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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Comedy / Humor
- Published: 06/14/2012
The 1st Look
United States of America, New York, Manhattan.
The day was cold, it was early winter. I was in one of the buildings in this beautiful city enjoying the people passing by.
So sorry, I did not introduce myself! My head. My name is Selena, I'm not a singer, I wish I was, but no. I'm just an ordinary girl, dreamy and looking for her prince charming.
We are in this city to study in college. I mean, we are, because I'm not alone, I'm with my best friend, her name is Shania. We both dream of becoming famous fashion designers, so we came here. The apartment is simple but very comfortable, and we made our way. Oh and talking about her she just entered.
_ You are talking to yourself, Selly?
_ I? Imagine ... I was here with my thoughts! What have you bought?
Approaching Shania, excited, as she faced the cold outside with chocolate behind her. (You must be confused! I'll explain, it is a habit that we have to eat chocolate while watching DVD's.) Smiling - Shania jumped on the couch joining me, the DVD was already in the player. It was a romantic movie, a romantic comedy, about a young woman who falls for a very handsome man, but that hurts, she goes to another city and there she meets another handsome, but this by the way is a womanizer, and I confess I'm dying to know who she'll be at the end. The film is titled Tracings destinations.
Oh, and tonight we have a meeting with the college crowd, one of the coolest bars in town. For me, I was sitting here, dreaming, but Shania says it is important we meet new people, buildings and bridges in the city. Then she was going to excuse me because I had to watch my film.
Manhattan federal court
Klark Manfredy was advocating a more complex case. The trial was well under way. He was safe and confident as ever. Jurors were gathered together and were only awaiting the judge's ruling. But it appeared that Klark had earned more than this case. It's about medical malpractice.
_ Stay calm Dr. Freddy, with the arguments and the testimony of Sarah the nurse, the judge will consider you innocent - said he confident, relying on the good performance given in court.
_ I trust you, Klark - Holding his hand
This made the jury return with the verdict, which is soon delivered to the judge. He begins reading the sentence.
_ By the laws, and evaluated all the facts here, this court finds the defendant not guilty.
Leading to redness around the court, applause and hugs are distributed. Everyone congratulating the effectiveness and efficiency of Klark who always stood from beginning to end. And Dr. Freddy hugs him, happy and relieved.
_ Thank you - with tears - thank you, I do not know how to thank ...
_ Nothing, I did not do more than my duty, after all, the Lord is innocent
Again he embraces his hero savior. And George comes to meet them, Klark's best friend, since the output of the room.
_ Congratulations, you won one more case ...
_ Thank you - smiling - but nothing more than my duty ...
_ Oh man! Modesty at this stage of the game! This deserves a celebration
_ I do not know ...
_ None of that, this time you will not escape me, I'll pick you up at 9! And the night will be ours ... we go to the Sunshine Club ... we will have so much fun, you'll see! - George smiled
_ My God, I deserve it!
_ This time you will not escape me Klark Manfredy - Hitting with the hands on the shoulders of Klark
The output of the court, photographers and journalists have been honored more in the career of a victory of Klark Manfredy.
At night, the girls are getting ready to rock the night, as always Shania was an exaggeration, a strong and bright makeup and a dress so short strapless black and black boots. By placing a blanket over the ounce, because of the cold. Selena opted for something simpler, a dress to the knee, dark blue, high-heeled sandals, loose hair, and a very light makeup.
Arriving at the Club, Shania and Selena are directed at the bar.
At this moment also entering Klark and George, both highly elegant and Shania sitting at the bar in a privileged place right entry.
_ Friend! Stopped! Because I'll have a fit! - Admired, always looking at the entrance
_ What is it? - I asked without notice
_ Look at the entrance!
I do not give a lot of flag, look discreetly at the entrance of the bar, but my eyes inadvertently meets a man with blue eyes seductive, and I feel my body shiver.
Why is that?
I averted my gaze quickly! Wow! My God, my whole life I have never seen a look so intense, I liked it! I do not know why, but I liked it. I felt a chill running through my body, and asked the bartender for a drink very strong awakening. A cold cola that's right.
_ Amiga, they are a cat! - Shania Says drooling, staring at one of them, or will be for both? It does not matter. Also the way she is crazy to be seen! Not surprised me anything she wanted to go up there to talk with them.
