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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 01/30/2013
“Heya, son!” Bill’s dad shouted happily from the lower floor.
It had been a while ago since he sounded that happy, it must be something important.
“Yes dad?” Bill asked.
Bill and his dad lived in a house south from London. Their house was blue and kind of small, but they didn’t need any bigger house. The house was one of many in a small suburb to London. Bill’s dad, Charles, had been married once upon a time but Mary, Bill’s mother, died of cancer when Bill was young. It had been tough for Charles to take care of Bill by himself.
“Do you want to go fishing with me?” His dad asked.
Fishing was one of their favourite activities to do together.
“Of course I do!” Bill blurted.
“Nice! We’re leaving now.” Charles answered.
Bill couldn’t wait while they packed all the stuff they needed, it had been a long time ago since they were out fishing together. When Charles had packed everything and they’d been to the toilet, they left. The journey took 30 minutes and when they arrived Bill saw that it wasn’t the normal fishing lake, it was a place that looked more like a swamp than a lake. There were high trees with dark green leaves and mud and dirt everywhere. The place smelled nature, but there was something strange in the air as well.
“Dad... Where are we?” Bill asked.
“I read the newspaper and saw an article about this place, they said that this was the best fishing place in England!” Bill’s dad said complacently.
“Uhmm... OK. But it’s kinda like a musty swamp.”
“Yeah I know, but they said that there were some big fish around here.”
So they began to fish, Bill and his father had a really nice time but it took a pretty long time before either of them caught a fish.
“Dad! I got one and it’s really strong!”
So Charles helped him to reel in the fish and when they finally saw some parts of the fish, they discovered that it looked quite different from the other fishes they’d caught. It had a small snake-looking head and black dot-eyes and it’s colour was something in the middle of blue and green. It was around 40 inches long.
How could that small fish be so strong? Bill asked himself. Something was wrong. He noticed that the fish kept growing under the head and soon the head was over the water and staring at them.
“Oh my god!” Bill’s dad, Charles blurted. “It’s huge!” He said excitedly.
“I know dad, let it go!” Bill shouted. “Don’t make it angry!”
The beast rose over the water's surface and they saw that it was huge and looked like something from the dinosaur era. It had a long neck with a small evil-looking head and the body had some parts which looked like a giant shark. The beast must have been over 30 feet long and it had some crocodile teeth in it’s mouth. When the whole beast came above the water surface, the whole swamp was in shadows. Bill and his father were terrified. Bill tried to act, tried to go away from there, but he couldn’t. Bill stood like a bump on a log at the sight of the beast. Suddenly it started to scream and it sounded like a thousand needles in his head and it was the worst sound he’d ever heard.
“Dad, we have to leave!” Bill got out of himself.
“Yeah... But it’s huge...” Charles answered.
Bill noticed that his dad wouldn’t move. his fishing instincts took over, he saw every fish as a challenge and he tried to catch every fish he saw.
But then the beast decided to act and it’s head went down to Charles head. For a second or two they looked into each others eyes. it looked like a competition. But Charles lost and the beast swallowed him in one.
“DAD!” Bill screamed.
But the only thing Bill saw was the beast leaving and after a few seconds they were out of sight.
Bill couldn’t believe what just happened and then he felt a tear pouring down his cheek.
He called the police and the zoo but they wouldn’t believe him and said that he was a crazy little kid. Then a thought popped into his head... Bill Gates is a fighter and wouldn’t give up, he could maybe save his dad or get his revenge on the beast.
So Bill tried to set up a trap, but he didn’t know how he should make it, so he began to think of the beast’s body structure and the surrounding nature.
Bill had been working for a few hours before he was done with the trap. His hands were almost destroyed and he had some big blisters. But he would not give up, his dad could be dead by now. So Bill started his big plan to save his father. The first step was to get the beast up above the water and then into the giant net he found in the car. after that he would bind the head into a tree and then call the zoo or something, he didn’t really know what he would do after he caught the beast if he did so.
