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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
- Published: 12/11/2012
‘Kingonsea’
The creature seemed monstrous he was hardly spotted because apparently he had the ability to hid from humans … but some had claimed that they had seen the mysterious monster ‘kingonsea’.
The people who had seen the monster was teenager girls? The people of the town derby was suspicious and knew the only way to kill the monster is too get a young girl who has golden brown hair and dark brown eyes, the age of the girl had to be 16 because of the multiply times they had sent the other girls (15 to 17) had failed and had not come back to tell the tale of the monster.
Maybe the towns people of derby had no hope of stopping the blood cry of horror, maybe the murders was a sign from the gods saying that they town was too greedy with wealth and they started to let all of their money on the injured but the injured needed medicine not money and instead of helping the people who were sick they help the less illed people who had only colds.
A dark day had come across derby town, until one day an old man came strolling down the street with this young lady with a blue cape around her neck … this old man was unlike the other old men that lived in the town because he had always hid in the shadow of his home and never said hi to anybody, so for him to smile with his grin so big, was the most irritating thing anyone had to adore too, none the less they had smiled and waved , alone with the old man the people of derby town had never seen this young lady before and did not know who she was or why the old man had a young lady with him in the first place.
The old man stopped by the end of the street where he had an appointment with the mayor, while the old man and the young lady with the old man was waiting, another young lady came into the mayors waiting room and had sat down next to the flower pot where the flower looked as if it was going to just fall down from the amount of water it had to adsorb, finally the mayor came in and asked for ‘ Mr Thompson’ to come into his office , the old man stood up and pulled his daughters hand into the room where the mayor had asked them to sit, the mayors office was small but big enough for anyone to fit in, about 20 people could fit in the room, the room smelled like fruit but also a mixture of violet and ginger it almost made the room seem like a garden with that type of smell surrounding the room.
“So your Mr Thompson” cheerfully asked the mayor while shaking Mr Thompson hand firmly, “hello mayor, how have you been, this is my daughter rose, rose this is the mayor”
“ hello, nice to me – um im sorry but I don’t think we should say nice to meet you yet, we both came to stop the curse of the young boy, but sitting here and saying goodies and helloes is not the answer and right now I think we should get down to business shall we ? “
“Well, well your daughter has sprouted into a fine young lady hasn’t she Thompson” the mayor said with a smirk only a devil could endure from.
Rose smirked back and made the smirk the mayor did unforgivable but the mayor new that they couldn’t delay any second and begun the serious chat involving the monster ‘ kingonsea’
“So you all know why we are here today” aloud the mayor in a firm yet fearful voice.
Both Mr Thompson and rose had nodded.
“We have to stop the kingonsea from eating or killing anymore of our children if he eats all of our children it would be a bad reputation and will seem that the parents would be responsible for the deaths or disappearances and so if we don’t stop him who will”
Rose stood up with firm fury “how dare you! Maybe it wasn’t the monster who had killed the children and teens, maybe it was the wolfs we have in the woods, maybe the disappearances of the girls, was by accident! “
“By accident what do you mean by that rose? “
“I mean what if the monster stopped the wolfs from killing them and maybe he had helped the girls and teens to escape or maybe he is with the girls and is helping them survive the wolfs and such”
The old man replied to roses idea of thought” maybe she is right remember the sentence’ don’t judge a book by its cover? ‘ ‘
“Maybe” the mayor said while he looked strangely at rose with such anger because he knew maybe she was right.
Then the mayor had looked over at rose’s uncle Mr Thompson and knew that it wasn’t nice to look at a young lady that way so decided to go back to the chat about stoping the creature as cruel as said by the parents who had lost their children before or even twice.
“ so any ideas rose ? “ asked the mayor who instead of looking so angry looked so scared and frightened of what the answer might be.
“Well, I could be sent to the forest and biform what others had to biform at the memorial state and maybe just maybe I could befriend the creature and somehow stop the curse” rose spoke with such understanding that even her uncle and mayor had no saying no at this point because they knew that the young girl was stubborn and hard to argue to because she would almost nearly every time win the fight.
“ ok we will try your idea rose and we will see how it goes however you are going into the danger of the woods and t=will probably not survive the woods alone , would you like some company assorted with you or would you like to be alone at this point and have full responsibility for your well being ?”
“Yes, I have been trained for this day ever since my uncle had hid me in the attic with the pints and ideas to stop and stop the curse for the matter hahahahah “she laughed.
“ great then we will start tomorrow and you will be on your own when we leave you in the woods you may have the light touch and the pack of food to survive ok ? “Rose’s uncle said with such proudness through out his body was a bright smiling glow.