Entry bar
Klark
The music was very good, and George began rehearsing new "dance steps", if I can call it "dance steps" but whatever.
Something curious was to that girl! Because it felt awkward for a glance? Should I go to her now? And what I say? Well, suppose I go talk to her, but what if it is monitored? There'd better not, just missing me into trouble now. I better be quiet in my corner.
And here comes George, probably comes to fill my bag, and will want us to go win some girls out there, but notice now that I'm out.
_ And Then! You stopped why? - Says George dancing and coming toward me, risking the dance from Michael Jackson. I hate when he does that, with shame! Even though nobody knows me here, ever thought about the headlines? It would be terrible!
I did not answer, just crossed my arms and stared in the face of much annoyance and boredom; I wanted to be in my house, sleeping in my bed!
_ Come on! Cheer up, man! Neither seems like you just won the 100th event of your life in just three years of career. Are you one of the best lawyers in Manhattan just to say nothing of New York!
_ Ah, George does not exaggerate!
_ Dude, at least once in your life, live life. Feel it! Have fun! You are young, life is not just made of paper! - Here he comes with the same conversation as always.
_ I do not have time for such nonsense! - I answered firmly
_ And since when fun is stupid? You do not have time for anything expensive! Spends his life, stuck in the office, just think about work and more work. Life is much more than that, my friend. Come on, today is a day to celebrate! - Trying to pull me to dance, but I dodged and decided to go to the bar to drink anything healthy.
At the Bar
Selena
I did not fail to notice the man with the blue eyes, had something in it that hit me, I cannot explain exactly what!
Oh my God! He just came into the bar, I was sitting at the bar, facing the dance floor, and back to the bartender, noticed the elegance he was walking and suddenly our eyes is crossed again, and chill takes hold my body again! Oh, why is this always happening? Whenever we look crosses? Damn it! Is it a warning? Then Selena forgets, drink your Coke is better.
I looked away and turned back to the bar, drinking my glue that was great, and he did what? You will not believe! He was sitting across the bar in front of me! See if you can do such a thing? What does this guy need? Seduce me with your look and your charm? Who does he think he is? But what annoys me most about this is that his strategy is working. Who is this guy?
Across the Bar
Klark
I went to sit at the bar and ordered a soda! Because I do not usually drink alcohol! I'm a lawyer and I have to stay sober forever.
And I found myself thoughtfully consider what George said.
_ George Will is right? Will I lose that much time working? But I do not think we both work well. Or do we?
On the other side of the bar
Selena
Shania was the way she loves to draw attention! She decided to go dancing with the friend, a man with seductive blue eyes. She wastes no time anyway.
_ You do not come Selly? - Question Shania heading toward the runway.
_ No, you go, I'm here! Enjoying my Coke - I said after taking a cold drink on my tail, the way I like it.
_ All right, who knows you! For me, darling, do not miss this opportunity for anything in the world! I was - said she danced toward his friend's cat another cat seductive blue eyes. And when I go back to the bar, there was that look again crossing my! Again?
Shania that not a crazy dance with a guy she never saw in life, I enjoyed both dancing when suddenly someone sits in place of Shania! He was a man, who looked to be about 25 years, I have not noticed, I pretended that I did not see, but there is not that the guy starts to mess with me!
_ So Baby, is to dance?
I look at him - not required - I answered politely and turned to look at the track
_ You're beautiful, you know? Do not want to take a ride in my car? - He insisted
_ No thanks - I got up to avoid problems
_ Slow down baby! Where do you think will? Let's talk - Holding on to my arm
_ Let me go, I said I do not want ... - I tried to hold my arm.
_ What is cat! It's just a ride do not have any harm - he insisted
_ I've talked to you let me go! - I replied trying to hold my arm
Suddenly, a voice behind me
_ Is there a problem?
The exchange of DJ music suddenly, Back in Time - Pitbull for Today was a fairytale - Taylor Swift! My favorite song!
I turn, in search of voice that sounded from behind me and who I see? He! Right there behind me with his beautiful blue eyes seductive, so close to me!
My body shivered suddenly, my heart pounded, and this time was intense, and I wondered again why! Why, I felt this weird sensation where he just looked at me?
Today was a fairytale
You were the prince
I used to be the damsel in distress
You took me by the hand and you picked me up at six
Today was a fairytale
Track Destinations(Wilson Miguel)
The 1st Look
United States of America, New York, Manhattan.
