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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 11/21/2012
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"Please, come now, in my next house is someone screaming, pleasee comeee noooww, heeeelp!"
It was the day that began the discovery of something frightening; the police went to this house and the doors were closed so they began to force it. when the police gained entry there sounded a groan and a shot. They began to explore the house and found a dying girl and a dead man. immediately they called a coroner and investigators. an investigator girl(Annie) began to explore the house and she found a secret box. in the secret box she saw a diary and she began to read.
PAUL´S DIARY.
October 28 of 1989.
I’m soo excited because this is my first school day, I want to meet new people and have many many friends.
October 29 of 1989.
I’m very sad because all my peers mock me because of my shoes. my mom don’t have money to buy me a new shoes and I have to go to my school with old shoes that are ripped.
In the secret box were 5 more things very mysterious.
-the ripped shoes
-a beautiful girls picture
-an album with childrens pictures
-the name of the school where Paul studied
-a cd which read: revenge.
Annie picked up all the “evidence” and went to the morgue. when she arrived there were many police cars and the place was fenced. Annie ran and asked what was happening and a policeman answered that the man (Paul) that they picked up mysteriously disappeared in the car. Annie decided to go to Paul’s house and when she arrived there, a room light was on. she ran very fast to look and when she opened the door the light was off. she began to open the closets, the restroom, looked under the bed, and there was nothing. suddenly Annie listened to a toilet emptying. she was soo scared, she went out of the house and went to her house. that night she couldn´t sleep reading the diary and she was soo impressed because in the diary were said many horrible things and she decided to begin a really hard investigation.
The next day she searched by internet for some names that Paul wrote in his diary and named many times and all people were missing. Annie had to find the truth of everything, so she went to the school where Paul studied and the old teacher told Annie that Paul was a boy very shy and that his peers bullied him each day; Paul loved Caroline, twin sister of Isabel (she bullied Paul) and Caroline didn’t agree with the abuse that her peers gave Paul, however she didn’t do anything. Annie went out there and went to Paul’s house. she began to look for clues and saw footprints in the stairs. immediately she went up and the shower was opened. carefully she went in there and there was no one. she closed the faucet, and she left the restroom and the same noise began to sound. Annie stopped and didn’t move. Then she began to run and tripped over.
Annie woke up and she was in a horrible room. she was tied, so she screamed very strongly. someone covered her mouth and stood in front of her. it was the mysterious man, the man that disappeared in the car, it was Paul, and he said to Annie: "shut the @!?¡# up if you don’t want to happen to you just like them." and she saw many feet with the shoes, as if Paul cut the feet of the people; she smelled something horrible and very strange. Annie made a couple of moves that made the rope break. very silently she looked for Paul and she saw how Paul was opening a body of a woman. the woman was unconscious and when she woke up she began to move very strong and her body cracked more and she died and bled. Paul cut her feet with the shoes. Paul took the body and buried it in his garde.
Annie came back and made as if she was tied. he took the feet and put them in a kind of showcase and he said: “this, this shit is what they did, they caused their own death; I want to tell you everything. well I know that you read my diary so I am only going to tell you how I killed my victims. I say killed because that girl was my last revenge. I made them suffer soo much because I wanted that they suffer like me in my childhood, so I opened the body, where I could see inside (their heart, bowels, etc). consequently they died and bled and I cut their feet with the shoes and I put them in my showcase to delight me, seeing my revenge to each person that gave me suffering; in my childhood I studied in a school where all my peers bullied me and they made fun of my shoes, because my family didn’t have enough money to buy me a new shoes, so I had to wear ripped old shoes. I’m telling you this because I'm going to kill you, for intruding in my @!?¡#in life, for being a bitch that wasted her time”.
He went to the other room and suddenly began to scream and cry. he came to me very angry and when he would bury a very big knife in my heart he fell down and buried the knife in his own throat and died. she stood up and saw an identification card which said: Caroline Lemacks Stahl.