The next day rose and her uncle set off with a couple of people who would start the ceremony.
That early morning was as cold and icy as it might be in the snow back in New England,
They started the ceremony where they would give rose up to kingonsea.
The monster arose and came to take rose away, rose was standing underneath the moon light, and her hair was even more golden then in the sun.
Rose was in a pool of pure white water that was to believed that the pure white water was not to even be real in life it self. The rose looked around and the people of derby was nowhere to be seen, even her father who promised to stay with her until the monster avvieved did not stay, the monster has black fur, its eyes was sad, almost confused with rose tied up.
The monster grew bigger after each step it took and was nearly as big as a polar bear twice, but rose didn’t care because the monster kingonsea’ looked a lot like a cuddle bear she used to have when she was little and so she was more pleased then worried, the monster finally came closer and sneered rose with the fresh smell of wet dog “yummy* cough* “rose said with a bad cough coming from travelling in the woods before she even came to the forest.
Everything was in place and everyone in town was thrilled and happy but not poor rose who had to be in the horrid forest with this mess of a monster. Actually the monster looked kinder than it did before and friendlier, the moon shadowed rose and the monster and with that the monster howled with a huge roar at the end of it, and slowly turned back in to a man
More like a young guy infact more like a young age as she was, the male came closer and helped rose untie her self. With that she gave him a huge hug, rose knew he wasn’t horrid and didn’t killed anyone and knew that the monster was harmless, the monster spoke” why are you here, what do you want? If you are trying to get rid of my curse than you should just turn back into a weird monster yourself and wonder the earth because you have come to the wrong monster, and so if you are than be gone!”
“Wait why are you wanting me to go and leave, I have been trained and I know new tricks and necklace that could help with your curse I “
“Stop, you can not help me and you can not help yourself as well “
Rose was shocked she came into the woods in hope to stop the curse but instead get some horrible news saying from the monster itself that he doesn’t want any help?
What should I do ‘ rose spoke in the her mind, wondering rose stood there looking at the beast hoping while she was standing she was going to some how change the monsters mind and change him back into a normal person.
“What are you even doing, stop staring at me “” why” rose replied in a wonderland kind of voice
“ because im worthless now that’s why I came into the woods to try and solve the murder and stop the monster killing them that’s why and that’s why I want to help you but your not letting me you are saying I should leave and forget about you!” rose said in a annoyed yet worried voice.
“ I do not need to be saved I haven’t killed anyone all I did was save them and helped them then I swiped there memory besides I need my true love to set me free and so far all of the girls who tried failed”
“But true love is not about trying to love the other person for the sake of it, it about loving the other person for who they are and to get to know them by it, true love is bonded by how much feeling you have for the significant other”. Rose started to shout without even knowing why but only knowing that she had to save him no matter what.
“So let me help you please!” by that rose face came BRIGHT red... and started to cry.
“why are you crying for, I am not even supposed to be living I am older than anyone … I am about 100 years old but in 17 year old form “ jack was becoming more silent and more softer than before,
“ tell me, why do you want to help me, why am I so Important that you would cry and kill for me”, I cant say “ rose was hiding something from jack and was not going to blow your cover now after all the years of training for this moment. “ tell me now or I am gone and you will not speak to me ever again !” jack shouted, “ ok , ok I will tell” rose started to speak” I am trained and was brought up by a man who told me I was to stop a cruse on a young man but he didn’t tell me why I was brought up to save the creature from, when I turned 15, my uncle came into my room and said to me that I was to fall in love with a young man who was hidden by a monster who was kind and loyal, he also told me that the monster spoke to him and said that he didn’t do anything it was the mayor , the mayor is the monsters father, bottom line is I was made to fall in love with you , right now im falling for you but your pushing me away in spite the fact that I want to save you, so please let me save you , please”.
“please, jack-“before rose finished her sentence jack rolled his eyes and kissed her softly on her bright red lips, rose kissed back more passionationly and thought to herself that this was her future to be with this 100 year old/17 year old man, this tall figured monster of a man somehow kind and honest and sure is stubborn but at least he tried to let me help him. Right before she could kiss more on his soft tender lips a glow came from jack more and more came the bright light, it came brighter and brighter til jack screamed and rose didn’t know what she did to make him do this, standing there rose looked shocked and closed her eyes for more than 13 seconds before opening her eyes to see a young man with black longish hair almost as black as the night sky, his lips were more pink than red before the change and he was taller than rose like 5 inches taller than her, the once black eyes that came from jack was bright blue and kinder.
