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- Story Listed as: Fiction For G rated stories
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Novels
- Published: 05/31/2026
By: D. H. Roberts
The Woman In The Velvet Booth
The Golden Comet carried its usual evening hum. Not loud. Not quiet. Just the steady rhythm of a place where travellers drifted in from the cold frontier looking for warmth, cards, or a drink strong enough to make them forget the long dark outside. Jack Valliant stood behind the bar with a small toolkit open beside him. A loose panel near the drink taps had been rattling for two days. He had ignored it for one day too many.
Boy moved through the room with smooth, precise steps. The android carried a tray of glasses clinking softly as he passed the card tables. His eyes glowed with a faint blue light, bright enough to show awareness but soft enough not to unsettle the guests. He paused near a booth upholstered in deep red velvet. A woman sat alone there, her fingers resting lightly on a deck of cards. She shuffled them with a grace that suggested long practice.
Jack watched her for a moment. She had arrived an hour earlier without a word. She had taken the booth without asking. She had ordered a drink without looking up. She had played cards against herself as if the game mattered more than the world around her. People like that always carried stories. Some were harmless. Some were not.
Boy approached the bar and set the tray down. He leaned in slightly.
“She keeps looking at the door,” Boy said. His voice was calm, but Jack heard the concern beneath it.
Jack tightened a screw on the panel. “Lots of people look at the door.”
“Not like this,” Boy said. “She looks as if she expects someone. Or fears someone.”
Jack glanced toward the booth again. The woman’s eyes flicked to the entrance, then back to her cards. Her face remained unreadable, but her shoulders held a tension that did not belong to a casual gambler.
“Keep an eye on her,” Jack said.
Boy nodded and returned to the floor.
The door slid open with a soft hiss. A pair of miners stepped inside, shaking frost from their coats. They laughed about something and headed for the bar. The woman in the velvet booth did not react. She shuffled her cards again, slower this time.
Jack poured drinks for the miners and listened to their chatter. Ice yields on Pluto were down. A Comet Ranger had lost a tow line and nearly lost his life. A free floating colony had drifted off its usual path. Frontier talk. Nothing unusual.
Boy returned to the bar. He held something small in his hand.
“She gave me this,” Boy said.
Jack set down a glass. “What is it?”
“A data chit. She slipped it into my hand when I passed her table.”
Jack took the chit. It was plain, unmarked, the kind used for simple messages. He slid it into the reader under the bar. A single line of text appeared on the small screen.
Help me.
Jack stared at the words. No name. No details. Just the plea.
He looked toward the booth. The woman did not meet his gaze. She continued her quiet game, but her fingers trembled slightly as she placed a card on the table.
“Boy,” Jack said, “tell her I will speak with her. Quietly. Back hall.”
Boy nodded and walked toward the booth.
Jack closed the toolkit and wiped his hands on a cloth. He stepped out from behind the bar and moved toward the corridor that led behind the kitchen. The lights there were dimmer, the air cooler. It was a place for private words, not public scenes.
He waited.
Footsteps approached. Boy appeared first, guiding the woman with a gentle gesture. She moved with controlled grace, but her eyes darted toward the shadows as if expecting danger to step out at any moment.
Jack nodded to Boy. “Give us a moment.”
Boy stepped back.
The woman stood before Jack. Up close, he saw the faint lines of exhaustion around her eyes. She held her cards in one hand as if they were a shield.
“My name is Marla Baroque,” she said. Her voice was soft but steady. “I need help.”
Jack folded his arms. “Tell me.”
She looked down the hall, then back at him. “A man followed me here. He will not stop. He thinks I owe him something. I do not. I never did.”
Jack studied her face. She was not lying. Fear lived in her eyes, but so did resolve.
“Why come to me?” Jack asked.
“I heard stories,” she said. “About a man who helps when the law looks away.”
Jack did not answer. He did not need to. The Golden Comet hummed around them, warm and bright against the cold frontier. Outside, the dark waited. Inside, trouble had found its way to his door again.
The Unwanted Suitor
The Golden Comet settled into a strange quiet after Marla Baroque slipped back to her velvet booth. Jack watched her go, noting the way she held her cards close to her chest, as if they were armour. Boy lingered beside Jack for a moment, his eyes bright with concern.
“She is afraid,” Boy said.
Jack nodded. “I saw.”
“What will you do?”
Jack wiped his hands on a cloth. “Wait. Trouble always shows its face sooner or later.”
Boy tilted his head, processing the thought. “Should I prepare anything?”
“Just keep your eyes open.”
Boy moved away, gliding through the room with the ease of someone who understood every corner of the Golden Comet. Jack returned to the bar, though his attention stayed fixed on the entrance.
It did not take long.
The door slid open with a soft hiss. A tall man stepped inside. He wore a long coat made of dark, heavy fabric that brushed the floor as he walked. His boots clicked against the metal tiles. His eyes swept the room with a slow, deliberate motion. When they landed on Marla, they did not move again.
Jack felt the shift in the air. The miners at the bar stopped talking. A card player near the back lowered his hand. Even the music from the old speaker in the corner seemed to fade.
The man walked toward Marla’s booth. He did not hurry. He did not need to. His presence carried its own weight.
Marla’s fingers tightened around her cards. She did not look up.
Jack stepped out from behind the bar and intercepted the man halfway across the room.
“Evening,” Jack said.
The man stopped. His eyes moved from Jack to the bar, then back again. “Step aside.”
Jack kept his voice calm. “She is a guest here.”
“I am aware,” the man said. His tone was smooth, but there was a coldness beneath it. “I have business with her.”