Bill took his fathers fishing rod, because the beast had destroyed Bill’s own. So he began to fish but he didn’t get any big fishes, he got many small perches and a few blob fishes (A weird looking fish with a nose). But when he had pulled up several perches and then threw his bait into the water again, he felt that the weight increased significantly. He then began to pull harder, then suddenly, a head appeared, a big head. But Bill wasn’t afraid and waited until the beast rose above the waters surface. When the whole beast was above the surface Bill threw a stone on it’s head. it didn’t really look like it hurt.
“Come and get me if you can!” He shouted to the beast and threw another stone, this time on it’s stomach. Now Bill would commence phase two: make the beast move towards Bill without taking notice about the giant net hanging in the middle of two big trees. So Bill continued throwing stones at it, but he missed almost every stone since the beast began to move his head to avoid them.
It’s just playing with me, Bill thought. Suddenly Bill got an idea, what if he pretended to sleep on the ground a few steps from the water? He thought it was a great idea and tried to fake-sleep on the ground, after all Bill was really sleepy after all this work. But there was no time for sleeping right now when the beast successfully began to move towards Bill. The first thing he had to do now was to pull the rope which would cause the net to fall down on the beast’s head, and hope that it would land successfully on the beast’s head.
“Here you go!” Bill said to the beast and pulled the rope.
The rope fell down on the beast and the stones hanging on the edges of the net made the beast unable to move. So Bill began phase three: killing the beast, he had changed the plan from just catching the beast to trying to kill it. So he took up his father’s fishing knife and ran to the beast, but he didn’t know where he should cut the beast so it would die without hurting his father if he was alive.
He could maybe cut off the beast’s throat and then carefully, without any fast moves, cut it’s stomach so he could save his father from dying inside the beast’s body.
“Die beast, DIE!” Bill yelled and cut the throat of the beast. the beast let out a terrifying roar and then the head fell to the ground.
Bill didn’t think, didn’t feel, it was like he saw everything from a viewpoint behind him and he saw himself cut up the stomach and hug his father while he helped him to get out from the beast. Then he saw that they walked towards the car and drove to the hospital.
And then they lived happily ever after!
THE END
By a boy in Sweden
Hejsan :D
(Don't copy this!)
The Nessie(The Swedish Boy :D)
“Heya, son!” Bill’s dad shouted happily from the lower floor.
It had been a while ago since he sounded that happy, it must be something important.
“Yes dad?” Bill asked.
Bill and his dad lived in a house south from London. Their house was blue and kind of small, but they didn’t need any bigger house. The house was one of many in a small suburb to London. Bill’s dad, Charles, had been married once upon a time but Mary, Bill’s mother, died of cancer when Bill was young. It had been tough for Charles to take care of Bill by himself.
“Do you want to go fishing with me?” His dad asked.
Fishing was one of their favourite activities to do together.
“Of course I do!” Bill blurted.
“Nice! We’re leaving now.” Charles answered.
Bill couldn’t wait while they packed all the stuff they needed, it had been a long time ago since they were out fishing together. When Charles had packed everything and they’d been to the toilet, they left. The journey took 30 minutes and when they arrived Bill saw that it wasn’t the normal fishing lake, it was a place that looked more like a swamp than a lake. There were high trees with dark green leaves and mud and dirt everywhere. The place smelled nature, but there was something strange in the air as well.
“Dad... Where are we?” Bill asked.
“I read the newspaper and saw an article about this place, they said that this was the best fishing place in England!” Bill’s dad said complacently.
“Uhmm... OK. But it’s kinda like a musty swamp.”
“Yeah I know, but they said that there were some big fish around here.”
So they began to fish, Bill and his father had a really nice time but it took a pretty long time before either of them caught a fish.
“Dad! I got one and it’s really strong!”
So Charles helped him to reel in the fish and when they finally saw some parts of the fish, they discovered that it looked quite different from the other fishes they’d caught. It had a small snake-looking head and black dot-eyes and it’s colour was something in the middle of blue and green. It was around 40 inches long.
How could that small fish be so strong? Bill asked himself. Something was wrong. He noticed that the fish kept growing under the head and soon the head was over the water and staring at them.
“Oh my god!” Bill’s dad, Charles blurted. “It’s huge!” He said excitedly.
