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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 03/11/2013
Bill Brownstone and the thief of the SAS
Born 2003, M, from Ireland, IrelandBill Brownstone
And The Thief Of The SAS
Chapter 1
Getting to know the SAS
“I'm Bill Brownstone and I am the head of the SAS (Secret Agent Society).
even though I am only 10 years old I am the highest most successful agent in the SAS. We have technology that you wouldn't even dream of. We have watches with lazers built into them, hats that have camera's inside them, and now we are building a shoe that has a mini pellet gun. As you might know the SAS is the most qualified agency in the whole world. But no one, and I mean no one, knows about the SAS.
In the SAS all the agents have a phone that rings when there's a crime to
be solved and if someone tries to break in (which has never happened)
they will get transported into the SAS. And there is a button that just transports you to the SAS only when it is time to go to work. The SAS has the best security guards in the whole of Europe (the ones in America were too expensive so we just stuck with the ones from Europe).
The SAS has billions of euros, one eighth of it is mine because I never
get pocket money.
We go to countries that you don't even know the names of. The agents have to tell their families that they have to go to work at the hardware store or the local diner and all those familiar jobs, they say this because they don't want their family to know that they work in the SAS.
All the agents have a fancy car that is voice activated.
Chapter 2
Bill Brownstone's regular life
Bill's life outside of the SAS is a whole different story. Bill wears tracksuit bottoms, a worn out Ireland jersey and a blue jumper. Bill is just like any child, he goes to school, he plays with his friends, he does his work (sometimes he doesn't because he is working on new ideas for the SAS) just like what every child does.
Bill's best friend is called George McDonagh. George McDonagh is
also in the SAS and he is the director of service. Bill and George
have a robot to do their homework (the robots are identical to Bill and George so no one notice's that they are gone), so after school Bill and George go to the SAS.
Bill's Mother and Father are quite nice (they're not very nice because
they never give Bill pocket money) and they can be mean at the same time. Bill's Mother and Father both work at a very fancy restaurant. the restaurant is called, le restaurant de parìs. Even though it is a very fancy restaurant Bill's Mother and Father get very little pay. They work
12 hours a day every day, so when Bill's sneaking out in the night they don't even notice.
Bill lives in Ireland, he lives in the county of Galway. He lives in a small cottage in the countryside.
In Bill's house he has to sleep on a pull out sofa. Bill's Mother and Father couldn't afford a pull out sofa so Bill paid for it. There are only 5 rooms in his home. they are Bill's Mother And Father's room, the sitting room, Bills room, the kitchen and the bathroom.
Chapter 3
False alarm
After a long day at school Bill and George were walking home and the next thing they knew they were in the SAS. There were alarms going off everywhere. Bill and George knew what this was, someone had broken in. Bill rushed to the interrogation room to search through all the cctv footage. Bill couldn't find any tresspassers, he searched through all the footage again and again but all he could see was a little ball of grey fur. Then Bill remembered he brought his pet hamster Pickle to the SAS. “Pickle must have escaped” said Bill.
Bill spoke through a microphone and said “Attention all agents, my pet hamster, Pickle, has escaped and must have set off the alarm -you all may return to work”.
When George got home his Mother and Father gave it to him because he was in the SAS for 2 and a half hours. George's Mom and Dad said to him, “You are grounded for a week”.
“That's a little harsh”, moaned George.
Chapter 4
The thief of the SAS
While Bill was having a nap on his pull out sofa, he woke up in the SAS
and he could hear an alarm going off. “It must be Pickle my hamster again,” sighed Bill. But it wasn't, it was an actual thief. Bill called his best agents. He asked them if they had finished the pellet gun shoe
yet. But here's what the agents said. “The thief stole the pellet gun from the shoe. All that is left now in the technology lab is a dazzling silver coin”.
“But how did the thief do it, we have a code to get the shoe” said Bill.
One of the agents said, “Maybe someone from the SAS is the thief”.
“Yes maybe,” said Bill, looking through the surveillance one more time.
“Wait a minute” said Bill. “George McDonagh is our thief, I noticed that little coin in his pocket; its a silver coin that he found on the road” said Bill.
Chapter 5
Bye! Bye! George
George got sent to juvenile and was never heard of again.
