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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: War & Peace
- Published: 11/19/2012
Shadow Necklace
Born 1999, M, from Manizales, ColombiaShadow Necklace
A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away, the aliens were preparing their invasion, but suddenly they got attacked by their mortal enemies who were claiming their spot as the potence of the galaxy, but there was a nuclear explosion killing everyone but one baby that escaped to the earth. this boy looked like a human but he was different, he had a strange necklace. this necklace was the only memory from his planet. He grew up and he didn´t know anything about his past until the aliens that destroyed his planet came to the earth.
When these aliens came Tom began changing. He woke up one day and he spoke in a very strange language. he started to think weirdly, he was thinking and dreaming about the explosion. One night he decided to walk around his neighborhood and he found an alien of the bad guys, but he was good and took tom to his spaceship to destroy the bad guys. tom discovered that he had more strength, speed, and agility than he ever thought. the aliens took the earth but tom was in a spaceship training.
So he decided go to the earth and kick the bad guys asses. when he was killing the bad guys his trainer decided to attack him because he always wanted the power, but he couldn´t share with other aliens. It was a hard fight and tom was losing, and then his necklece started to shine and to choke him. suddenly he became black like a shadow, so he was enhanced and beat his trainer. but his own power consumed him and he died, but saved the earth… this time!
Shadow Necklace(Juan Federico Herrera Ruiz)
Shadow Necklace
A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away, the aliens were preparing their invasion, but suddenly they got attacked by their mortal enemies who were claiming their spot as the potence of the galaxy, but there was a nuclear explosion killing everyone but one baby that escaped to the earth. this boy looked like a human but he was different, he had a strange necklace. this necklace was the only memory from his planet. He grew up and he didn´t know anything about his past until the aliens that destroyed his planet came to the earth.
When these aliens came Tom began changing. He woke up one day and he spoke in a very strange language. he started to think weirdly, he was thinking and dreaming about the explosion. One night he decided to walk around his neighborhood and he found an alien of the bad guys, but he was good and took tom to his spaceship to destroy the bad guys. tom discovered that he had more strength, speed, and agility than he ever thought. the aliens took the earth but tom was in a spaceship training.
So he decided go to the earth and kick the bad guys asses. when he was killing the bad guys his trainer decided to attack him because he always wanted the power, but he couldn´t share with other aliens. It was a hard fight and tom was losing, and then his necklece started to shine and to choke him. suddenly he became black like a shadow, so he was enhanced and beat his trainer. but his own power consumed him and he died, but saved the earth… this time!
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