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A cold breeze flows my way

By Quin Rose
Born 2015, F, from Kentucky, United States
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A cold breeze flows my way,

Another cold day.

"Taylor!" I hear my mom say.

I run in a scrurry,

For I have to hurry.

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Shelly Garrod

04/07/2026

A good start Quin. The more you read other's poems the better you'll get at writing yours. Good job.
Blessings, Shelly

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Quin Rose

04/07/2026

Okay, thanks!

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Shelly Garrod

04/07/2026

Good for you Quin. I look forward to reading it. I have a few poems written. Please feel free to read them. Just search my name on the author line and it will bring up my stories and poems. Happy reading. Hope you enjoy them.
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Quin Rose

04/07/2026

Thank you! I will probably make another poem after I read more!

Barry

04/05/2026

A very nice beginning! Remember, the best way to learn to write good poetry is to read other people's poems. Good job!

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Quin Rose

04/05/2026

Thank you, Barry! I'll will definitely read other poems!

Quin Rose

04/03/2026

This is my poem I made up! I hope you like it! Please write down your thoughts on it! I'll take the criticism!

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Quin Rose

04/04/2026

Thanks for 1 like! It means a lot!

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