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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
  • Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
  • Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
  • Published: 06/15/2012

Living In The Dark

By Barbara
Born 2000, F, from Tbilisi, Georgia
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Living In The Dark

Living In The Dark

There was a rainy autumn day. The sky was tinted , nobody was there except the boy, he was carrying a violin , and didn’t care about the weather , he was all broken and playing a sad romantic music. . . he wanted to be all alone with his soul and violin , he was playing with all his mind and wasn’t listening to rain noise . . . .
But suddenly the silence was broken in his soul. There was a girl standing behind him. She said:

- The music is majestic ! I’m Charmed!

But the boy was just standing with his violin and Wet.
- What’s your name? asked the girl .


Boy Started To Walk Away
- . . . .
- No. Wait! Don’t Go! Girl Shouted.
- What do you want anyway? Asked the boy.
- I just wanted to acquaint with you . . .You look so gloomy and sad . . . I-I just wanted to make you feel happy . . But I’m stranger to you.
Then The Boy Smiled:
- So , let’s meet each other then .. I’m Ritsu, You?
-
Girl smiled and shouted happily:
- Shinku ! ^^
- Why so happy? I’m just a guy . . .*Smirk*
- No, You’re more than a guy .. . I know, I just met you and this is crazy but I feel your soul . . . . .

*Surprised *
Boy opened his eyes as large as a human can. He said:
- What do you mean by that ? * Confused*
- I Feel you like we know each other for many years . . .
- I’m Surprised . . .
- Me too . . . .
- Now, Let’s go home , or we’ll get sick. *laugh*
- Okay. * Smile*
- Where do you live?
- City road 48.
- Let Me walk you home. I’m sure your parents are worrying . . .
- My parents are Dead . . . .So I live alone . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . .Silent . . . . . . . .
- Okay ...
- You’re so Different From other people . . .
- Why is that?
- Because other people who heard that I’m orphan they were sorry for me, and were asking how my parents died . . . .
- Well, As you see I’m not asking you , because I think that it’s already sore to you to say that , and when I ask you how they died, it will make you feel worse . . . .
- Y-You . . . . . You understand me the most By The Way I Met You Only 10 Minutes , and people who know me for Years . . . They Just . . . . . . .. * Almost to cry*
- Don’t Cry . . . . You Mustn’t ever cry . . . For Anybody Or Anything.
- Please, Ritsu . . . Can We Go Home . . . Said Shinku.
- Of Course.
They Started To Walk, but suddenly a man came from nowhere following them.
- Turn Left. * Ritsu whispered To Shinku*
- But My Home Is –
- I Said Turn Left . . . . Please Shinku, I just Don’t Want You To Get Hurt . . . Please . . .
- O-Okay *- Shinku Turned Left-
But Ritsu Didn’t
*Shinku Thinking : Why Didn’t He Turn left too ?*
- I Better see What’s Happening There . . .
She Looked Softly And Saw that Ritsu was fighting that man, his chest and throat were bleeding . The man Said:You Look Like An Angel ,and Play like A Devil . . . .
But Suddenly The Man Started To Bleed. The Blood Was Coming Fast And he Said His Last Words:
Perfect Weapon Of Your’ s Always Works . . . .. And Died.
Ritsu Was Just Standing In Rain Wet And Bleeding. His Blood Was Mixed With Rain water. Shinku Ran To Him:
- ARE U ALIVE?! * She Shouted*
- I Am . . . . .
- LET’S GO HOME FAST I’LL HELP U ! MY HOME ISN’T FAR, COME! !
- No . . . I Don’t –
- NO U WILL!
*Shinku Was Burning Of Worry Like An angel In Hell*
* Surprised*
- Okay . . . .
They Started To Walk Fast as They Could
They Came At home , Shinku put off ritsu’s bloody clothings and started Healing The Wounds , Ritsu Said To Her:
- Thank You , Shinku . –Smile –
- It’s Nothing
- It Is. You’re Saving My Life . . Your Saving A Life of a stranger. .
- Well , I just couldn’t let you stay there and die , I feel your soul and now it’s burning of sore like an angel in hell . . . .
- . . . . . . . You Understand me . . . . . . . . –Smile-
when Shinku finished healing, she saw that Ritsu fell asleep.
Shinku was thinking :*How cute, I Really like Him , He isn’t pervert like other guys. . . . *
Shinku sat on the sofa with Ritsu asleep on her shoulder .
Suddenly Ritsu woke up. It was 3:45 Am, He Saw Shinku and took her up he took her in her room and put her on her bed.
Ritsu thought:* I shouldn’t leave her alone, after this fight *
He was looking at her, at her long blonde hair like sun’s beams, her Turquoise eyes, and lips like a red wine.
*Ritsu blushed*

