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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 01/29/2013
Hi I'm Megan, or you can call me Meg. I've wanted to tell someone my story for a while now but never really had the courage, so I guess writing it on paper is all I really have. I'm 16 and live with my Nan and Grandad in a little village called AppleHill. We live in a minuscule cosy cottage with a huge log fire and a thatched roof, quite vintage if you ask me. My parents passed away when I was 5 and so I've lived with my grandparents ever since. Here's the story of how I became a secret millionaire, enjoy.
One day me and my bestfriend Jaz were walking home from school, quite like any other day really, only this day it was boiling hot. I remember because we stopped and got icecreams. We chatted and chatted for ages until we parted ways to go home, only I felt like taking a stroll by myself and kept walking awhile longer. I walked round the mammoth woods which surround our village. As I was walking I came across a briefcase, nestled between a bush. It caught my eye as the silver buckle glistened in the reflection from the sub. I went and investigated the briefcase as it really intrigued me. As I came closer I realised it was already part open and that in the suitcase was at least millions of pounds. I stood and stared for awhile as I had never seen that much money before being from a not very well off family and all. I panicked, I didn't know what to do, my heart was beating so fast I could feel it in my mouth. That's when I did the most spontaneous action of my whole life- I grabbed the briefcase and ran. I didn't know where I was running to but I just ran. I wasn't quite sure why I was running, it's not like I was being chased, I just felt like I had the most precious thing in the world in my hand. It wasn't very heavy to say what it contained. I kept on running like a free horse galloping through water. I felt free. As I finally exited the woods I sprinted the last 5 minutes until I reached my cottage. Nobody was home a it was grandparents weekly shopping day. I swiftly ran to my room and excitedly placed the briefcase on my bed. Hesitantly I opened it, only to be let down, for the money that was once there had gone, as if by magic. I felt sick. All the thoughts of what I could of done with the money ran through my mind. All that was left in the box was a note saying "less is more" weighed down by a stone. "less is more" I pondered this statement for a while. Maybe I was never meant to have that money, maybe mum and dad took it away from me. Because we all know, fortunes murder the soul.
10 minute millionaire.(Emily)
Hi I'm Megan, or you can call me Meg. I've wanted to tell someone my story for a while now but never really had the courage, so I guess writing it on paper is all I really have. I'm 16 and live with my Nan and Grandad in a little village called AppleHill. We live in a minuscule cosy cottage with a huge log fire and a thatched roof, quite vintage if you ask me. My parents passed away when I was 5 and so I've lived with my grandparents ever since. Here's the story of how I became a secret millionaire, enjoy.
One day me and my bestfriend Jaz were walking home from school, quite like any other day really, only this day it was boiling hot. I remember because we stopped and got icecreams. We chatted and chatted for ages until we parted ways to go home, only I felt like taking a stroll by myself and kept walking awhile longer. I walked round the mammoth woods which surround our village. As I was walking I came across a briefcase, nestled between a bush. It caught my eye as the silver buckle glistened in the reflection from the sub. I went and investigated the briefcase as it really intrigued me. As I came closer I realised it was already part open and that in the suitcase was at least millions of pounds. I stood and stared for awhile as I had never seen that much money before being from a not very well off family and all. I panicked, I didn't know what to do, my heart was beating so fast I could feel it in my mouth. That's when I did the most spontaneous action of my whole life- I grabbed the briefcase and ran. I didn't know where I was running to but I just ran. I wasn't quite sure why I was running, it's not like I was being chased, I just felt like I had the most precious thing in the world in my hand. It wasn't very heavy to say what it contained. I kept on running like a free horse galloping through water. I felt free. As I finally exited the woods I sprinted the last 5 minutes until I reached my cottage. Nobody was home a it was grandparents weekly shopping day. I swiftly ran to my room and excitedly placed the briefcase on my bed. Hesitantly I opened it, only to be let down, for the money that was once there had gone, as if by magic. I felt sick. All the thoughts of what I could of done with the money ran through my mind. All that was left in the box was a note saying "less is more" weighed down by a stone. "less is more" I pondered this statement for a while. Maybe I was never meant to have that money, maybe mum and dad took it away from me. Because we all know, fortunes murder the soul.
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