In My Shoes(laura)
"Please, come now, in my next house is someone screaming, pleasee comeee noooww, heeeelp!"
It was the day that began the discovery of something frightening; the police went to this house and the doors were closed so they began to force it. when the police gained entry there sounded a groan and a shot. They began to explore the house and found a dying girl and a dead man. immediately they called a coroner and investigators. an investigator girl(Annie) began to explore the house and she found a secret box. in the secret box she saw a diary and she began to read.
PAUL´S DIARY.
October 28 of 1989.
I’m soo excited because this is my first school day, I want to meet new people and have many many friends.
October 29 of 1989.
I’m very sad because all my peers mock me because of my shoes. my mom don’t have money to buy me a new shoes and I have to go to my school with old shoes that are ripped.
In the secret box were 5 more things very mysterious.
-the ripped shoes
-a beautiful girls picture
-an album with childrens pictures
-the name of the school where Paul studied
-a cd which read: revenge.
Annie picked up all the “evidence” and went to the morgue. when she arrived there were many police cars and the place was fenced. Annie ran and asked what was happening and a policeman answered that the man (Paul) that they picked up mysteriously disappeared in the car. Annie decided to go to Paul’s house and when she arrived there, a room light was on. she ran very fast to look and when she opened the door the light was off. she began to open the closets, the restroom, looked under the bed, and there was nothing. suddenly Annie listened to a toilet emptying. she was soo scared, she went out of the house and went to her house. that night she couldn´t sleep reading the diary and she was soo impressed because in the diary were said many horrible things and she decided to begin a really hard investigation.
The next day she searched by internet for some names that Paul wrote in his diary and named many times and all people were missing. Annie had to find the truth of everything, so she went to the school where Paul studied and the old teacher told Annie that Paul was a boy very shy and that his peers bullied him each day; Paul loved Caroline, twin sister of Isabel (she bullied Paul) and Caroline didn’t agree with the abuse that her peers gave Paul, however she didn’t do anything. Annie went out there and went to Paul’s house. she began to look for clues and saw footprints in the stairs. immediately she went up and the shower was opened. carefully she went in there and there was no one. she closed the faucet, and she left the restroom and the same noise began to sound. Annie stopped and didn’t move. Then she began to run and tripped over.
Annie woke up and she was in a horrible room. she was tied, so she screamed very strongly. someone covered her mouth and stood in front of her. it was the mysterious man, the man that disappeared in the car, it was Paul, and he said to Annie: "shut the @!?¡# up if you don’t want to happen to you just like them." and she saw many feet with the shoes, as if Paul cut the feet of the people; she smelled something horrible and very strange. Annie made a couple of moves that made the rope break. very silently she looked for Paul and she saw how Paul was opening a body of a woman. the woman was unconscious and when she woke up she began to move very strong and her body cracked more and she died and bled. Paul cut her feet with the shoes. Paul took the body and buried it in his garde.
Annie came back and made as if she was tied. he took the feet and put them in a kind of showcase and he said: “this, this shit is what they did, they caused their own death; I want to tell you everything. well I know that you read my diary so I am only going to tell you how I killed my victims. I say killed because that girl was my last revenge. I made them suffer soo much because I wanted that they suffer like me in my childhood, so I opened the body, where I could see inside (their heart, bowels, etc). consequently they died and bled and I cut their feet with the shoes and I put them in my showcase to delight me, seeing my revenge to each person that gave me suffering; in my childhood I studied in a school where all my peers bullied me and they made fun of my shoes, because my family didn’t have enough money to buy me a new shoes, so I had to wear ripped old shoes. I’m telling you this because I'm going to kill you, for intruding in my @!?¡#in life, for being a bitch that wasted her time”.
He went to the other room and suddenly began to scream and cry. he came to me very angry and when he would bury a very big knife in my heart he fell down and buried the knife in his own throat and died. she stood up and saw an identification card which said: Caroline Lemacks Stahl.
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