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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 12/21/2012
Teen Murderer.
Born 1999, F, from Huntington, West Virginia, United StatesOnce, there was a girl and a boy. They were only fifteen years old and their names were Katelyn and Nathan. They thought that they loved each other very much until one day when they got into a horrible argument. They had very many differences and they were arguing on whether Katelyn could go hang with her friends or go see a movie with Nathan. Nathan told her that if she ditched him for her friends, it was going to be over. Katelyn loved him so much she didn’t want to lose him. She told him that if he wanted to go hang with his friends instead of her, she wouldn’t care. Well, anyway, she chose to go hang out with her friends Desiree, Lindsey and Samantha.
The next day Katelyn texted Nathan and told him she was sorry it was just she hadn’t hung out with them for a while. He didn’t text back. She kept texting, but still there was no reply. She called his house and his mother answered. Katelyn asked if Nathan was home and his mother said that he left the previous night saying he was going to a friend’s house. Katelyn hung up and started calling all of Nathan’s friends’ cell phone numbers and every single one said that they hadn’t seen Nathan since that Friday at school. Katelyn immediately started freaking out.
Three hours later, she got a text, it came from Nathan's number saying " If you want to find Nathan meet me at the coffee shop on twenty-ninth street tonight at eight alone." Of course, she started to cry because she thought something bad had happened to Nathan. She packed some clothes in a backpack and put on warm clothes. Then she went down the stairs and walked into her father's home office. She opened his bottom desk drawer and pulled out his gun. She put it in her bag and quietly closed the drawer and walked out.
The clock struck eight and she told her mom she was going to Desiree's house to study. She grabbed her cell phone and walked to Desiree's house. Desiree came to the door and asked what she was doing there. Katelyn told her that there was no time to explain. They ran up the stairs to Desiree's bedroom. Katelyn started packing Desiree's bag. Then she threw clothes at Desiree and told her to put them on and Desiree just kept asking what was going on and Desiree kept telling her to hurry that she didn’t have much time left, that they needed to hurry.
A couple minutes later, Desiree wrote a note to her parents for when they got back saying that she went to Katelyn's house. Then they both ran out to Desiree's car and that’s when Katelyn explained everything to Desiree. Desiree thought it was a bad idea but she couldn’t let Katelyn go alone. Katelyn then told her where to go. Desiree drove slowly but Katelyn was hurrying her because she was supposed to meet whoever it was at eight and it was almost eight thirty. They got there and it was already closed and no one was on site. Katelyn told Desiree to follow her and then she pulled the gun out of her bag. Desiree said really loud "Uh what are you doing with that?" Katelyn told her to shut up and not to worry; she had had target practice, so she knew how to use it.
They walked around back and there they were, Nathan tied up in a chair knocked out behind the chair. Katelyn tried not to scream and cry. She didn’t see the other person’s face, but it looked like her ex-boyfriend from far away. She put the gun behind her back and slowly walked out in front of the two boys. Desiree asked what she was doing because she was hiding and didn’t know what was there on the other side of the wall. Katelyn whispered to her not to worry. Then that’s when Desiree heard a gunshot. Katelyn and Nathan both have been killed by an anonymous person. Desiree ran to her car called 911 and told them while crying what had happened. Then the killer came up to Desiree's passenger car window and shot her in the head. That’s when the killer threw Desiree's body out of the driver’s seat and drove off.
Thirty minutes later the cops had showed up. They saw a young girl’s body in front of the coffee shop. Then they searched the rest of the perimeter and then saw another girl’s body laying on the ground with a bullet in her head and the gun she had beside her and then saw a young boy’s body tied up to the chair also with a bullet in his head. The first thing they suspected was that the young girl with the gun beside her was the murderer.
A couple of months later, a boy of the age seventeen by the name Tyler confessed killing Desiree, Katelyn, and Nathan. The cops arrest him and took him to a juvenile home until he would be eighteen when he would go to a prison for life. That was when the police identified the bodies. Carly, the only female police woman had to go to the three homes of the teens and tell their families that their children were dead.
