay brave, because we have Eric, who is a master at karate, and Angel and Rose, who are superhero’s. So we don’t have to be scared. I will come up with a plan". A few minutes later Cameron came up with a plan and said, “okay Eric, I want you to sneak up to the monster and find his weakness, while Angel and Rose distract him by using their powers. And once you've found his weakness, Angel and Rose will combine their power and attack at the same time. So, have you all got the plan?” Eric, Angel and Rose replied all together “yes.” So they all did what Cameron told them to do. But then when Angel and Rose where about to attack the monster they saw the monster was about to attack Cameron. But before he could, Angel flew to Cameron and got him away from the monster, and when she did Angel was hurt. She had a big cut where her waist was. Cameron said in anger to the monster, “she sacrificed her life for me and got hurt and now you must pay.” Cameron said to Rose, “Rose I want you to attack the Fury so he can pay for what he did.” So Rose agreed to do it. But when she went to attack the Fury, to make him pay for what he did to her best friend, she first tried to communicate with the monster to see why he attacked them. When she found out she told Cameron, “Cam, he only attacked us because this is his island and he thought we were the one’s attacking his island.” Cameron replied, “alright I believe him, but how are we going to heal Angel?” Rose then came up with an idea. “I think I can heal her, I’ve tried to do it before, but I just ended up getting scared.” So Rose healed Angel, and Angel then thanked Cameron and Rose for helping her. Angel then said, “guys, this is the end of our journey. I think we should head back home.” A few hours later they made it back to their home safely.
Chapter 7: 10 Years Later
Ten years later Cameron and Angel got married and had a little baby girl named Isabella. Eric and Rose also got married and had a little baby boy and girl. The boy’s name was Daniel and the girls name was Hannah. Hannah, Isabella and Daniel also had powers. It turns out these little kids will end up having a little journey of their own.
The Longest Journey(rachael bajada)
The Longest Journey
Chapter 1: The Journey
This story is a journey of four friends with secret crushes. Romance and tests of friendship; everything will be put to the ultimate test for bravery, sacrifices, confidence and especially friendship. It takes place at a cafe of where four friends hang out. Their names were Rose, Angel, Eric and Cameron.
They were sitting down at their table talking. Cameron has a crush on Angel and Angel has a crush on Cameron but they don’t know they have a crush on each other. And Rose and Eric also didn’t know that they had a crush on each other. Anyway, back to the story... so they were sitting at their table talking when Angel pulled out a book that said, 'The longest Journey'. Rose said, “what about it?” Angel then answered, “well why don’t we go on the longest journey?” Cameron said, “that’s a great idea, we will go tomorrow.”
Angel said, “then it's set, we will go.” So they set off for The Longest Journey. They all got packed but little did they know there was going to be a test of trust, friendship and bravery. Angel then called Cameron and said “hey Cameron you want to come with me to the shop to get some equipment for the trip?” Cameron then replied “sure.” Angel then replied “Great meet you there soon.”
Angel and Cameron meet at the shop. But when they entered the shop Angel didn’t notice the wet sign and when she was about to fall Cameron caught her in his arms. Angel then said “thanks Cam.” Cameron answered “that’s okay, as long as you’re safe that’s all that matters to me.” A few hours later they got what they needed and called Rose and Eric to get ready.
Chapter 2: We're Superhero’s
A few hours later they got to the mountain and put on what they needed to climb the mountain. Angel went first, then Rose, next was Cameron, lastly was Eric. When they were climbing the mountain Eric and Cameron’s harness got lost and they fell off the mountain. Angel and Rose said “noooooo.” Before they reached the bottom Angel and Rose transformed into superhero’s. Angel had the dragon fire power and Rose had Ice powers.
So when they finished transforming they caught Eric and Cameron and put them back on their harness, and put it tighter for them so they won’t fall off the mountain again. Once they reached the top of the mountain Cameron said, “you two are superhero’s". Angel said, “yep, I have the strongest power, it’s called dragon fire, and Rose has Ice powers. It’s not the strongest, but it will do for her.” Eric and Cameron said, “well that’s cool. We always thought you both were special ever since we became friends with both of you.”
When they reached the top of the mountain it started raining. Rose said, “well, we're stuck here until the rain stops so we might as well sleep here for the night.” Later, while it was still dark, Cameron woke up and went over to Angel and said, “hey are you up? I need to talk to you.” Angel then woke up and said “okay.”
Cameron said, “Angel, I like you a lot and, if you want to, do you want to be my girlfriend?” Angel then said, “I would love to. I’ve been waiting for you to ask me that question.” Then they hugged and went back to sleep. Then all of a sudden Eric woke up and asked if Rose was still up, and guess what Eric asked Rose? The same thing what Cameron asked Angel a while ago. And Rose said yes.