The End
Bill Brownstone and the thief of the SAS(Darren)
Bill Brownstone
And The Thief Of The SAS
Chapter 1
Getting to know the SAS
“I'm Bill Brownstone and I am the head of the SAS (Secret Agent Society).
even though I am only 10 years old I am the highest most successful agent in the SAS. We have technology that you wouldn't even dream of. We have watches with lazers built into them, hats that have camera's inside them, and now we are building a shoe that has a mini pellet gun. As you might know the SAS is the most qualified agency in the whole world. But no one, and I mean no one, knows about the SAS.
In the SAS all the agents have a phone that rings when there's a crime to
be solved and if someone tries to break in (which has never happened)
they will get transported into the SAS. And there is a button that just transports you to the SAS only when it is time to go to work. The SAS has the best security guards in the whole of Europe (the ones in America were too expensive so we just stuck with the ones from Europe).
The SAS has billions of euros, one eighth of it is mine because I never
get pocket money.
We go to countries that you don't even know the names of. The agents have to tell their families that they have to go to work at the hardware store or the local diner and all those familiar jobs, they say this because they don't want their family to know that they work in the SAS.
All the agents have a fancy car that is voice activated.
Chapter 2
Bill Brownstone's regular life
Bill's life outside of the SAS is a whole different story. Bill wears tracksuit bottoms, a worn out Ireland jersey and a blue jumper. Bill is just like any child, he goes to school, he plays with his friends, he does his work (sometimes he doesn't because he is working on new ideas for the SAS) just like what every child does.
Bill's best friend is called George McDonagh. George McDonagh is
also in the SAS and he is the director of service. Bill and George
have a robot to do their homework (the robots are identical to Bill and George so no one notice's that they are gone), so after school Bill and George go to the SAS.
Bill's Mother and Father are quite nice (they're not very nice because
they never give Bill pocket money) and they can be mean at the same time. Bill's Mother and Father both work at a very fancy restaurant. the restaurant is called, le restaurant de parìs. Even though it is a very fancy restaurant Bill's Mother and Father get very little pay. They work
12 hours a day every day, so when Bill's sneaking out in the night they don't even notice.
Bill lives in Ireland, he lives in the county of Galway. He lives in a small cottage in the countryside.
In Bill's house he has to sleep on a pull out sofa. Bill's Mother and Father couldn't afford a pull out sofa so Bill paid for it. There are only 5 rooms in his home. they are Bill's Mother And Father's room, the sitting room, Bills room, the kitchen and the bathroom.
Chapter 3
False alarm
After a long day at school Bill and George were walking home and the next thing they knew they were in the SAS. There were alarms going off everywhere. Bill and George knew what this was, someone had broken in. Bill rushed to the interrogation room to search through all the cctv footage. Bill couldn't find any tresspassers, he searched through all the footage again and again but all he could see was a little ball of grey fur. Then Bill remembered he brought his pet hamster Pickle to the SAS. “Pickle must have escaped” said Bill.
Bill spoke through a microphone and said “Attention all agents, my pet hamster, Pickle, has escaped and must have set off the alarm -you all may return to work”.
When George got home his Mother and Father gave it to him because he was in the SAS for 2 and a half hours. George's Mom and Dad said to him, “You are grounded for a week”.
“That's a little harsh”, moaned George.
Chapter 4
The thief of the SAS
While Bill was having a nap on his pull out sofa, he woke up in the SAS
and he could hear an alarm going off. “It must be Pickle my hamster again,” sighed Bill. But it wasn't, it was an actual thief. Bill called his best agents. He asked them if they had finished the pellet gun shoe
yet. But here's what the agents said. “The thief stole the pellet gun from the shoe. All that is left now in the technology lab is a dazzling silver coin”.
“But how did the thief do it, we have a code to get the shoe” said Bill.
One of the agents said, “Maybe someone from the SAS is the thief”.
“Yes maybe,” said Bill, looking through the surveillance one more time.
“Wait a minute” said Bill. “George McDonagh is our thief, I noticed that little coin in his pocket; its a silver coin that he found on the road” said Bill.
Chapter 5
Bye! Bye! George
George got sent to juvenile and was never heard of again.
The End
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