“I know dad, let it go!” Bill shouted. “Don’t make it angry!”
The beast rose over the water's surface and they saw that it was huge and looked like something from the dinosaur era. It had a long neck with a small evil-looking head and the body had some parts which looked like a giant shark. The beast must have been over 30 feet long and it had some crocodile teeth in it’s mouth. When the whole beast came above the water surface, the whole swamp was in shadows. Bill and his father were terrified. Bill tried to act, tried to go away from there, but he couldn’t. Bill stood like a bump on a log at the sight of the beast. Suddenly it started to scream and it sounded like a thousand needles in his head and it was the worst sound he’d ever heard.
“Dad, we have to leave!” Bill got out of himself.
“Yeah... But it’s huge...” Charles answered.
Bill noticed that his dad wouldn’t move. his fishing instincts took over, he saw every fish as a challenge and he tried to catch every fish he saw.
But then the beast decided to act and it’s head went down to Charles head. For a second or two they looked into each others eyes. it looked like a competition. But Charles lost and the beast swallowed him in one.
“DAD!” Bill screamed.
But the only thing Bill saw was the beast leaving and after a few seconds they were out of sight.
Bill couldn’t believe what just happened and then he felt a tear pouring down his cheek.
He called the police and the zoo but they wouldn’t believe him and said that he was a crazy little kid. Then a thought popped into his head... Bill Gates is a fighter and wouldn’t give up, he could maybe save his dad or get his revenge on the beast.
So Bill tried to set up a trap, but he didn’t know how he should make it, so he began to think of the beast’s body structure and the surrounding nature.
Bill had been working for a few hours before he was done with the trap. His hands were almost destroyed and he had some big blisters. But he would not give up, his dad could be dead by now. So Bill started his big plan to save his father. The first step was to get the beast up above the water and then into the giant net he found in the car. after that he would bind the head into a tree and then call the zoo or something, he didn’t really know what he would do after he caught the beast if he did so.
Bill took his fathers fishing rod, because the beast had destroyed Bill’s own. So he began to fish but he didn’t get any big fishes, he got many small perches and a few blob fishes (A weird looking fish with a nose). But when he had pulled up several perches and then threw his bait into the water again, he felt that the weight increased significantly. He then began to pull harder, then suddenly, a head appeared, a big head. But Bill wasn’t afraid and waited until the beast rose above the waters surface. When the whole beast was above the surface Bill threw a stone on it’s head. it didn’t really look like it hurt.
“Come and get me if you can!” He shouted to the beast and threw another stone, this time on it’s stomach. Now Bill would commence phase two: make the beast move towards Bill without taking notice about the giant net hanging in the middle of two big trees. So Bill continued throwing stones at it, but he missed almost every stone since the beast began to move his head to avoid them.
It’s just playing with me, Bill thought. Suddenly Bill got an idea, what if he pretended to sleep on the ground a few steps from the water? He thought it was a great idea and tried to fake-sleep on the ground, after all Bill was really sleepy after all this work. But there was no time for sleeping right now when the beast successfully began to move towards Bill. The first thing he had to do now was to pull the rope which would cause the net to fall down on the beast’s head, and hope that it would land successfully on the beast’s head.
“Here you go!” Bill said to the beast and pulled the rope.
The rope fell down on the beast and the stones hanging on the edges of the net made the beast unable to move. So Bill began phase three: killing the beast, he had changed the plan from just catching the beast to trying to kill it. So he took up his father’s fishing knife and ran to the beast, but he didn’t know where he should cut the beast so it would die without hurting his father if he was alive.
He could maybe cut off the beast’s throat and then carefully, without any fast moves, cut it’s stomach so he could save his father from dying inside the beast’s body.
“Die beast, DIE!” Bill yelled and cut the throat of the beast. the beast let out a terrifying roar and then the head fell to the ground.
Bill didn’t think, didn’t feel, it was like he saw everything from a viewpoint behind him and he saw himself cut up the stomach and hug his father while he helped him to get out from the beast. Then he saw that they walked towards the car and drove to the hospital.
And then they lived happily ever after!
THE END
By a boy in Sweden
Hejsan :D
(Don't copy this!)
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