rose was in shock and was more of a joy than anyone possible on this world, and so was jack, gosh jack was amazing rose thought to her self, rose ran up to him and gave him a huge hug with that jack turned her face towards him and kissed him long and tender, with that rose and jack ran towards town and screamed’ the curse is gone, the cruse is gone, come out, please, come out,
everyone went quickly to them and was all smiling at jack for he was the lost son that the mayor had apparently lost, jack kissed rose one last time and explained to the people” The mayor is my father and he was the one who put this horrid curse on me , he was the one who told me that I was nothing more than a monster so I ran away as in a wolf like form, the kingonsea… so please help me stop this horrid man from hurting anyone ever again” “ ha’ray ha’ray “ the town people screamed, rose looked for her uncle and searched and searched for him rose started to worry and scouted out his name “ tom !! Tom!! It’s me your niece please where are you??” still no reply “where are you “
“Rose? “ “rose what’s wrong” its him rose thought and turned around to see the mayor, rose screamed but the mayor covered her mouth “ don’t say anything you little rat I knew I should of got rid of you when I had the chance” so it was you in the woods but you couldn’t kill me cos there was too many people out there and plus on top of that jack was there” DON’T YOU DARE TALK TO ME LIKE THAT, jack is a brat and a no good son of a bitc-“ “ DON’T SAY THAT IS RUDE “ rose said smiling,
The mayor shut her up by smashing a glass bottle on her head; rose was still alive but not opening her eyes, “hey dad stops! What are you doing!!?” “Hello son how are you like being human again hahahahah “don’t make me laugh you horrible man you are the reason for all this trouble “JACK GOT ANGRY.
As soon as he said that jack ran into his father and stabbed him in the stomach, bleeding the father said” my son I only wanted you to be happy and be with me and be with the family, be mean like us “
“No why would I want to be in a family so cruel and horrid why should I be? “ “ because “ but jack father couldn’t say a word after that rose opened her eyes and found her self in jacks arms, “ heh, hello handsome” jack smiled and gave rose a soft kiss “ are you okay ?” jack asked worried” yes I am im happy everyone is ok “ “ rose, omg rose im so sorry I got you into this mess” her uncle shied like voice made her make a tear” its ok uncle its ok “ replied rose kindly towards her uncle.
5 years later and jack and rose got married and lived in kingonsea household where rose’s uncle was now called her father, jack and rose had three wonderful children, one girl and two greatly mannered boys. And they were never happier.
The end.
Kingonsea(Emily)
‘Kingonsea’
The creature seemed monstrous he was hardly spotted because apparently he had the ability to hid from humans … but some had claimed that they had seen the mysterious monster ‘kingonsea’.
The people who had seen the monster was teenager girls? The people of the town derby was suspicious and knew the only way to kill the monster is too get a young girl who has golden brown hair and dark brown eyes, the age of the girl had to be 16 because of the multiply times they had sent the other girls (15 to 17) had failed and had not come back to tell the tale of the monster.
Maybe the towns people of derby had no hope of stopping the blood cry of horror, maybe the murders was a sign from the gods saying that they town was too greedy with wealth and they started to let all of their money on the injured but the injured needed medicine not money and instead of helping the people who were sick they help the less illed people who had only colds.
A dark day had come across derby town, until one day an old man came strolling down the street with this young lady with a blue cape around her neck … this old man was unlike the other old men that lived in the town because he had always hid in the shadow of his home and never said hi to anybody, so for him to smile with his grin so big, was the most irritating thing anyone had to adore too, none the less they had smiled and waved , alone with the old man the people of derby town had never seen this young lady before and did not know who she was or why the old man had a young lady with him in the first place.
The old man stopped by the end of the street where he had an appointment with the mayor, while the old man and the young lady with the old man was waiting, another young lady came into the mayors waiting room and had sat down next to the flower pot where the flower looked as if it was going to just fall down from the amount of water it had to adsorb, finally the mayor came in and asked for ‘ Mr Thompson’ to come into his office , the old man stood up and pulled his daughters hand into the room where the mayor had asked them to sit, the mayors office was small but big enough for anyone to fit in, about 20 people could fit in the room, the room smelled like fruit but also a mixture of violet and ginger it almost made the room seem like a garden with that type of smell surrounding the room.
“So your Mr Thompson” cheerfully asked the mayor while shaking Mr Thompson hand firmly, “hello mayor, how have you been, this is my daughter rose, rose this is the mayor”
“ hello, nice to me – um im sorry but I don’t think we should say nice to meet you yet, we both came to stop the curse of the young boy, but sitting here and saying goodies and helloes is not the answer and right now I think we should get down to business shall we ? “
“Well, well your daughter has sprouted into a fine young lady hasn’t she Thompson” the mayor said with a smirk only a devil could endure from.
