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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
  • Published: 07/23/2012

Walking Down the Riverside....!

By S K Satyam
Born 1989, M, from Chennai, Guyana
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Walking Down the Riverside....!

Walking down the riverside, i see this beautiful girl with a mesmerising charm on her face. Two years down the memory lane there was no gap in between her and me. But i made a mistake......! And like every single consequence, it had result. And the result was (............) I tried to possess someone........and lost her 4ever. But i never forgot her last words............ ''Dear, u see the water in my hand, it symbolises love. As long as you keep your hand caringly open and allow it to remain there, it will always be there. However if you close your finger round to possess it.., it will spill through the first crack it finds.''

The greatest mistake that people make in love is they try to possess it, they demand, they have lots of expectations...........! And just like the later one, LOVE will disappear in front of your eyes.

For it is meant to be free, it's the nature of LOVE. If there are people you love, free them. Give...........don't expect much. Advise............but never order. Ask.....................and never demand.
Because only a few times will be there in your life when u find someone special......! Someone who makes ur life beautiful just by being a part of it. Someone who makes u laugh until u fall on the ground. Someone who makes u believe that there is so much good in the world. And who will always act as an inspiration to make u believe that there is an unlocked door just waiting for u to open it............................!DON'T LOSE HER/HIM.

Walking Down the Riverside....!(S K Satyam) Walking down the riverside, i see this beautiful girl with a mesmerising charm on her face. Two years down the memory lane there was no gap in between her and me. But i made a mistake......! And like every single consequence, it had result. And the result was (............) I tried to possess someone........and lost her 4ever. But i never forgot her last words............ ''Dear, u see the water in my hand, it symbolises love. As long as you keep your hand caringly open and allow it to remain there, it will always be there. However if you close your finger round to possess it.., it will spill through the first crack it finds.''

The greatest mistake that people make in love is they try to possess it, they demand, they have lots of expectations...........! And just like the later one, LOVE will disappear in front of your eyes.

For it is meant to be free, it's the nature of LOVE. If there are people you love, free them. Give...........don't expect much. Advise............but never order. Ask.....................and never demand.
Because only a few times will be there in your life when u find someone special......! Someone who makes ur life beautiful just by being a part of it. Someone who makes u laugh until u fall on the ground. Someone who makes u believe that there is so much good in the world. And who will always act as an inspiration to make u believe that there is an unlocked door just waiting for u to open it............................!DON'T LOSE HER/HIM.

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