Chapter 3: The Waterfall
Then the next day they all woke up and Angel and Cameron said to Eric and Rose that they were boyfriend and girlfriend now, and Eric and Rose said they were boyfriend and girlfriend too, and they were all happy for each other. At 3:00pm they continued their journey. They left the mountain and continued on foot. They reached the waterfalls. Angel found a map in the book. Rose then asked, “why have we stopped?” Angel said, “because we can’t get through. It says right here in the book that there is no way of getting through the waterfall.” All of a sudden, when Angel and Rose were about to give up, Angel then flicked through the pages and found a way to get in. She then said to everyone, “hey wait, I found a way to get in. Rose and I must transform and use our powers.” So they transformed and Rose used her ice powers to make an ice fall, then Angel used her fire ball to break through, then their powers combined with each other and they broke through the waterfall. Rose and Angel flew while Cameron and Eric went on foot. But Angel then said, “hey Cameron and Eric, do you want a lift?.” They both said “okay.” So Angel summoned her dragon so Cameron could fly on the dragon, and Rose summoned her ice board so Eric went on the ice board and they got to their next stop quicker.
Chapter 4: Legendary Trees of Faith and Hope
They reached the legendary trees of faith and hope. Rose and Angel said, “this place is so beautiful.” Angel said “The book says it’s the legendary tress of hope and faith. It’s where it brings everyone who ever comes here hope and faith forever.” Eric then said, “guys look, the trees are dead.” Rose replied, “but how did they die?” Angel then looked through her book and found the page and said to Rose, Cameron and Eric, “the book says the trees can only die if they are destroyed.” So Rose and Angel walked over to the trees and touched them. When Angel touched the tree she saw what happened. She then said to all of them, “guys, I know what happened... a man came here, he was very angry at someone or something, and he took all that anger out on the trees and destroyed them. It’s like whenever I touch someone or something I can see what happened in the past, present and future.” Rose replied, “Angel, this means you have a new power.” Angel then said, “that’s so cool.” Cameron said, “is there any way you can bring the trees back to life?” Rose said, “maybe I could use some of my power to bring it back to life.” So Rose used all of her powers to try to bring the trees back to life, but it didn’t work so Angel summoned her dragon and used all of her powers and it worked. When the trees where alive again they where all given faith and hope.
Chapter 5: The Guardian of Hawks Nest
After, they traveled to their next destination, which was Hawks Nest. A few hours later they reached Hawks Nest, then Cameron asked, “why is it called Hawks Nest if there’s nothing here?” Angel explained, “they call it Hawks Nest because somewhere on this island there is a guardian hawk which watches over the island to keep it safe from intruders and whoever wishes to destroy it.” Eric asked, “Angel, if the hawk watches over the island to keep intruders out then won't the hawk attack us?” Angel said, “You are right, the hawk will attack us. Quickly, we have to find somewhere to hide before the hawk see’s us.” So they all went to hide, but before they could they hawk saw them and started to attack them. But before the hawk could attack them Angel and Rose quickly used a forcefield around them. Rose then tried to communicate with the hawk and it worked. When the hawk heard what she had to say he just went away and let them pass.
Chapter 6: Bravery, Confidence, Sacrifice = The Mythical Island
When they left they continued on to their final and last part of the journey. The only way they can get off this island is they have to have bravery, confidence, and must make a sacrifice. The island is called… the Mythical Island. Once they reached the island Rose said, “wow it’s so beautiful.” Indeed, Rose was right about the island being beautiful, but on some islands there’s always a story, and traps. So when they were walking they stepped on a trap and they unleashed a humongous monster called the Fury. And the Fury was the strongest monster in the world. Eric, Rose, Angel and Cameron where all scared. But then Cameron said, “guys, we can defeat this monster if we just stay brave, because we have Eric, who is a master at karate, and Angel and Rose, who are superhero’s. So we don’t have to be scared. I will come up with a plan". A few minutes later Cameron came up with a plan and said, “okay Eric, I want you to sneak up to the monster and find his weakness, while Angel and Rose distract him by using their powers. And once you've found his weakness, Angel and Rose will combine their power and attack at the same time. So, have you all got the plan?” Eric, Angel and Rose replied all together “yes.” So they all did what Cameron told them to do. But then when Angel and Rose where about to attack the monster they saw the monster was about to attack Cameron. But before he could, Angel flew to Cameron and got him away from the monster, and when she did Angel was hurt. She had a big cut where her waist was. Cameron said in anger to the monster, “she sacrificed her life for me and got hurt and now you must pay.” Cameron said to Rose, “Rose I want you to attack the Fury so he can pay for what he did.” So Rose agreed to do it. But when she went to attack the Fury, to make him pay for what he did to her best friend, she first tried to communicate with the monster to see why he attacked them. When she found out she told Cameron, “Cam, he only attacked us because this is his island and he thought we were the one’s attacking his island.” Cameron replied, “alright I believe him, but how are we going to heal Angel?” Rose then came up with an idea. “I think I can heal her, I’ve tried to do it before, but I just ended up getting scared.” So Rose healed Angel, and Angel then thanked Cameron and Rose for helping her. Angel then said, “guys, this is the end of our journey. I think we should head back home.” A few hours later they made it back to their home safely.
Chapter 7: 10 Years Later
Ten years later Cameron and Angel got married and had a little baby girl named Isabella. Eric and Rose also got married and had a little baby boy and girl. The boy’s name was Daniel and the girls name was Hannah. Hannah, Isabella and Daniel also had powers. It turns out these little kids will end up having a little journey of their own.
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