Jack shook his head. “Not tonight.”
The man studied him for a long moment. His expression did not change, but something in his posture shifted. A small adjustment. A tightening of the shoulders. A sign of irritation.
“You do not know who I am,” he said.
“No,” Jack replied. “But I know what you are.”
The man’s eyes narrowed. “And what is that?”
“Trouble.”
A faint smile touched the man’s lips. It was not a pleasant smile. “My name is Reddin Vale. I am here for what is mine.”
Jack did not move. “She is not yours.”
Reddin’s smile faded. “She owes me.”
Jack shook his head. “She says she does not.”
Reddin leaned in slightly. “People say many things when they are afraid.”
Jack held his ground. “Leave.”
Reddin’s gaze hardened. “You are making a mistake.”
Jack did not answer. He did not need to. The Golden Comet stood behind him, warm and bright. Reddin Vale stood alone.
Reddin stepped back. He looked around the room, taking in the faces watching him. Then he turned and walked toward the door. His coat swept behind him like a shadow.
He paused at the threshold.
“This is not finished,” he said.
Then he left.
The door slid shut. The room exhaled.
Jack returned to the bar. Boy approached him, eyes glowing with worry.
“He will come back,” Boy said.
“Yes,” Jack replied. “He will.”
“What will we do?”
Jack looked toward Marla. She sat very still, her cards untouched. Her eyes were fixed on the table, but her mind was far away.
“We help her,” Jack said.
Boy nodded. “How?”
Jack picked up the data chit again. The single message still glowed on the screen.
Help me.
He closed the reader. “We start by finding out what she is running from.”
Boy hesitated. “Should I speak with her?”
“Not yet,” Jack said. “Give her a moment.”
The Golden Comet returned to its usual rhythm, though the tension lingered like a faint echo. The miners resumed their conversation. The card players shuffled their decks. The music drifted back through the speakers.
But Jack kept watching the door.
Reddin Vale had not come to talk. He had come to take. Men like that did not walk away without a plan. He would return, and when he did, he would not come alone.
Jack leaned against the bar and folded his arms. The Golden Comet was his home. Frisco was his ground. He had faced worse than Reddin Vale in the cold frontier.
But Marla Baroque had brought something else with her. Something heavier than fear that clung to her like a shadow.
Jack did not know what it was... yet, but he would soon enough.
A Quiet Conversation In The Back Hall
The back hall behind the Golden Comet’s kitchen held a different kind of silence than the main room. Out front, the noise came from people. Back here, the quiet came from metal walls, humming pipes, and the faint vibration of Frisco’s stabilizers. Jack liked this place. It was honest. It did not pretend to be anything other than what it was.
Marla Baroque stood near a stack of supply crates, her hands clasped around her deck of cards. She held them as if they were a lifeline. Boy lingered a few steps behind her, watching with the careful attention of someone who understood fear even if he did not feel it.
Jack approached slowly. “You said a man is after you.”
Marla nodded. “Reddin Vale.”
Jack leaned against the wall. “He claims you owe him.”
Her jaw tightened. “I owe him nothing.”
“Then why follow you across the frontier?”
Marla looked down at her cards. She shuffled them once, the motion smooth but tense. “Because I won.”
Jack raised an eyebrow. “At cards?”
“At cards,” she said. “And at other things. I have a talent for reading people. It helps me win. Some men do not like losing. Reddin is one of them.”
Jack watched her face. She was not telling the whole story. Not yet. But she was not lying either.
“Where did you cross him?” Jack asked.
“On a free floating colony near the ice fields,” she said. “A place called Driftmark. He ran a private table there. High stakes. High tempers. I won more than he expected. He accused me of cheating. I was not. He demanded I return the winnings. I refused.”
Jack nodded slowly. “And he followed you here.”
“Yes,” she said. “He has been following me for days. Every port. Every station. Every colony. I thought Frisco would be safe. I heard stories about this place. About you.”
Jack folded his arms. “Stories have a way of growing.”
Marla met his eyes. “Are they true?”
Jack did not answer right away. He looked toward Boy. The android stood still, hands folded behind his back, eyes glowing faintly. Boy had heard the same stories. He had seen Jack step into trouble more times than he could count.
Jack turned back to Marla. “I help when I can.”
She exhaled, a small breath that carried more relief than she intended to show. “Then help me now. Please.”
Jack nodded. “Tell me everything.”
Marla hesitated. She shuffled her cards again, slower this time. “Reddin is not just a gambler. He is a collector. Of debts. Of favours. Of people. He wanted me to work for him. To use my talent at his tables. I refused. He does not take refusal well.”
Jack felt the weight of her words. Men like Reddin Vale did not chase people across the frontier for small reasons. They chased because they believed they owned something. Or someone.
“Did you steal from him?” Jack asked.
Marla’s eyes flashed with anger. “No. I took only what I won. Fair and clean.”
Jack believed her. Her voice carried truth. And fear. And something else. A shadow that clung to her like a second skin.
“What does he want now?” Jack asked.
Marla looked toward the hall entrance, as if expecting Reddin to appear. “He wants me to come back. To work for him. To pay a debt I do not owe.”
Jack stepped closer. “You are safe here.”
Marla shook her head. “No one is safe from Reddin Vale. Not for long.”
Boy stepped forward. “Jack will protect you.”
Marla looked at Boy with a faint smile. “You are kind.”
Boy tilted his head. “I am programmed to assist.”
Jack placed a hand on Boy’s shoulder. “He means it.”
Marla’s smile faded. “Reddin will return. He will not come alone. He never does.”