The day was cold, it was early winter. I was in one of the buildings in this beautiful city enjoying the people passing by.
So sorry, I did not introduce myself! My head. My name is Selena, I'm not a singer, I wish I was, but no. I'm just an ordinary girl, dreamy and looking for her prince charming.
We are in this city to study in college. I mean, we are, because I'm not alone, I'm with my best friend, her name is Shania. We both dream of becoming famous fashion designers, so we came here. The apartment is simple but very comfortable, and we made our way. Oh and talking about her she just entered.
_ You are talking to yourself, Selly?
_ I? Imagine ... I was here with my thoughts! What have you bought?
Approaching Shania, excited, as she faced the cold outside with chocolate behind her. (You must be confused! I'll explain, it is a habit that we have to eat chocolate while watching DVD's.) Smiling - Shania jumped on the couch joining me, the DVD was already in the player. It was a romantic movie, a romantic comedy, about a young woman who falls for a very handsome man, but that hurts, she goes to another city and there she meets another handsome, but this by the way is a womanizer, and I confess I'm dying to know who she'll be at the end. The film is titled Tracings destinations.
Oh, and tonight we have a meeting with the college crowd, one of the coolest bars in town. For me, I was sitting here, dreaming, but Shania says it is important we meet new people, buildings and bridges in the city. Then she was going to excuse me because I had to watch my film.
Manhattan federal court
Klark Manfredy was advocating a more complex case. The trial was well under way. He was safe and confident as ever. Jurors were gathered together and were only awaiting the judge's ruling. But it appeared that Klark had earned more than this case. It's about medical malpractice.
_ Stay calm Dr. Freddy, with the arguments and the testimony of Sarah the nurse, the judge will consider you innocent - said he confident, relying on the good performance given in court.
_ I trust you, Klark - Holding his hand
This made the jury return with the verdict, which is soon delivered to the judge. He begins reading the sentence.
_ By the laws, and evaluated all the facts here, this court finds the defendant not guilty.
Leading to redness around the court, applause and hugs are distributed. Everyone congratulating the effectiveness and efficiency of Klark who always stood from beginning to end. And Dr. Freddy hugs him, happy and relieved.
_ Thank you - with tears - thank you, I do not know how to thank ...
_ Nothing, I did not do more than my duty, after all, the Lord is innocent
Again he embraces his hero savior. And George comes to meet them, Klark's best friend, since the output of the room.
_ Congratulations, you won one more case ...
_ Thank you - smiling - but nothing more than my duty ...
_ Oh man! Modesty at this stage of the game! This deserves a celebration
_ I do not know ...
_ None of that, this time you will not escape me, I'll pick you up at 9! And the night will be ours ... we go to the Sunshine Club ... we will have so much fun, you'll see! - George smiled
_ My God, I deserve it!
_ This time you will not escape me Klark Manfredy - Hitting with the hands on the shoulders of Klark
The output of the court, photographers and journalists have been honored more in the career of a victory of Klark Manfredy.
At night, the girls are getting ready to rock the night, as always Shania was an exaggeration, a strong and bright makeup and a dress so short strapless black and black boots. By placing a blanket over the ounce, because of the cold. Selena opted for something simpler, a dress to the knee, dark blue, high-heeled sandals, loose hair, and a very light makeup.
Arriving at the Club, Shania and Selena are directed at the bar.
At this moment also entering Klark and George, both highly elegant and Shania sitting at the bar in a privileged place right entry.
_ Friend! Stopped! Because I'll have a fit! - Admired, always looking at the entrance
_ What is it? - I asked without notice
_ Look at the entrance!
I do not give a lot of flag, look discreetly at the entrance of the bar, but my eyes inadvertently meets a man with blue eyes seductive, and I feel my body shiver.
Why is that?
I averted my gaze quickly! Wow! My God, my whole life I have never seen a look so intense, I liked it! I do not know why, but I liked it. I felt a chill running through my body, and asked the bartender for a drink very strong awakening. A cold cola that's right.
_ Amiga, they are a cat! - Shania Says drooling, staring at one of them, or will be for both? It does not matter. Also the way she is crazy to be seen! Not surprised me anything she wanted to go up there to talk with them.
