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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Drama / Human Interest
  • Subject: War & Peace
  • Published: 01/29/2013

Who Was Lizzie Van Zyl

By Steven Cooke
Born 1958, M, from Sheffield, United Kingdom
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A small girl stands amongst the flowers of Bloemfontein
Surrounded by the aurora of yellow tulips
For she belongs to the angels now.

Her finger Points at the carpets of flowers.
A reminder of lives cut short
The glint from the sun hides her fallen friends
And a faint wind rustles the petals
forming strange whispers, the voice of many.

A wind that grows stronger everyday
And the voices gather
Speaking in tongue from all the lands.

A cry for help that falls on deaf ears,
To destroy a deadly seed that once was planted here,

memories of gold and places long forgotten.
Places that were scorched back into the ground
Where peace was replaced by the burning crops
But behind all this evil a seed was born.

For its germination came when this sweet child
Lizzie Van Zyl was killed.

Once a happy child, taken from her farm
Through tears, saw her house destroyed and livestock slaughtered
Even her beloved dog.

Taken to sleep on the ground, slowly starved
And left to winters kill.
Her last comfort a pile of rags to die on.

Her last words “Mother, Mother, I want to go to my Mother”
Thrown into a pit,
To join a multitude of innocents, in the name of progress

Bloemfontein killed with deliberate neglect,
And the bullet killed her father at Ladysmith.
Another victory for empires glory
Lizzie’s crime was her fathers, for he wanted freedom,
Democracy and a future for his family.

But Greed and empire gave birth to new words
And historians will justify
For War is inevitable as is the darkness of night

And darkness can hide the ideals of men
For here the seed of evil grew
Spreading over time to generations new.
A world kept secret from prying eyes.

But secrets come out and greed fuels the beast
Bloemfontein became the mother
And her offspring were blessed in Wars name
Auschwitz, Dachau, Treblinka,
Oh and so many more,
Different lands, same outcome
An Oasis for evil,
A place where the dark side of humanity
Degenerates into the primordial soup
From whence it came.

A haunting realisation too,
That England, has tarnished the code of chivalry,
And brought shame to the flag.

Little Lizzie still Stands among the flowers
Her reflection is still pointing, not at the flowers
But at you and me.

For it is we who did this, and it is we who will do it again,
So glance at your wedding band
For the glint might just blind you to its past,
The price of this gold is a debt we cannot repay
And pray the voices in the wind
Will one day fade away.

Quote from a Journalist
Cowardice of the most loathsome cure on earth - the act of striking at a brave man's heart through his wife's honour and his child's life."

Footnote to the write
This write is about the Boer war and the tactics that the British used to achieve victory.
LizzieVan Zyl was seen by Emily Hobhouse just before she died. Her memoirs reveal the conditions that Lizzie was subjected to.
The atrocities committed in South Africa were kept secret from the British public.
Historians believe that the outcome of this conflict delayed Democracy in South Africa by 100years.
Ironically the Boers interred in Concentration Camps were conscripted to fight for England in World War One.
Finally another irony was the demand for revenge by England to Germany for doing the same thing
To this day generations born after the Second World War are paying the debt of Germany, while England pays nothing to the Boervolk.

Who Was Lizzie Van Zyl(Steven Cooke) A small girl stands amongst the flowers of Bloemfontein
Surrounded by the aurora of yellow tulips
For she belongs to the angels now.

Her finger Points at the carpets of flowers.
A reminder of lives cut short
The glint from the sun hides her fallen friends
And a faint wind rustles the petals
forming strange whispers, the voice of many.

A wind that grows stronger everyday
And the voices gather
Speaking in tongue from all the lands.

A cry for help that falls on deaf ears,
To destroy a deadly seed that once was planted here,

memories of gold and places long forgotten.
Places that were scorched back into the ground
Where peace was replaced by the burning crops
But behind all this evil a seed was born.

For its germination came when this sweet child
Lizzie Van Zyl was killed.

Once a happy child, taken from her farm
Through tears, saw her house destroyed and livestock slaughtered
Even her beloved dog.

Taken to sleep on the ground, slowly starved
And left to winters kill.
Her last comfort a pile of rags to die on.

Her last words “Mother, Mother, I want to go to my Mother”
Thrown into a pit,
To join a multitude of innocents, in the name of progress

Bloemfontein killed with deliberate neglect,
And the bullet killed her father at Ladysmith.
Another victory for empires glory
Lizzie’s crime was her fathers, for he wanted freedom,
Democracy and a future for his family.

But Greed and empire gave birth to new words
And historians will justify
For War is inevitable as is the darkness of night

And darkness can hide the ideals of men
For here the seed of evil grew
Spreading over time to generations new.
A world kept secret from prying eyes.

But secrets come out and greed fuels the beast
Bloemfontein became the mother
And her offspring were blessed in Wars name
Auschwitz, Dachau, Treblinka,
Oh and so many more,
Different lands, same outcome
An Oasis for evil,
A place where the dark side of humanity
Degenerates into the primordial soup
From whence it came.

A haunting realisation too,
That England, has tarnished the code of chivalry,
And brought shame to the flag.

Little Lizzie still Stands among the flowers
Her reflection is still pointing, not at the flowers
But at you and me.

For it is we who did this, and it is we who will do it again,
So glance at your wedding band
For the glint might just blind you to its past,
The price of this gold is a debt we cannot repay
And pray the voices in the wind
Will one day fade away.

Quote from a Journalist
Cowardice of the most loathsome cure on earth - the act of striking at a brave man's heart through his wife's honour and his child's life."

Footnote to the write
This write is about the Boer war and the tactics that the British used to achieve victory.
LizzieVan Zyl was seen by Emily Hobhouse just before she died. Her memoirs reveal the conditions that Lizzie was subjected to.
The atrocities committed in South Africa were kept secret from the British public.
Historians believe that the outcome of this conflict delayed Democracy in South Africa by 100years.
Ironically the Boers interred in Concentration Camps were conscripted to fight for England in World War One.
Finally another irony was the demand for revenge by England to Germany for doing the same thing
To this day generations born after the Second World War are paying the debt of Germany, while England pays nothing to the Boervolk.

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