Jack nodded. “I know.”
“What will you do?” she asked.
Jack looked down the hall, toward the Golden Comet’s main room. The hum of voices drifted through the doorway. The warmth of the bar. The glow of the lights. The steady rhythm of a place that had seen trouble before and would see it again.
“I will talk to him,” Jack said.
Marla’s eyes widened. “You cannot reason with him.”
“I am not planning to reason,” Jack said.
Boy looked up at Jack. “Should I prepare Sparky?”
“Not yet,” Jack said. “But keep him warm.”
Boy nodded and slipped away.
Marla stepped closer. “Jack, please. Be careful.”
Jack gave her a small, steady smile. “I always am.”
It was not true. But it was what she needed to hear.
He walked back toward the main room. The Golden Comet waited. Reddin Vale would return. And when he did, Jack Valliant would be ready.
Reddin Vale Makes His Move
The Golden Comet had settled back into its usual rhythm, but Jack felt the tension beneath it like a low current under calm water. The guests laughed and played cards. The miners argued about ice yields. The music drifted from the old speaker in the corner. Everything looked normal. Nothing felt normal.
Boy moved through the room with a tray of fresh glasses. His eyes flicked toward the door every few seconds. Jack noticed. Boy was learning the habits of worry.
Marla Baroque sat in her velvet booth again, though she no longer played her quiet game. Her cards rested on the table in a neat stack. She kept her hands folded in her lap. Her gaze stayed fixed on the entrance, waiting for the shadow she knew would return.
Jack leaned against the bar, arms crossed. He watched the door too.
It opened.
Reddin Vale stepped inside with the same slow confidence as before. His coat brushed the floor. His boots clicked against the tiles. His eyes swept the room, cold and steady. This time, he did not walk alone.
Two men followed him. Broad shoulders. Hard faces. The kind of men who did not smile unless someone else was hurting. They spread out behind Reddin like silent wings.
The room quieted. Not fully. Just enough for Jack to feel the shift.
Reddin walked toward the bar. He did not look at Marla. He did not need to. His presence alone was enough to make her stiffen in her seat.
Jack stepped forward. “You came back.”
Reddin stopped a few paces away. “I said I would.”
“You brought friends.”
Reddin glanced at his men. “Insurance.”
Jack kept his voice calm. “You are not welcome here.”
Reddin smiled. It was a thin smile, sharp at the edges. “This is a public establishment.”
“Not when you bring trouble.”
Reddin leaned on the bar with one hand. His coat shifted, revealing the outline of a weapon beneath it. “I am here for Marla Baroque. She belongs to me.”
Jack shook his head. “She belongs to no one.”
Reddin’s eyes hardened. “She owes me.”
“She says she does not.”
Reddin straightened. “She lies.”
Jack did not move. “Then prove it.”
Reddin’s smile vanished. “I do not need to prove anything to you.”
Jack stepped closer. “Then leave.”
The two men behind Reddin shifted their weight. One cracked his knuckles. The other rested a hand near his belt. The room held its breath.
Boy appeared at Jack’s side. He did not speak. He did not need to. His presence alone was a quiet warning.
Reddin looked at Boy with mild amusement. “You send a machine to stand against me.”
Jack’s voice stayed steady. “He stands with me.”
Reddin’s gaze returned to Jack. “You are making a mistake.”
Jack did not blink. “I have made worse.”
Reddin studied him for a long moment. The room felt smaller. The air felt colder. Then Reddin stepped back.
“This is not finished,” he said.
He turned and walked toward the door. His men followed. One of them paused long enough to glare at Jack, then at Boy, then at Marla. She lowered her eyes.
The door slid shut behind them.
The Golden Comet exhaled again.
Jack turned to Boy. “He will try something.”
Boy nodded. “He already has.”
Jack frowned. “What do you mean?”
Boy pointed toward the ceiling. The lights flickered. Once. Twice. Then steadied.
Jack felt the shift in the floor beneath his boots. A faint tremor. Not natural. Not accidental.
“He cut power to the outer ring,” Boy said. “He is trying to isolate us.”
Jack looked toward the door. “He wants her alone.”
Boy’s eyes brightened. “What do we do?”
Jack reached for his sixshooter. He checked the chamber. The weapon hummed faintly, ready but temperamental.
“We protect her,” Jack said.
Boy nodded. “Should I warn the guests?”
“Quietly,” Jack said. “No panic.”
Boy moved away.
Jack walked toward Marla’s booth. She looked up as he approached. Her eyes were wide, but her voice stayed steady.
“He will not stop,” she said.
Jack offered her a hand. “Then neither will I.”
She hesitated, then took his hand. He helped her stand.
The Golden Comet hummed around them, warm but uneasy. Outside, the cold frontier waited. Inside, Reddin Vale had made his move.
The Golden Comet Under Siege
The lights flickered again. This time they stayed dim for several long seconds before humming back to life. The guests in the Golden Comet looked around with uneasy glances. A few miners muttered about faulty wiring. Jack knew better. The timing was too clean. Too deliberate. Reddin Vale had not left to cool off. He had left to prepare.
Boy returned from the far side of the room, moving quickly but without panic. “Jack,” he said, “the outer ring is losing power. Systems are dropping one by one.”
Jack nodded. “How long until the whole ring goes dark?”
“Minutes,” Boy said. “Maybe less.”
Jack looked toward Marla. She stood near the velvet booth, her hands clenched at her sides. She had not touched her cards since Reddin returned. Her eyes were fixed on the door, waiting for the next shadow to fall across it.
Jack stepped toward her. “We need to move.”
Marla swallowed hard. “Where?”