Rose smirked back and made the smirk the mayor did unforgivable but the mayor new that they couldn’t delay any second and begun the serious chat involving the monster ‘ kingonsea’
“So you all know why we are here today” aloud the mayor in a firm yet fearful voice.
Both Mr Thompson and rose had nodded.
“We have to stop the kingonsea from eating or killing anymore of our children if he eats all of our children it would be a bad reputation and will seem that the parents would be responsible for the deaths or disappearances and so if we don’t stop him who will”
Rose stood up with firm fury “how dare you! Maybe it wasn’t the monster who had killed the children and teens, maybe it was the wolfs we have in the woods, maybe the disappearances of the girls, was by accident! “
“By accident what do you mean by that rose? “
“I mean what if the monster stopped the wolfs from killing them and maybe he had helped the girls and teens to escape or maybe he is with the girls and is helping them survive the wolfs and such”
The old man replied to roses idea of thought” maybe she is right remember the sentence’ don’t judge a book by its cover? ‘ ‘
“Maybe” the mayor said while he looked strangely at rose with such anger because he knew maybe she was right.
Then the mayor had looked over at rose’s uncle Mr Thompson and knew that it wasn’t nice to look at a young lady that way so decided to go back to the chat about stoping the creature as cruel as said by the parents who had lost their children before or even twice.
“ so any ideas rose ? “ asked the mayor who instead of looking so angry looked so scared and frightened of what the answer might be.
“Well, I could be sent to the forest and biform what others had to biform at the memorial state and maybe just maybe I could befriend the creature and somehow stop the curse” rose spoke with such understanding that even her uncle and mayor had no saying no at this point because they knew that the young girl was stubborn and hard to argue to because she would almost nearly every time win the fight.
“ ok we will try your idea rose and we will see how it goes however you are going into the danger of the woods and t=will probably not survive the woods alone , would you like some company assorted with you or would you like to be alone at this point and have full responsibility for your well being ?”
“Yes, I have been trained for this day ever since my uncle had hid me in the attic with the pints and ideas to stop and stop the curse for the matter hahahahah “she laughed.
“ great then we will start tomorrow and you will be on your own when we leave you in the woods you may have the light touch and the pack of food to survive ok ? “Rose’s uncle said with such proudness through out his body was a bright smiling glow.
The next day rose and her uncle set off with a couple of people who would start the ceremony.
That early morning was as cold and icy as it might be in the snow back in New England,
They started the ceremony where they would give rose up to kingonsea.
The monster arose and came to take rose away, rose was standing underneath the moon light, and her hair was even more golden then in the sun.
Rose was in a pool of pure white water that was to believed that the pure white water was not to even be real in life it self. The rose looked around and the people of derby was nowhere to be seen, even her father who promised to stay with her until the monster avvieved did not stay, the monster has black fur, its eyes was sad, almost confused with rose tied up.
The monster grew bigger after each step it took and was nearly as big as a polar bear twice, but rose didn’t care because the monster kingonsea’ looked a lot like a cuddle bear she used to have when she was little and so she was more pleased then worried, the monster finally came closer and sneered rose with the fresh smell of wet dog “yummy* cough* “rose said with a bad cough coming from travelling in the woods before she even came to the forest.
Everything was in place and everyone in town was thrilled and happy but not poor rose who had to be in the horrid forest with this mess of a monster. Actually the monster looked kinder than it did before and friendlier, the moon shadowed rose and the monster and with that the monster howled with a huge roar at the end of it, and slowly turned back in to a man
More like a young guy infact more like a young age as she was, the male came closer and helped rose untie her self. With that she gave him a huge hug, rose knew he wasn’t horrid and didn’t killed anyone and knew that the monster was harmless, the monster spoke” why are you here, what do you want? If you are trying to get rid of my curse than you should just turn back into a weird monster yourself and wonder the earth because you have come to the wrong monster, and so if you are than be gone!”
“Wait why are you wanting me to go and leave, I have been trained and I know new tricks and necklace that could help with your curse I “
“Stop, you can not help me and you can not help yourself as well “
Rose was shocked she came into the woods in hope to stop the curse but instead get some horrible news saying from the monster itself that he doesn’t want any help?
What should I do ‘ rose spoke in the her mind, wondering rose stood there looking at the beast hoping while she was standing she was going to some how change the monsters mind and change him back into a normal person.
“What are you even doing, stop staring at me “” why” rose replied in a wonderland kind of voice
“ because im worthless now that’s why I came into the woods to try and solve the murder and stop the monster killing them that’s why and that’s why I want to help you but your not letting me you are saying I should leave and forget about you!” rose said in a annoyed yet worried voice.