When shinku woke up she saw herself in bed very surprised and ritsu staring at her , she hugged him and asked :
- Do You feel better Ritsu ?
- *Ritsu Blushing* Y-Yeah . . . But I Got To Go . . . . .
- What? Shinku Looked At Him.
B-but Why?
- I don’t want you to get in trouble because of me . . .
- No , I won’t I –
- No , shinku , remember that man from yesterday? He and people like him are hunting for me and they are ready for anything to catch me . . . and honestly you are very kind and you will never want to be with person who lives in the dark side . . . . .
- I Want To Be With You ! I – I have Nothing Else . . . Only You Stranger . . .
- . . . . . . .
- Everybody Left Me . . . . And Now You Will Too . . .
- Oh , Shinku…- Ritsu Hugged Shinku-
I’ll Never Ever Leave You .Our Souls Will Be Together Forever . . .
Shinku:*Blush Like Tomto*
- I Know Who You Are . . . hehehehe * Shinku Smiling slyly on Ritsu’s arms*
- * Ritsu Sly* And Who ???? >;D
*Ritsu Kissed Shinku’s Neck*
- Mmm . . * Blushing* You’re a Demon Aren’t You? . .he he he he .
- So You Had Already Known This, Shinku , Hadn’t You ? * whispered To Shinku’s Ear*
- I had . . . * whispered Back* . . I had Known It Since I Told You That I Feel Your Soul . .
- You Want Something Erotic Ritsuuu * Sly Face*
* Ritsu Kissed Her On The Head*
- Nope . . .

Living In The Dark(Barbara) Living In The Dark

There was a rainy autumn day. The sky was tinted , nobody was there except the boy, he was carrying a violin , and didn’t care about the weather , he was all broken and playing a sad romantic music. . . he wanted to be all alone with his soul and violin , he was playing with all his mind and wasn’t listening to rain noise . . . .
But suddenly the silence was broken in his soul. There was a girl standing behind him. She said:

- The music is majestic ! I’m Charmed!

But the boy was just standing with his violin and Wet.
- What’s your name? asked the girl .


Boy Started To Walk Away
- . . . .
- No. Wait! Don’t Go! Girl Shouted.
- What do you want anyway? Asked the boy.
- I just wanted to acquaint with you . . .You look so gloomy and sad . . . I-I just wanted to make you feel happy . . But I’m stranger to you.
Then The Boy Smiled:
- So , let’s meet each other then .. I’m Ritsu, You?
-
Girl smiled and shouted happily:
- Shinku ! ^^
- Why so happy? I’m just a guy . . .*Smirk*
- No, You’re more than a guy .. . I know, I just met you and this is crazy but I feel your soul . . . . .