“Somewhere safer than here.”
She nodded, though her breath came fast and shallow. Jack placed a steady hand on her shoulder. “Stay close.”
The lights flickered again. This time they dimmed to a low amber glow. The hum of the stabilizers shifted, a faint tremor running through the floor. Guests began to murmur. A few stood, unsure whether to leave or stay. Jack raised a hand.
“Everyone stay calm,” he said. “Boy will guide you to the inner ring. It is safer there.”
Boy nodded and began directing people toward the corridor. His voice stayed calm, his movements precise. The guests followed him, some reluctantly, some gratefully. The Golden Comet emptied slowly, leaving only Jack, Marla, and the quiet hum of failing systems.
Jack moved toward the maintenance hatch near the back wall. He pressed his ear to the metal. A faint scraping sound echoed from the other side. Not machinery. Not vibration. Something else.
“Jack,” Marla whispered. “What is it?”
Jack stepped back. “Trouble.”
The scraping grew louder. Then a sharp clang rang through the hatch. Someone was trying to force it open.
Jack drew his sixshooter. The weapon hummed faintly, the charge unstable but ready. He aimed at the hatch.
“Stay behind me,” he said.
Marla did not argue.
The hatch buckled inward. A second clang followed. Then a third. The metal bent under the pressure. Jack braced himself.
The hatch burst open.
Two men stepped through, both wearing dark coats and heavy boots. Their faces were hard, their eyes cold. Reddin’s men. One carried a short metal bar. The other held a compact weapon that glowed faintly at the barrel.
Jack fired first. The shot hit the wall beside the intruder’s shoulder, sending sparks across the floor. The sixshooter jammed with a sharp click. Jack cursed under his breath and ducked as the man with the bar swung at him.
Jack caught the man’s wrist and twisted. The bar clattered to the floor. The second man fired. The shot grazed Jack’s arm, burning through the fabric of his coat. Jack kicked the first man backward into the second. Both stumbled.
Marla pressed herself against the wall, eyes wide.
Jack grabbed the fallen metal bar and swung it hard. The first man dropped. The second lunged at Jack, grabbing his coat. Jack drove an elbow into the man’s ribs. The man gasped and fell to one knee. Jack struck again, knocking him unconscious.
The room fell quiet except for Jack’s breathing and the low hum of failing lights.
Marla stepped forward. “Are you hurt?”
Jack shook his head. “Not enough to matter.”
Boy appeared in the doorway, eyes bright with urgency. “Jack, Reddin is heading for the docking bay. He has more men with him.”
Jack’s jaw tightened. “He is going for a shuttle.”
Boy nodded. “And for her.”
Marla’s breath caught. “No.”
Jack turned to her. “We are not letting him take you.”
The lights flickered again, dimming to a faint glow. The Golden Comet felt smaller, darker, as if the walls themselves were holding their breath.
Jack holstered his sixshooter and grabbed the metal bar. “Boy, get her to the bay. I will follow.”
Boy nodded. “Sparky is warming up.”
Jack allowed himself a small smile. “Good. We will need him.”
Marla looked at Jack, fear and trust mixing in her eyes. “Please be careful.”
Jack gave her a steady nod. “Always.”
It was still not true. But it was enough.
Boy guided Marla toward the corridor. Jack followed, glancing back at the fallen intruders. Reddin Vale had made his move. He had cut the power. He had sent his men. He had forced Jack’s hand.
Now Jack Valliant would force his.
The Chase Begins
The corridor leading to the docking bay stretched ahead like a long metal throat. The lights flickered in uneven pulses, casting shadows that moved in ways shadows should not. Jack ran with the metal bar still in his hand, boots striking the floor in steady rhythm. Boy and Marla were already ahead, their figures small against the dim glow.
“Boy,” Jack called, “status.”
Boy slowed just enough for Jack to catch up. “Reddin reached the bay. He has two more men with him. They are forcing Marla toward a shuttle.”
Marla’s breath came fast. “He will not stop. He will take me.”
Jack shook his head. “Not while I am breathing.”
The docking bay door loomed ahead. Boy pressed his palm to the panel. The door slid open with a sluggish groan. Power loss had reached the bay. The lights inside flickered, then steadied at half strength.
Reddin Vale stood near a sleek shuttle, one hand gripping Marla’s arm. Two men flanked him, both armed. Marla struggled, but Reddin held her with a grip that spoke of ownership, not restraint.
Reddin turned as Jack entered. His smile returned, thin and sharp. “You are persistent.”
Jack stepped forward. “Let her go.”
Reddin tightened his hold on Marla. “She belongs to me.”
Jack raised the metal bar. “Not today.”
Reddin nodded to his men. They moved forward, weapons raised. Jack ducked behind a cargo crate as a shot sizzled past his head. The metal bar clanged against the floor as he dropped it and reached for his sixshooter. He pulled the trigger. The weapon hummed, then jammed with a sharp click.
Jack cursed under his breath. “Boy, get her clear.”
Boy darted forward with surprising speed. One of Reddin’s men swung his weapon toward the android. Boy slid under the shot and grabbed Marla’s free arm. Reddin snarled and pulled her back.
Jack charged. He tackled the nearest man, sending both of them crashing into a stack of crates. The crates toppled, scattering tools and cables across the floor. Jack rolled to his feet and swung a fist into the man’s jaw. The man dropped.
The second man fired again. The shot grazed Jack’s shoulder, burning through fabric and skin. Jack gritted his teeth and lunged forward. He grabbed the man’s wrist and twisted. The weapon fell. Jack kicked it away.
