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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 08/27/2012
MISSING
“Chase, is that you?” Jenna said frightened as she heard her back door open. “I am serious! Who is there?” those words were the last she ever said. Someone murdered her.
A couple days later
“Shot or glass sir?” the bartender asked.
“Give me something to get out of this sink hole,” I said.
“What sink hole? How did you get in it and why?” he said.
“I got in it when my girl friend Juliana was murdered and if you want I will tell you the story,” I said sadly.
“Please do, while I get your pina coloda,” the bartender said.
*John sits down*
“Well it started when she kept say that this person was stalking her. No one believed her. I would say it was a dream, or please don’t make stuff up, and by the way, who is it? and she would say, I can’t tell, or he will kill me if I tell, while she cried lying on my shoulder. It was a bad decision to try and make her tell me. But right before she told me he barged in and took her. It was in Asia if I forgot to mention. I found her washed up while I was on a vacation and it was devastating. I should tell you that I was on a vacation in Atlantic City. She was in the army. NCIS came to her house, then mine. They asked me where I was when she was murdered I said ‘war’. They asked for proof. I called my army buddy and he told them I was at war. They asked if she told me the name. I said, ‘No, she was about to when he got her’. They said they had to go. That’s it. I mean that’s the story of her death” I said slowly.
“That is sooooo sad. I’m I sorry for your loss, John” the bartender said.
“I am sorry, but what is your name?” I asked.
“Oh my sincere apology, I am William Bar at your service.” William said.
“It is alright. next round on me for you and i buddy” I said.
“Thank you. Cheers and god bless Juliana” William said with a smile.
“Thank you for the drink and have a great night sir, I mean William,” I said.
I got to my house and saw a note which read: I'M BACK!
I went inside and I called 911. They assigned a cop every day to protect me (it was annoying but it worked out and I stayed safe). I went to NCIS’s DNA analyst, Liberty. She scanned the note for finger prints and there was one. It was Juliana’s! “Was she alive or dead? Did the murderer use her body to drop the note off or what!?” I thought.
I needed a trip to Hawaii!
“It is too hectic for me,” I said with a bad look.
“Hawaii. out of all the places in the world, you pick Hawaii. I can’t believe you at all. my 7 children you would go to Hawaii without…” she said fake crying. “Without mister lovely boooo” she said cheerfully.
“Mom I don’t need that old thing. I told you to go give that to an orphan or someone,” I said, angry.
“Well he was in the attic sooooo he was lonely without you,” she said like she meant it.
“Fine mom!” I said screaming.
She started to cry. “what tore us apart?” She asked.
“I don’t know, but I am here now, no more worries, ma. Do you want to go to Hawaii?” I asked calmly.
“Well yes I guess,” She said. “wow those acting lessons paid off,” she said in a whispered voice.
“What?!” I said.
“Nothing at all dear,” Shelly said.
“Ok then get packed, then we are off!” I said with one swipe to snatch up my teddy bear.
We got to a cop chopper and they packed our luggage. Then we took off. It was only us so ma felt better about me not getting killed because the stupid cop told her about the note. She would keep asking the flight attendant to check this and that for my own safety and the worst part is I had to wear a parachute at all times. When I went to the bathroom. somehow he was there but luckily there was a cop with me. The cop quickly tazered him. In the back of the plane there was a little jail that could only fit about 2-3 people. The cop put him there until we got to Hawaii. Then they took over.
My mom was fine now that she knew he was in jail. She enjoyed her vacation, without worries that someone was out to get me and without back breaking work.
“Run!!Run!!” Someone said.
“Volcano!!!!!!!!!!” Another person said.
“10-20 people are in the lava” I said. “mom run. I will catch up. I think I saw people I can help.”
“No no!!!” Shelly said, fretting.
“Go NOW! To the plane,” I ordered her.
She went to plane and was saved.
I was almost killed when the guy that supposedly killed Juliana helped me. He had a plane and there was a ladder so I grabbed on. We had to fly all night until we met up with the other plane that had my mom. The plane I was in had 6 hobos, 3 rich people, me and the guy (Wlik).
I will admit the guy, that was framed, is pretty cool.
Turned out, Juliana was alive!!!!!! She faked her death. She killed her twin, Jenna (she was murdered the same day Julia supposedly died).
Now I was best friends with Wlik. My x-girlfriend was in jail, and it was a pretty good life after that.
The end, or is it?