Teen Murderer.(Desiree)
Once, there was a girl and a boy. They were only fifteen years old and their names were Katelyn and Nathan. They thought that they loved each other very much until one day when they got into a horrible argument. They had very many differences and they were arguing on whether Katelyn could go hang with her friends or go see a movie with Nathan. Nathan told her that if she ditched him for her friends, it was going to be over. Katelyn loved him so much she didn’t want to lose him. She told him that if he wanted to go hang with his friends instead of her, she wouldn’t care. Well, anyway, she chose to go hang out with her friends Desiree, Lindsey and Samantha.
The next day Katelyn texted Nathan and told him she was sorry it was just she hadn’t hung out with them for a while. He didn’t text back. She kept texting, but still there was no reply. She called his house and his mother answered. Katelyn asked if Nathan was home and his mother said that he left the previous night saying he was going to a friend’s house. Katelyn hung up and started calling all of Nathan’s friends’ cell phone numbers and every single one said that they hadn’t seen Nathan since that Friday at school. Katelyn immediately started freaking out.
Three hours later, she got a text, it came from Nathan's number saying " If you want to find Nathan meet me at the coffee shop on twenty-ninth street tonight at eight alone." Of course, she started to cry because she thought something bad had happened to Nathan. She packed some clothes in a backpack and put on warm clothes. Then she went down the stairs and walked into her father's home office. She opened his bottom desk drawer and pulled out his gun. She put it in her bag and quietly closed the drawer and walked out.
The clock struck eight and she told her mom she was going to Desiree's house to study. She grabbed her cell phone and walked to Desiree's house. Desiree came to the door and asked what she was doing there. Katelyn told her that there was no time to explain. They ran up the stairs to Desiree's bedroom. Katelyn started packing Desiree's bag. Then she threw clothes at Desiree and told her to put them on and Desiree just kept asking what was going on and Desiree kept telling her to hurry that she didn’t have much time left, that they needed to hurry.
A couple minutes later, Desiree wrote a note to her parents for when they got back saying that she went to Katelyn's house. Then they both ran out to Desiree's car and that’s when Katelyn explained everything to Desiree. Desiree thought it was a bad idea but she couldn’t let Katelyn go alone. Katelyn then told her where to go. Desiree drove slowly but Katelyn was hurrying her because she was supposed to meet whoever it was at eight and it was almost eight thirty. They got there and it was already closed and no one was on site. Katelyn told Desiree to follow her and then she pulled the gun out of her bag. Desiree said really loud "Uh what are you doing with that?" Katelyn told her to shut up and not to worry; she had had target practice, so she knew how to use it.
They walked around back and there they were, Nathan tied up in a chair knocked out behind the chair. Katelyn tried not to scream and cry. She didn’t see the other person’s face, but it looked like her ex-boyfriend from far away. She put the gun behind her back and slowly walked out in front of the two boys. Desiree asked what she was doing because she was hiding and didn’t know what was there on the other side of the wall. Katelyn whispered to her not to worry. Then that’s when Desiree heard a gunshot. Katelyn and Nathan both have been killed by an anonymous person. Desiree ran to her car called 911 and told them while crying what had happened. Then the killer came up to Desiree's passenger car window and shot her in the head. That’s when the killer threw Desiree's body out of the driver’s seat and drove off.
Thirty minutes later the cops had showed up. They saw a young girl’s body in front of the coffee shop. Then they searched the rest of the perimeter and then saw another girl’s body laying on the ground with a bullet in her head and the gun she had beside her and then saw a young boy’s body tied up to the chair also with a bullet in his head. The first thing they suspected was that the young girl with the gun beside her was the murderer.
A couple of months later, a boy of the age seventeen by the name Tyler confessed killing Desiree, Katelyn, and Nathan. The cops arrest him and took him to a juvenile home until he would be eighteen when he would go to a prison for life. That was when the police identified the bodies. Carly, the only female police woman had to go to the three homes of the teens and tell their families that their children were dead.
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Andre Michael Pietroschek
05/17/2022A bumpy ride is a ride nonetheless. And, while this story would benefit from proofreading & improving formulations, it is also a splendid tale about the surreality of teenage crimes. Thanks for sharing.
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