Reddin dragged Marla toward the shuttle ramp. “Enough of this,” he said. “She comes with me.”
Marla struggled. “Jack, please.”
Jack took a step forward. “Let her go.”
Reddin raised a small, compact weapon. Its barrel glowed faintly. “Stay back.”
Jack froze. Boy stood beside him, eyes bright with calculation.
“Jack,” Boy said quietly, “Sparky is ready.”
Jack nodded. “Good.”
Reddin pressed the weapon to Marla’s side. “You cannot win this.”
Jack smiled. “I do not need to win. I just need to stall.”
A low hum filled the bay. It grew louder, deeper, until the air vibrated. A sleek shape glided into view from the far side of the docking ring. Smooth curves. Dark metal. Wings like a manta ray cutting through water.
Sparky.
The Ride hovered above the bay floor, lights glowing along its edges. Its engines pulsed with controlled power. The hum grew into a steady thrum that filled the room.
Reddin turned, eyes widening. “What is that?”
Jack stepped forward. “My Ride.”
Sparky dipped low, almost touching the floor. A panel slid open on its side. A cable shot out, striking the shuttle ramp with a sharp clang. The impact startled Reddin. His grip on Marla loosened for a fraction of a second.
It was enough.
Marla twisted free and ran toward Jack. Boy caught her arm and pulled her behind a crate.
Reddin raised his weapon. “You think this changes anything?”
Jack stepped between Reddin and Marla. “I know it does.”
Sparky surged forward. The manta ray Ride swept across the bay with a burst of speed. Reddin fired, but the shot missed as Sparky banked sharply. The Ride clipped Reddin’s shoulder, sending him stumbling backward.
Jack charged. He tackled Reddin to the floor. The weapon skidded across the bay. Reddin swung a fist, catching Jack in the jaw. Jack struck back, driving his elbow into Reddin’s ribs. Reddin gasped and fell still.
Jack stood, breathing hard. Boy approached with Marla. She clung to the android’s arm, shaking but alive.
Sparky hovered nearby, engines humming softly, as if waiting for praise.
Jack placed a hand on the Ride’s smooth surface. “Good timing.”
Sparky’s lights flickered in response.
Jack turned to Marla. “You are safe now.”
Marla nodded, though her eyes still held the shadow of fear. “Thank you.”
Jack looked toward the fallen Reddin Vale. “This is not over. Not yet.”
But for the moment, the chase had ended.
And Sparky had made his entrance.
Sparky Runs Hot
The docking bay doors sealed behind them with a heavy clang as Sparky pulled free of Frisco’s outer ring. The manta ray Ride glided into the cold frontier with a smoothness that always surprised newcomers. Marla gripped the edge of her seat, knuckles white. Boy sat beside her, hands folded neatly, eyes glowing with calm focus. Jack stood at the controls, steady as stone.
The stars stretched across the dark like scattered shards of ice. The distant glow of Pluto shimmered faintly behind them. Ahead, Reddin Vale’s shuttle cut a sharp path through the drifting debris fields. Its engines flared bright, leaving a trail of pale blue light.
Sparky hummed beneath Jack’s hands. The Ride’s wings flexed, adjusting to the thin drift of particles. The cockpit lights flickered in soft pulses, matching Sparky’s internal rhythm.
“Distance closing,” Boy said. “Reddin is pushing his engines too hard.”
Jack nodded. “He is desperate.”
Marla swallowed. “He will not stop.”
Jack kept his eyes on the shuttle. “Neither will we.”
Sparky dipped low, weaving between chunks of frozen rock. The scattered disc stretched around them, a maze of drifting ice and ancient debris. The Ride moved with a grace that felt almost alive. Jack trusted Sparky more than he trusted most people.
A warning light blinked on the console. Sparky’s voice crackled through the comm, smooth and slightly annoyed.
“Left thruster running hot.”
Jack tapped the panel. “I know.”
“Recommend reducing speed,” Sparky said.
“Cannot,” Jack replied.
Sparky hummed in disapproval.
Marla looked between them. “Your Ride talks.”
Jack gave a small smile. “He complains too.”
Sparky’s lights flickered in protest.
Reddin’s shuttle banked sharply, diving into a dense cluster of ice fragments. The debris glittered like broken glass. Jack tightened his grip on the controls.
“Boy,” Jack said, “give me a path.”
Boy’s eyes brightened. “Plotting.”
The android leaned forward, scanning the field. His voice remained calm, but his hands tightened slightly on the console.
“Angle thirty degrees starboard,” Boy said. “Then drop two metres. There is a narrow gap.”
Jack followed the instructions without hesitation. Sparky dipped and rolled, sliding through the gap with inches to spare. Ice scraped along the Ride’s wings, sending a shiver through the hull.
Marla gasped. “How can you fly like that?”
Jack kept his eyes forward. “Practice.”
Sparky added, “And luck.”
Jack smirked. “Mostly practice.”
Reddin’s shuttle emerged from the far side of the ice cluster, engines flaring bright. He fired a shot. A streak of light cut across the dark, passing close enough to Sparky’s nose to leave a scorch mark.
Marla flinched. “He is trying to kill us.”
Jack shook his head. “He is trying to scare us.”
Boy tilted his head. “Is it working?”
Jack did not answer.
Sparky surged forward. The Ride’s engines roared, pushing against the cold vacuum. The left thruster warning blinked again, brighter this time.
“Jack,” Sparky said, “I am serious. Reduce speed.”
Jack ignored the warning. “We need to get closer.”
Sparky’s hum deepened. “You are going to burn me out.”
Jack tapped the console. “Not today.”
