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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Childhood / Youth
- Published: 11/10/2012
Never Kiss a Boy with Blue eyes.
Born 2000, F, from Hartlepool, United KingdomIt's magical, your first kiss, isn't it? Well my story begins a few weeks ago at the hartlepool firework display.
I was with my best friends Anna, Katie, Natash, Shania and my sister Annie. The fireworks were amazing. They were so loud it made my ears pop every time one went off. not forgetting i would get a really big fright. it was almost over and we were just ready to go when we decided to go on some rides.
i went on this really scary one callled "THE CRAIN" it was really big and tall. i sat down and was fastened in. i was strapped in with this boy who was a bit older than me but he looked kinda cute. we lifted straight into the air. when we got to the top the ride shuddered and jerked. we were stuck.
the boy next to me grabbed my hand and said "don't worry". He had really blue eyes that were so pretty. "i'm here to help, my names Liam." i said hi back and told him my name. the ride was stuck for ages and there was no sign of my friends. Liam shuffled closer to me and said "i think you're cute." i blushed and giggled. i said he was cute too. we held hands and he shut his eyes and put his lips close to my face. i did the same, and we kissed for a long time. it felt like forever. he put his hand on my ear and rubbed my cheek. it was magical. he would turn his head now and then to kiss me more. it was lovely. when we stopped he smiled. he gave me his number and kissed me again. i blushed and winked at him. the ride was working now but i didn't notice.
When i got off the ride, Liam had disappeared somewhere. i went to look for him but i saw him next to the candy floss machine kissing another girl like how he kissed me. he was kissing her. i rang his phone but found out it was a chinese take away. i held back my heart broken tears and went over to him. he stopped kissing the girl and looked at me. i looked back and said "what do think you are doing?" he replied "kissing my girlfriend". i was so mad and slapped his face until it went red. i walked away and cried. he came running over to me and said "i'm sorry i didn't mean to, she kissed me." he grabbed my neck and kissed me again. i pulled him away and found my friends watching me. my sister got her handbag and swung it hard and it hit his stomach. we all ran away.
I couldnt stop crying that night and i hadn't had a kiss until.
THE END
Never Kiss a Boy with Blue eyes.(Lucy Wright)
It's magical, your first kiss, isn't it? Well my story begins a few weeks ago at the hartlepool firework display.
I was with my best friends Anna, Katie, Natash, Shania and my sister Annie. The fireworks were amazing. They were so loud it made my ears pop every time one went off. not forgetting i would get a really big fright. it was almost over and we were just ready to go when we decided to go on some rides.
i went on this really scary one callled "THE CRAIN" it was really big and tall. i sat down and was fastened in. i was strapped in with this boy who was a bit older than me but he looked kinda cute. we lifted straight into the air. when we got to the top the ride shuddered and jerked. we were stuck.
the boy next to me grabbed my hand and said "don't worry". He had really blue eyes that were so pretty. "i'm here to help, my names Liam." i said hi back and told him my name. the ride was stuck for ages and there was no sign of my friends. Liam shuffled closer to me and said "i think you're cute." i blushed and giggled. i said he was cute too. we held hands and he shut his eyes and put his lips close to my face. i did the same, and we kissed for a long time. it felt like forever. he put his hand on my ear and rubbed my cheek. it was magical. he would turn his head now and then to kiss me more. it was lovely. when we stopped he smiled. he gave me his number and kissed me again. i blushed and winked at him. the ride was working now but i didn't notice.
When i got off the ride, Liam had disappeared somewhere. i went to look for him but i saw him next to the candy floss machine kissing another girl like how he kissed me. he was kissing her. i rang his phone but found out it was a chinese take away. i held back my heart broken tears and went over to him. he stopped kissing the girl and looked at me. i looked back and said "what do think you are doing?" he replied "kissing my girlfriend". i was so mad and slapped his face until it went red. i walked away and cried. he came running over to me and said "i'm sorry i didn't mean to, she kissed me." he grabbed my neck and kissed me again. i pulled him away and found my friends watching me. my sister got her handbag and swung it hard and it hit his stomach. we all ran away.
I couldnt stop crying that night and i hadn't had a kiss until.
THE END
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