“ I do not need to be saved I haven’t killed anyone all I did was save them and helped them then I swiped there memory besides I need my true love to set me free and so far all of the girls who tried failed”
“But true love is not about trying to love the other person for the sake of it, it about loving the other person for who they are and to get to know them by it, true love is bonded by how much feeling you have for the significant other”. Rose started to shout without even knowing why but only knowing that she had to save him no matter what.
“So let me help you please!” by that rose face came BRIGHT red... and started to cry.
“why are you crying for, I am not even supposed to be living I am older than anyone … I am about 100 years old but in 17 year old form “ jack was becoming more silent and more softer than before,
“ tell me, why do you want to help me, why am I so Important that you would cry and kill for me”, I cant say “ rose was hiding something from jack and was not going to blow your cover now after all the years of training for this moment. “ tell me now or I am gone and you will not speak to me ever again !” jack shouted, “ ok , ok I will tell” rose started to speak” I am trained and was brought up by a man who told me I was to stop a cruse on a young man but he didn’t tell me why I was brought up to save the creature from, when I turned 15, my uncle came into my room and said to me that I was to fall in love with a young man who was hidden by a monster who was kind and loyal, he also told me that the monster spoke to him and said that he didn’t do anything it was the mayor , the mayor is the monsters father, bottom line is I was made to fall in love with you , right now im falling for you but your pushing me away in spite the fact that I want to save you, so please let me save you , please”.
“please, jack-“before rose finished her sentence jack rolled his eyes and kissed her softly on her bright red lips, rose kissed back more passionationly and thought to herself that this was her future to be with this 100 year old/17 year old man, this tall figured monster of a man somehow kind and honest and sure is stubborn but at least he tried to let me help him. Right before she could kiss more on his soft tender lips a glow came from jack more and more came the bright light, it came brighter and brighter til jack screamed and rose didn’t know what she did to make him do this, standing there rose looked shocked and closed her eyes for more than 13 seconds before opening her eyes to see a young man with black longish hair almost as black as the night sky, his lips were more pink than red before the change and he was taller than rose like 5 inches taller than her, the once black eyes that came from jack was bright blue and kinder.
rose was in shock and was more of a joy than anyone possible on this world, and so was jack, gosh jack was amazing rose thought to her self, rose ran up to him and gave him a huge hug with that jack turned her face towards him and kissed him long and tender, with that rose and jack ran towards town and screamed’ the curse is gone, the cruse is gone, come out, please, come out,
everyone went quickly to them and was all smiling at jack for he was the lost son that the mayor had apparently lost, jack kissed rose one last time and explained to the people” The mayor is my father and he was the one who put this horrid curse on me , he was the one who told me that I was nothing more than a monster so I ran away as in a wolf like form, the kingonsea… so please help me stop this horrid man from hurting anyone ever again” “ ha’ray ha’ray “ the town people screamed, rose looked for her uncle and searched and searched for him rose started to worry and scouted out his name “ tom !! Tom!! It’s me your niece please where are you??” still no reply “where are you “
“Rose? “ “rose what’s wrong” its him rose thought and turned around to see the mayor, rose screamed but the mayor covered her mouth “ don’t say anything you little rat I knew I should of got rid of you when I had the chance” so it was you in the woods but you couldn’t kill me cos there was too many people out there and plus on top of that jack was there” DON’T YOU DARE TALK TO ME LIKE THAT, jack is a brat and a no good son of a bitc-“ “ DON’T SAY THAT IS RUDE “ rose said smiling,
The mayor shut her up by smashing a glass bottle on her head; rose was still alive but not opening her eyes, “hey dad stops! What are you doing!!?” “Hello son how are you like being human again hahahahah “don’t make me laugh you horrible man you are the reason for all this trouble “JACK GOT ANGRY.
As soon as he said that jack ran into his father and stabbed him in the stomach, bleeding the father said” my son I only wanted you to be happy and be with me and be with the family, be mean like us “
“No why would I want to be in a family so cruel and horrid why should I be? “ “ because “ but jack father couldn’t say a word after that rose opened her eyes and found her self in jacks arms, “ heh, hello handsome” jack smiled and gave rose a soft kiss “ are you okay ?” jack asked worried” yes I am im happy everyone is ok “ “ rose, omg rose im so sorry I got you into this mess” her uncle shied like voice made her make a tear” its ok uncle its ok “ replied rose kindly towards her uncle.
5 years later and jack and rose got married and lived in kingonsea household where rose’s uncle was now called her father, jack and rose had three wonderful children, one girl and two greatly mannered boys. And they were never happier.
The end.
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