The Ride shuddered as it pushed harder. The ice field thinned, opening into a wide stretch of dark space. Reddin’s shuttle loomed ahead, larger now, close enough for Jack to see the scorch marks along its hull.
Boy leaned forward. “Jack, he is losing control.”
Jack nodded. “I see it.”
Reddin’s shuttle wobbled, dipping too low, then jerking upward. A trail of smoke drifted from one of its engines. The man had pushed too hard. His shuttle was failing.
Marla’s voice trembled. “He will crash.”
Jack kept his voice steady. “Not if we reach him first.”
Sparky closed the distance. The Ride’s wings flared, adjusting to the shifting currents of debris. The left thruster glowed bright red, heat shimmering along its edge.
“Jack,” Sparky warned, “I am at critical temperature.”
Jack exhaled. “Hold together.”
Sparky’s lights flickered. “I always do.”
Reddin’s shuttle spun, clipping a chunk of ice. The impact sent it tumbling. A panel tore free, drifting into the dark. The shuttle’s lights flickered, then dimmed.
Boy pointed. “There. He is losing altitude.”
Jack angled Sparky downward. The Ride swooped beneath the tumbling shuttle, matching its spin. Jack reached for the docking clamp controls.
“Boy,” Jack said, “get ready.”
Boy nodded. “Ready.”
Marla held her breath.
Sparky extended a clamp. The metal arm reached out, catching the shuttle’s underside with a sharp jolt. The Ride shuddered, engines straining.
Jack gritted his teeth. “Hold him.”
Sparky groaned. “I am trying.”
The shuttle steadied. Slowly. Painfully. But it steadied.
Jack exhaled. “We have him.”
Marla sagged in her seat. “Thank you.”
Jack looked at her. “It is not over yet.”
Sparky’s lights dimmed. “Left thruster offline.”
Jack nodded. “We will limp back.”
Boy looked at the damaged shuttle. “What about Reddin?”
Jack stared at the darkened cockpit. “We will see.”
The cold frontier stretched around them, silent and vast. Sparky hummed softly, wounded but loyal. The chase had ended, but the story had not.
Jack Valliant turned the Ride toward home.
The Ice Field Standoff
Sparky limped through the scattered disc with a wounded hum, towing Reddin Vale’s damaged shuttle behind him. The clamp held firm, though the Ride’s left thruster flickered with a faint red glow. Jack kept one hand on the controls, the other braced against the console as the Ride shuddered through a patch of drifting ice.
Marla sat behind him, wrapped in a thermal blanket Boy had found in the emergency kit. Her eyes stayed fixed on the shuttle they were towing. She watched it as if expecting Reddin to burst out of it at any moment. Boy sat beside her, hands folded neatly, gaze steady.
“Jack,” Boy said, “the shuttle’s life support is still active. Reddin is alive.”
Jack nodded. “I figured.”
Marla’s voice trembled. “What will he do when he wakes?”
Jack kept his eyes on the drifting ice ahead. “Depends on how much fight he has left.”
Sparky’s voice crackled through the comm. “Left thruster temperature stabilizing. But I am not happy.”
Jack smirked. “You never are.”
Sparky hummed in protest.
The ice field thickened ahead, glittering like a frozen storm. Massive shards drifted in slow, silent arcs. Some were the size of small buildings. Others were thin as blades. The field shifted constantly, a maze that punished hesitation.
Boy leaned forward. “Jack, we should adjust course. The density ahead is increasing.”
Jack shook his head. “We cannot go around. The tow line will not hold through a long detour.”
Marla tightened the blanket around her shoulders. “Is it safe?”
Jack gave her a small, steady smile. “Safe enough.”
Sparky groaned. “I disagree.”
Jack tapped the console. “Noted.”
The Ride dipped into the ice field. The temperature gauge flickered. The hull vibrated as small fragments scraped along Sparky’s wings. The tow line strained, pulling the damaged shuttle through the narrow gaps.
Boy watched the readings. “Jack, the shuttle is unstable. If we hit a large fragment, it may break free.”
Jack nodded. “Then we do not hit anything.”
Sparky’s lights flickered. “I would like to remind you that I am not built for towing.”
Jack smirked. “You are built for whatever I need.”
Sparky hummed in reluctant agreement.
A massive shard drifted into their path, spinning slowly. Jack angled Sparky downward, sliding beneath it. The shuttle scraped the underside of the ice, sending a shower of frozen dust into the dark.
Marla gasped. “Jack, look.”
Reddin’s shuttle lights flickered. A shadow moved inside the cockpit. Reddin Vale was awake.
Jack exhaled. “Of course he is.”
The shuttle jerked suddenly, pulling hard against the tow line. Sparky lurched sideways.
“Jack,” Sparky warned, “he is trying to break free.”
Boy’s eyes brightened. “He is overriding the manual controls.”
Jack tightened his grip on the console. “Hold him.”
Sparky strained, engines roaring. The tow line vibrated like a live wire.
Reddin’s shuttle jerked again, harder this time. The clamp groaned. The ice field shifted around them, closing in like a tightening fist.
Marla stood, gripping the back of Jack’s seat. “He will kill us all.”
Jack shook his head. “Not if I get to him first.”
He angled Sparky upward, pulling the shuttle with him. The sudden movement forced Reddin’s craft into a spin. The shuttle slammed into a drifting slab of ice, sending cracks spidering across its hull.
Boy pointed. “Jack, the cockpit window.”
Jack looked. Reddin Vale stared back at him through the cracked glass. His eyes burned with fury. He mouthed something Jack could not hear, but the meaning was clear.