*Surprised *
Boy opened his eyes as large as a human can. He said:
- What do you mean by that ? * Confused*
- I Feel you like we know each other for many years . . .
- I’m Surprised . . .
- Me too . . . .
- Now, Let’s go home , or we’ll get sick. *laugh*
- Okay. * Smile*
- Where do you live?
- City road 48.
- Let Me walk you home. I’m sure your parents are worrying . . .
- My parents are Dead . . . .So I live alone . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . .Silent . . . . . . . .
- Okay ...
- You’re so Different From other people . . .
- Why is that?
- Because other people who heard that I’m orphan they were sorry for me, and were asking how my parents died . . . .
- Well, As you see I’m not asking you , because I think that it’s already sore to you to say that , and when I ask you how they died, it will make you feel worse . . . .
- Y-You . . . . . You understand me the most By The Way I Met You Only 10 Minutes , and people who know me for Years . . . They Just . . . . . . .. * Almost to cry*
- Don’t Cry . . . . You Mustn’t ever cry . . . For Anybody Or Anything.
- Please, Ritsu . . . Can We Go Home . . . Said Shinku.
- Of Course.
They Started To Walk, but suddenly a man came from nowhere following them.
- Turn Left. * Ritsu whispered To Shinku*
- But My Home Is –
- I Said Turn Left . . . . Please Shinku, I just Don’t Want You To Get Hurt . . . Please . . .
- O-Okay *- Shinku Turned Left-
But Ritsu Didn’t
*Shinku Thinking : Why Didn’t He Turn left too ?*
- I Better see What’s Happening There . . .
She Looked Softly And Saw that Ritsu was fighting that man, his chest and throat were bleeding . The man Said:You Look Like An Angel ,and Play like A Devil . . . .
But Suddenly The Man Started To Bleed. The Blood Was Coming Fast And he Said His Last Words:
Perfect Weapon Of Your’ s Always Works . . . .. And Died.
Ritsu Was Just Standing In Rain Wet And Bleeding. His Blood Was Mixed With Rain water. Shinku Ran To Him:
- ARE U ALIVE?! * She Shouted*
- I Am . . . . .
- LET’S GO HOME FAST I’LL HELP U ! MY HOME ISN’T FAR, COME! !
- No . . . I Don’t –
- NO U WILL!
*Shinku Was Burning Of Worry Like An angel In Hell*
* Surprised*
- Okay . . . .
They Started To Walk Fast as They Could
They Came At home , Shinku put off ritsu’s bloody clothings and started Healing The Wounds , Ritsu Said To Her:
- Thank You , Shinku . –Smile –
- It’s Nothing
- It Is. You’re Saving My Life . . Your Saving A Life of a stranger. .
- Well , I just couldn’t let you stay there and die , I feel your soul and now it’s burning of sore like an angel in hell . . . .
- . . . . . . . You Understand me . . . . . . . . –Smile-
when Shinku finished healing, she saw that Ritsu fell asleep.
Shinku was thinking :*How cute, I Really like Him , He isn’t pervert like other guys. . . . *
Shinku sat on the sofa with Ritsu asleep on her shoulder .
Suddenly Ritsu woke up. It was 3:45 Am, He Saw Shinku and took her up he took her in her room and put her on her bed.
Ritsu thought:* I shouldn’t leave her alone, after this fight *
He was looking at her, at her long blonde hair like sun’s beams, her Turquoise eyes, and lips like a red wine.
*Ritsu blushed*

When shinku woke up she saw herself in bed very surprised and ritsu staring at her , she hugged him and asked :
- Do You feel better Ritsu ?
- *Ritsu Blushing* Y-Yeah . . . But I Got To Go . . . . .
- What? Shinku Looked At Him.
B-but Why?
- I don’t want you to get in trouble because of me . . .
- No , I won’t I –
- No , shinku , remember that man from yesterday? He and people like him are hunting for me and they are ready for anything to catch me . . . and honestly you are very kind and you will never want to be with person who lives in the dark side . . . . .
- I Want To Be With You ! I – I have Nothing Else . . . Only You Stranger . . .
- . . . . . . .
- Everybody Left Me . . . . And Now You Will Too . . .
- Oh , Shinku…- Ritsu Hugged Shinku-
I’ll Never Ever Leave You .Our Souls Will Be Together Forever . . .
Shinku:*Blush Like Tomto*
- I Know Who You Are . . . hehehehe * Shinku Smiling slyly on Ritsu’s arms*
- * Ritsu Sly* And Who ???? >;D
*Ritsu Kissed Shinku’s Neck*
- Mmm . . * Blushing* You’re a Demon Aren’t You? . .he he he he .
- So You Had Already Known This, Shinku , Hadn’t You ? * whispered To Shinku’s Ear*
- I had . . . * whispered Back* . . I had Known It Since I Told You That I Feel Your Soul . .
- You Want Something Erotic Ritsuuu * Sly Face*
* Ritsu Kissed Her On The Head*
- Nope . . .

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