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  • Story Listed as: True Life For G rated stories
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: General Interest
  • Published: 05/09/2026

Conversations

By Denise Arnault
Born 1950, from Arlington, TX, United States
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Conversations

In some ways the interaction between the author and the reader is like a disconnected slow conversation.

 

The author pours their thoughts and hopes into a story and releases it into the ether, to be read, and thought about by an unknown audience, or possibly even ignored. The author's lives continue down their path, other tales taking shape in their minds and sometimes being born into print, or at least text. All the while, there are the nagging questions in the back of the mind, ‘Did they like it?’ ‘Did they understand what I was saying?’ 'Do they want me to write another one?'

 

When the reader comments on a story, the tale becomes not just something told, but is now part of a conversation between author and audience. Every author craves this feedback. They have spent the hours of their lives molding simple words into a story and want to know that someone somewhere found the work worthwhile. Waiting for validation of their work is a lonely feeling. We've all felt it.

 

I was reading Tim Norland’s tribute to JD today, The Galactic Shortlist, which got me to thinking about the things that she imparted to me about StoryStar. One of these things was the lack of comments by readers. She had gone so far as to hire a couple of commentators for a few months to try to get some momentum going. I think that one of the primary reasons that she chose me to carry on for her was that I tend to make some kind of comment on almost every story that I read.

 

I believe that the author deserves to hear from us how we felt about their story. Was their effort worth it? 

 

I challenge each of you to be more considerate of our authors and to join their conversations. Give a comment. Say what you liked or didn’t like about a story. Offer advice if improvement is warranted. Offer praise if the story was particularly good at something. If you read a story all the way to the end, surely there was something about it worth mentioning, and if you couldn’t stand to read the entire story, then there is a way to say that without stepping too hard on toes! Any feedback is better than no feedback. To paraphrase P.T. Barnum, Say what you will about a story, just spell the word right. Without constructive criticism, how will our authors get better?

 

 

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Kevin Hughes

05/11/2026

Aloha DA,
Way back in the Day JD thanked me for commenting on so many stories. She also commented on thousands of stories. But her comments were some of the most valuable, honest, and credible critiques I ever read. I wasn't at that level. My input is usually either I liked it, or I didn't. I couldn't correct grammar, since mine is atrocious. Nor could I talk about technical skills like mu...
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Aloha DA,
Way back in the Day JD thanked me for commenting on so many stories. She also commented on thousands of stories. But her comments were some of the most valuable, honest, and credible critiques I ever read. I wasn't at that level. My input is usually either I liked it, or I didn't. I couldn't correct grammar, since mine is atrocious. Nor could I talk about technical skills like multiple drafts, since I don't write like that. But what I could do, was encourage people to keep writing.
And if you read down through this entire thread, there is a truly great display of understanding the roles that the Reader and the Writer share. We write. They read. And the Reader sometimes sees the story, or characters differently. So discoveries can be made on either side, after the creation is already done.

Sometimes, I don't make my endings tie up all the details, because I feel (like most of the thread) that the Reader has to use some imagination, brain power, and focus too. Acitve participation in the cycle of Writer, Reader, thoughts. So glad you posted this.

Smiles, Kevin

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Denise Arnault

05/22/2026

Well said for someone who professes not to have much advice to give!

Well said for someone who professes not to have much advice to give!

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Shelly Garrod

05/10/2026

Very well said Denise. Commenting on each other's stories keeps us connected. I appreciate when other authors/readers comment and critique my writing. It helps me to grow as a writer. I just love Story Star for so many reasons. I was so happy when I found this writing platform where anyone can write and share their stories.
Blessings, Shelly

Very well said Denise. Commenting on each other's stories keeps us connected. I appreciate when other authors/readers comment and critique my writing. It helps me to grow as a writer. I just love Story Star for so many reasons. I was so happy when I found this writing platform where anyone can write and share their stories.
Blessings, Shelly

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Denise Arnault

05/10/2026

Exactly!

Exactly!

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Kanesha Andrews

05/10/2026

This exactly why I love Story Star. Not only because of essay like this. Because here, I found a place for people who actually read my stories. My stories found a place. I try to read as much as I can and leave feedback. I know for me, reading comments on my stories is always a good thing. It means that someone read it.

Wonderfully said, Denise!