This is not over.
Jack angled Sparky closer. The Ride’s wings brushed the ice, sending shards drifting away. He brought the cockpit level with Reddin’s.
Marla whispered, “Jack, be careful.”
Jack nodded. “Always.”
He unlatched the side hatch. Cold air rushed in, biting at his skin. He stepped onto Sparky’s wing, gripping the edge for balance. The ice field drifted around him, silent and deadly. The shuttle swung slightly on the tow line, its hull groaning.
Jack leapt.
He landed on the shuttle’s hull, boots sliding on frost. He grabbed a handhold and pulled himself toward the cockpit. Reddin pounded on the glass, shouting soundless threats.
Jack reached the emergency release panel. He pried it open and yanked the lever. The cockpit door hissed, then popped open with a burst of cold vapour.
Reddin lunged.
Jack caught his arm and twisted. The two men struggled on the narrow hull, boots slipping on ice. Reddin swung a fist. Jack ducked and drove his shoulder into Reddin’s chest. The man stumbled, losing his footing.
Jack grabbed him by the coat. “Enough.”
Reddin snarled. “She is mine.”
Jack shook his head. “She never was.”
He shoved Reddin back into the cockpit. The man fell hard, hitting the console. Jack sealed the door behind him.
Sparky’s voice crackled. “Jack, we need to leave. The ice field is closing.”
Jack climbed back onto Sparky’s wing and leapt. Boy reached out and pulled him inside.
Marla exhaled in relief. “Thank you.”
Jack took the controls. “Let us get home.”
Sparky hummed. “Finally.”
The Ride surged upward, pulling the damaged shuttle behind it. The ice field shifted, but Sparky slipped through the narrowing gap with inches to spare.
Return To The Golden Comet
Sparky drifted back toward Frisco with a tired hum, towing Reddin Vale’s battered shuttle behind him like a stubborn shadow. The cold frontier stretched around them, quiet and endless. The ice field faded into the distance, leaving only the faint glow of the colony hotel ahead. The Golden Comet shone like a lantern in the dark, warm and steady against the void.
Jack kept one hand on the controls, guiding Sparky through the docking ring’s approach path. The Ride’s left thruster flickered with a faint orange glow, still wounded from the chase. Boy monitored the readings, his eyes bright with concentration.
“Jack,” Boy said, “Sparky’s temperature is stabilizing, but he needs a full cooldown cycle.”
Sparky’s voice crackled through the comm. “I need more than a cooldown. I need a vacation.”
Jack smirked. “You can rest when we dock.”
Sparky hummed in protest.
Marla sat behind them, wrapped in her blanket, watching the Golden Comet grow larger in the viewport. Her face held a mixture of relief and exhaustion. She had not spoken much since the ice field. Fear still clung to her like a thin layer of frost.
“Jack,” she said quietly, “what will happen to him?”
Jack glanced at the shuttle trailing behind them. “Reddin Vale will answer to the local authority. They will decide what comes next.”
Marla nodded, though her eyes stayed fixed on the shuttle. “He will not forgive this.”
Jack kept his voice steady. “He does not have to. He just has to stop.”
Boy turned to her. “You are safe now.”
Marla gave him a faint smile. “I hope so.”
The docking clamps extended from the ring, locking onto Sparky’s hull with a heavy clunk. The Ride shuddered as the bay doors closed behind them. The lights brightened, washing the bay in warm gold. The hum of the colony replaced the cold silence of space.
Jack powered down the engines. Sparky exhaled a long, mechanical sigh.
“Finally,” Sparky said. “I thought you were trying to melt me.”
Jack patted the console. “You did well.”
Sparky’s lights flickered in satisfaction.
Boy unbuckled his harness and stood. “I will alert the authority.”
Jack nodded. “Tell them we have a prisoner.”
Boy hurried toward the bay entrance, his steps quick and precise.
Jack turned to Marla. “Come on. Let us get you inside.”
She stood slowly, still wrapped in the blanket. Her legs trembled slightly as she stepped onto the bay floor. Jack offered his arm. She hesitated, then took it.
The Golden Comet’s interior felt warmer than usual. The lights glowed softly. The air carried the faint scent of brewed tea and old wood polish. The guests had returned to their seats, though their voices were quieter than before. Word of the trouble had spread.
Mrs. Lorne, the Comet’s cook, peeked out from the kitchen. “Jack, is everything settled?”
Jack nodded. “For now.”
Marla managed a small smile. “Thank you.”
Mrs. Lorne’s expression softened. “You look like you need something warm. Sit. I will bring tea.”
Marla nodded gratefully and sank into a booth near the bar. Jack sat across from her. The blanket slipped from her shoulders, revealing the faint tremble in her hands.
“You did well out there,” Jack said.
Marla shook her head. “I did nothing. You saved me.”
Jack leaned back. “You ran when you needed to. You fought when you had to. That counts.”
She looked down at her hands. “I never wanted any of this. I only wanted to play cards. To travel. To be left alone.”
Jack nodded. “The frontier does not always give us what we want.”
Marla looked up. “Why did you help me?”
Jack shrugged. “Because you asked.”
Her eyes softened. “Most people would not.”
Jack gave her a small smile. “I am not most people.”
Boy returned, stepping lightly into the room. “Jack, the authority is on their way. They will take Reddin into custody.”
Marla exhaled. “Good.”
Jack studied her face. The fear was still there, but something else had begun to take its place. Relief. Hope. A faint spark of strength.
“You can stay here tonight,” Jack said. “The Comet has room.”
Marla nodded. “Thank you.”