Entry bar
Klark
The music was very good, and George began rehearsing new "dance steps", if I can call it "dance steps" but whatever.
Something curious was to that girl! Because it felt awkward for a glance? Should I go to her now? And what I say? Well, suppose I go talk to her, but what if it is monitored? There'd better not, just missing me into trouble now. I better be quiet in my corner.
And here comes George, probably comes to fill my bag, and will want us to go win some girls out there, but notice now that I'm out.
_ And Then! You stopped why? - Says George dancing and coming toward me, risking the dance from Michael Jackson. I hate when he does that, with shame! Even though nobody knows me here, ever thought about the headlines? It would be terrible!
I did not answer, just crossed my arms and stared in the face of much annoyance and boredom; I wanted to be in my house, sleeping in my bed!
_ Come on! Cheer up, man! Neither seems like you just won the 100th event of your life in just three years of career. Are you one of the best lawyers in Manhattan just to say nothing of New York!
_ Ah, George does not exaggerate!
_ Dude, at least once in your life, live life. Feel it! Have fun! You are young, life is not just made of paper! - Here he comes with the same conversation as always.
_ I do not have time for such nonsense! - I answered firmly
_ And since when fun is stupid? You do not have time for anything expensive! Spends his life, stuck in the office, just think about work and more work. Life is much more than that, my friend. Come on, today is a day to celebrate! - Trying to pull me to dance, but I dodged and decided to go to the bar to drink anything healthy.
At the Bar
Selena
I did not fail to notice the man with the blue eyes, had something in it that hit me, I cannot explain exactly what!
Oh my God! He just came into the bar, I was sitting at the bar, facing the dance floor, and back to the bartender, noticed the elegance he was walking and suddenly our eyes is crossed again, and chill takes hold my body again! Oh, why is this always happening? Whenever we look crosses? Damn it! Is it a warning? Then Selena forgets, drink your Coke is better.
I looked away and turned back to the bar, drinking my glue that was great, and he did what? You will not believe! He was sitting across the bar in front of me! See if you can do such a thing? What does this guy need? Seduce me with your look and your charm? Who does he think he is? But what annoys me most about this is that his strategy is working. Who is this guy?
Across the Bar
Klark
I went to sit at the bar and ordered a soda! Because I do not usually drink alcohol! I'm a lawyer and I have to stay sober forever.
And I found myself thoughtfully consider what George said.
_ George Will is right? Will I lose that much time working? But I do not think we both work well. Or do we?
On the other side of the bar
Selena
Shania was the way she loves to draw attention! She decided to go dancing with the friend, a man with seductive blue eyes. She wastes no time anyway.
_ You do not come Selly? - Question Shania heading toward the runway.
_ No, you go, I'm here! Enjoying my Coke - I said after taking a cold drink on my tail, the way I like it.
_ All right, who knows you! For me, darling, do not miss this opportunity for anything in the world! I was - said she danced toward his friend's cat another cat seductive blue eyes. And when I go back to the bar, there was that look again crossing my! Again?
Shania that not a crazy dance with a guy she never saw in life, I enjoyed both dancing when suddenly someone sits in place of Shania! He was a man, who looked to be about 25 years, I have not noticed, I pretended that I did not see, but there is not that the guy starts to mess with me!
_ So Baby, is to dance?
I look at him - not required - I answered politely and turned to look at the track
_ You're beautiful, you know? Do not want to take a ride in my car? - He insisted
_ No thanks - I got up to avoid problems
_ Slow down baby! Where do you think will? Let's talk - Holding on to my arm
_ Let me go, I said I do not want ... - I tried to hold my arm.
_ What is cat! It's just a ride do not have any harm - he insisted
_ I've talked to you let me go! - I replied trying to hold my arm
Suddenly, a voice behind me
_ Is there a problem?
The exchange of DJ music suddenly, Back in Time - Pitbull for Today was a fairytale - Taylor Swift! My favorite song!
I turn, in search of voice that sounded from behind me and who I see? He! Right there behind me with his beautiful blue eyes seductive, so close to me!
My body shivered suddenly, my heart pounded, and this time was intense, and I wondered again why! Why, I felt this weird sensation where he just looked at me?
Today was a fairytale
You were the prince
I used to be the damsel in distress
You took me by the hand and you picked me up at six
Today was a fairytale
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