This exactly why I love Story Star. Not only because of essay like this. Because here, I found a place for people who actually read my stories. My stories found a place. I try to read as much as I can and leave feedback. I know for me, reading comments on my stories is always a good thing. It means that someone read it.

Wonderfully said, Denise!

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Denise Arnault

05/10/2026

Thanks Kanesha! I knew that you would get it.

Thanks Kanesha! I knew that you would get it.

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Shirley Smothers

05/10/2026

Story Star allows amateur writers like me to share creativity. No other websites allow this creative freedom.

Story Star allows amateur writers like me to share creativity. No other websites allow this creative freedom.

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Denise Arnault

05/10/2026

I too was so excited to find a place where I could write my stories my way and just put them out there. I told JD thank you so many times for giving us this space.

I too was so excited to find a place where I could write my stories my way and just put them out there. I told JD thank you so many times for giving us this space.

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Donald Harry Roberts

05/10/2026

There are so many benefits to Story Star and one is reviews and critiques.....each improves an author in its own way... Your essay was an inspiration...Thanks for giving the concept a boost...

There are so many benefits to Story Star and one is reviews and critiques.....each improves an author in its own way... Your essay was an inspiration...Thanks for giving the concept a boost...

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Denise Arnault

05/10/2026

You're welcome!

You're welcome!

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Francys Wagner

05/10/2026

At first, when I was writing a story, I used to think how the reader would react to the world I had created. Eventually, i realised it's a fifty-fifty process—50% the author's creation, 50% the reader's imagination.
the writer doens't deliver a story, but a plot. Each reader interprets it according to their own world, and therein lies the magic.
Over the years, that's what has inspi...
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At first, when I was writing a story, I used to think how the reader would react to the world I had created. Eventually, i realised it's a fifty-fifty process—50% the author's creation, 50% the reader's imagination.
the writer doens't deliver a story, but a plot. Each reader interprets it according to their own world, and therein lies the magic.
Over the years, that's what has inspired me to write.
What's more, when I read other author's work, I reimagine in my head the way I'd like them to be, or the way I think would work better for the story, and this is, certainly, a source of inspiration.
Otherwise, posting my stories here on StoryStar has been fruitful. The feedback, whether positive or critical, has been very encouraging.

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Denise Arnault

05/10/2026

I like that interpretation. I had not considered the reader's imagination as much as I should. That is probably why I'm so bad at 'show and not tell'!

I like that interpretation. I had not considered the reader's imagination as much as I should. That is probably why I'm so bad at 'show and not tell'!

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Kristin Dockar

05/10/2026

For me Storystar was a place to put my stories, and one of the attractions was that people of all ages and from all over the world were contributing. It's brave to put your work out there and that's to be appreciated and applauded.

For me Storystar was a place to put my stories, and one of the attractions was that people of all ages and from all over the world were contributing. It's brave to put your work out there and that's to be appreciated and applauded.

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Denise Arnault

05/10/2026

I agree with you 100% about it being brave to put your work out there. I still remember the feeling of trepidation when I was preparing to publish my first story.

I agree with you 100% about it being brave to put your work out there. I still remember the feeling of trepidation when I was preparing to publish my first story.

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DA

05/09/2026

With another contest coming up it is very important to remember to comment and vote for the stories by selecting how many stars to give each story. Happy Story STAR of the Day!

With another contest coming up it is very important to remember to comment and vote for the stories by selecting how many stars to give each story. Happy Story STAR of the Day!

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Barry

05/09/2026

Denise,
You just said something I have been thinking for quite a long time. When critiqueing someones offerings here on Story Star, I try to offer one of two things: either praise specifically directed at some aspect of their prose (i.e. I tend to get a bit pedantic) or constructive criticism where merited with the younger writers.

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Denise,
You just said something I have been thinking for quite a long time. When critiqueing someones offerings here on Story Star, I try to offer one of two things: either praise specifically directed at some aspect of their prose (i.e. I tend to get a bit pedantic) or constructive criticism where merited with the younger writers.

Your thoughts are clear, concise and to the point. Readers crave feedback. It's not about ego but rather the craft of writing, putting black on white.

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Denise Arnault

05/09/2026

Thanks Barry! I'm glad it was not just me thinking so.

Thanks Barry! I'm glad it was not just me thinking so.

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