Mrs. Lorne arrived with two steaming cups of tea. She set them down gently. “Drink. It will help.”
Marla wrapped her hands around the cup, letting the warmth seep into her fingers. She took a slow sip. Her shoulders relaxed.
Jack watched her for a moment. The Golden Comet hummed around them, steady and warm. The danger had passed, but the night still held its shadows.
Marla looked at Jack. “What happens now?”
Jack took a sip of his tea. “Now we rest.”
She nodded. “And tomorrow?”
Jack smiled. “Tomorrow will take care of itself.”
Boy stood beside them, eyes glowing softly. Sparky rested in the bay, cooling down. Reddin Vale sat locked in his shuttle, waiting for the authority.
For the first time since she arrived, Marla Baroque looked like she believed she might be safe.
The Lady Shadow Baroque Departs
Morning crept into the Golden Comet with a soft, amber glow. The lights brightened slowly, warming the metal walls and casting long shadows across the empty tables. The night’s tension had faded, leaving behind the quiet calm of a place that had survived another brush with the cold frontier.
Jack sat at the bar, nursing a cup of strong tea. His jaw ached from the fight. His shoulder throbbed where the shot had grazed him. He ignored both. Pain was familiar. Pain meant he was still alive.
Boy stood beside him, polishing glasses with precise, careful motions. The android’s eyes glowed with a soft blue light, brighter than usual. He seemed almost proud.
“Reddin Vale has been transferred to the authority,” Boy said. “They will take him to the holding station on Pluto.”
Jack nodded. “Good.”
“He was very angry.”
Jack smirked. “He usually is.”
Boy paused. “Will he return?”
Jack took a slow sip of tea. “Not soon. The authority will keep him busy.”
Boy tilted his head. “And after that?”
Jack shrugged. “We will deal with it.”
Boy accepted that answer, though his eyes flickered with quiet concern.
The door to the guest quarters slid open. Marla Baroque stepped into the room, her hair tied back, her coat draped over one arm. She looked rested, though a faint shadow still lingered behind her eyes. She approached the bar with slow, steady steps.
“Morning,” Jack said.
Marla offered a small smile. “Morning.”
Boy set down the glass he was polishing. “Did you sleep well?”
Marla nodded. “Better than I expected.”
Jack gestured to the stool beside him. “Sit.”
She did. Mrs. Lorne appeared from the kitchen with uncanny timing, placing a warm cup of tea in front of Marla. “Drink,” she said. “You look like you need it.”
Marla wrapped her hands around the cup. “Thank you.”
Mrs. Lorne nodded and returned to the kitchen.
For a moment, the three of them sat in comfortable silence. The Golden Comet hummed softly around them, alive and warm.
Marla set her cup down. “I should leave today.”
Jack nodded. “Where will you go?”
“Somewhere quiet,” she said. “Somewhere Reddin cannot find me.”
Jack leaned back. “He will not find you for a long time.”
Marla looked at him. “Because of you.”
Jack shrugged. “Because he made mistakes.”
She smiled faintly. “You saved my life.”
Jack shook his head. “You saved your own. I just helped.”
Marla studied him for a long moment. Her eyes softened. “You are not what I expected.”
Jack raised an eyebrow. “What did you expect?”
“A man who helps strangers for money,” she said. “A man who keeps to himself. A man who does not care.”
Jack smirked. “I care more than I should.”
Boy nodded. “He does.”
Jack shot him a look. Boy pretended not to notice.
Marla reached into her coat and pulled out a small silver token. She placed it on the bar. The token was round, etched with a delicate pattern of swirling lines. It caught the light and shimmered faintly.
Jack frowned. “What is this?”
“Payment,” Marla said.
Jack pushed it back toward her. “I do not want it.”
She pushed it back. “Take it. Please.”
Jack hesitated. The token felt warm in his hand, heavier than it looked. “I did not help you for money.”
“I know,” she said. “That is why I want you to have it.”
Jack studied her face. She meant it. The token was not payment. It was gratitude. A piece of her story she wanted him to keep.
He slipped it into his coat pocket. “Thank you.”
Marla stood. “I should go before the next shuttle leaves.”
Jack rose with her. Boy followed.
They walked to the docking bay together. Sparky rested in his berth, wings folded, lights dimmed. The Ride hummed softly as they approached.
Marla paused at the base of the ramp. “Jack,” she said, “I will not forget what you did.”
Jack nodded. “Stay safe.”
She smiled. “I will try.”
Boy stepped forward. “If you ever need help again, you can send a message. We will come.”
Marla touched Boy’s shoulder gently. “Thank you.”
She turned and walked up the ramp. The shuttle door closed behind her with a soft hiss. The engines warmed, glowing pale blue. The shuttle lifted, hovered, then drifted out of the bay and into the cold frontier.
Jack watched until the lights disappeared.
Boy stood beside him. “Will we see her again?”
Jack slipped his hands into his coat pockets. “Maybe.”
Boy tilted his head. “Do you want to?”
Jack smiled faintly. “Maybe.”
Sparky’s lights flickered. “I liked her.”
Jack patted the Ride’s hull. “You like anyone who does not try to melt your thrusters.”
Sparky hummed in agreement.
Jack turned toward the Golden Comet. The warm glow spilled into the bay, inviting and steady. Another day. Another story. Another shadow drifting through the frontier.
Boy walked beside him. “What now?”
Jack stepped into the light. “Now we get breakfast.”
The Golden Comet closed behind them, holding the night’s secrets in its warm, quiet heart.
And somewhere in the cold frontier, Marla Baroque carried her own shadows into the dawn.
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