Missing(April)
MISSING
“Chase, is that you?” Jenna said frightened as she heard her back door open. “I am serious! Who is there?” those words were the last she ever said. Someone murdered her.
A couple days later
“Shot or glass sir?” the bartender asked.
“Give me something to get out of this sink hole,” I said.
“What sink hole? How did you get in it and why?” he said.
“I got in it when my girl friend Juliana was murdered and if you want I will tell you the story,” I said sadly.
“Please do, while I get your pina coloda,” the bartender said.
*John sits down*
“Well it started when she kept say that this person was stalking her. No one believed her. I would say it was a dream, or please don’t make stuff up, and by the way, who is it? and she would say, I can’t tell, or he will kill me if I tell, while she cried lying on my shoulder. It was a bad decision to try and make her tell me. But right before she told me he barged in and took her. It was in Asia if I forgot to mention. I found her washed up while I was on a vacation and it was devastating. I should tell you that I was on a vacation in Atlantic City. She was in the army. NCIS came to her house, then mine. They asked me where I was when she was murdered I said ‘war’. They asked for proof. I called my army buddy and he told them I was at war. They asked if she told me the name. I said, ‘No, she was about to when he got her’. They said they had to go. That’s it. I mean that’s the story of her death” I said slowly.
“That is sooooo sad. I’m I sorry for your loss, John” the bartender said.
“I am sorry, but what is your name?” I asked.
“Oh my sincere apology, I am William Bar at your service.” William said.
“It is alright. next round on me for you and i buddy” I said.
“Thank you. Cheers and god bless Juliana” William said with a smile.
“Thank you for the drink and have a great night sir, I mean William,” I said.
I got to my house and saw a note which read: I'M BACK!
I went inside and I called 911. They assigned a cop every day to protect me (it was annoying but it worked out and I stayed safe). I went to NCIS’s DNA analyst, Liberty. She scanned the note for finger prints and there was one. It was Juliana’s! “Was she alive or dead? Did the murderer use her body to drop the note off or what!?” I thought.
I needed a trip to Hawaii!
“It is too hectic for me,” I said with a bad look.
“Hawaii. out of all the places in the world, you pick Hawaii. I can’t believe you at all. my 7 children you would go to Hawaii without…” she said fake crying. “Without mister lovely boooo” she said cheerfully.
“Mom I don’t need that old thing. I told you to go give that to an orphan or someone,” I said, angry.
“Well he was in the attic sooooo he was lonely without you,” she said like she meant it.
“Fine mom!” I said screaming.
She started to cry. “what tore us apart?” She asked.
“I don’t know, but I am here now, no more worries, ma. Do you want to go to Hawaii?” I asked calmly.
“Well yes I guess,” She said. “wow those acting lessons paid off,” she said in a whispered voice.
“What?!” I said.
“Nothing at all dear,” Shelly said.
“Ok then get packed, then we are off!” I said with one swipe to snatch up my teddy bear.
We got to a cop chopper and they packed our luggage. Then we took off. It was only us so ma felt better about me not getting killed because the stupid cop told her about the note. She would keep asking the flight attendant to check this and that for my own safety and the worst part is I had to wear a parachute at all times. When I went to the bathroom. somehow he was there but luckily there was a cop with me. The cop quickly tazered him. In the back of the plane there was a little jail that could only fit about 2-3 people. The cop put him there until we got to Hawaii. Then they took over.
My mom was fine now that she knew he was in jail. She enjoyed her vacation, without worries that someone was out to get me and without back breaking work.
“Run!!Run!!” Someone said.
“Volcano!!!!!!!!!!” Another person said.
“10-20 people are in the lava” I said. “mom run. I will catch up. I think I saw people I can help.”
“No no!!!” Shelly said, fretting.
“Go NOW! To the plane,” I ordered her.
She went to plane and was saved.
I was almost killed when the guy that supposedly killed Juliana helped me. He had a plane and there was a ladder so I grabbed on. We had to fly all night until we met up with the other plane that had my mom. The plane I was in had 6 hobos, 3 rich people, me and the guy (Wlik).
I will admit the guy, that was framed, is pretty cool.
Turned out, Juliana was alive!!!!!! She faked her death. She killed her twin, Jenna (she was murdered the same day Julia supposedly died).
Now I was best friends with Wlik. My x-girlfriend was in jail, and it was a pretty good life after that.
The end, or is it?
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