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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Biography / Autobiography
- Published: 03/13/2013
SMILIN JOE
M, from Baltimore, Maryland, United StatesSMILIN JOE
His caramel face
gently framed
chestnut eyes
and an apple pie grin
that would erupt
in bubbling laughter
at his own cornpone jokes,
mystifying wisecracks, homespun puns,
and punchlines he'd drop on a dime
through the sweat and grime.
He was a bag of bones and muscle
as merry as christmas,
as jolly as St. Nick,
as compact as an elf
with a sweet disposition
and a choir boy voice,
his chuckles as soft as a song.
To the white men
who watched from
the top of the trenches,
he was steady on the pick,
a maestro with the rake
and solid on the shovel,
and so they took a shine
to Smilin Joe who knew
and accepted his place
with a shrug of the shoulder
and a twinkle in the eye.
I was a scrawny
and inexperienced kid
and the only laborer
who wasn't black,
but we all got along
sharing in the fatigue and the filth
and mostly tolerating Joe's
easy and aimless ramblings
capped by his common refrain
when pausing to lean on his spade
"Aw shucks, yous right, thas right."
He couldn't be more agreeable and friendly.
Smilin Joe was only forty
and already he had killed two men,
one with a gun and one with a knife,
in bar fights one year apart,
and that's why the Shot Man
warned me not to rile Joe up,
back in those days
of toil and turmoil
in the rural south
during the summer of 66
and the unspoken jim crow custom
of condoning murder when the victim was colored.
by L DOUGLAS ST OURS
April 2010
SMILIN JOE(L DOUGLAS ST OURS)
SMILIN JOE
His caramel face
gently framed
chestnut eyes
and an apple pie grin
that would erupt
in bubbling laughter
at his own cornpone jokes,
mystifying wisecracks, homespun puns,
and punchlines he'd drop on a dime
through the sweat and grime.
He was a bag of bones and muscle
as merry as christmas,
as jolly as St. Nick,
as compact as an elf
with a sweet disposition
and a choir boy voice,
his chuckles as soft as a song.
To the white men
who watched from
the top of the trenches,
he was steady on the pick,
a maestro with the rake
and solid on the shovel,
and so they took a shine
to Smilin Joe who knew
and accepted his place
with a shrug of the shoulder
and a twinkle in the eye.
I was a scrawny
and inexperienced kid
and the only laborer
who wasn't black,
but we all got along
sharing in the fatigue and the filth
and mostly tolerating Joe's
easy and aimless ramblings
capped by his common refrain
when pausing to lean on his spade
"Aw shucks, yous right, thas right."
He couldn't be more agreeable and friendly.
Smilin Joe was only forty
and already he had killed two men,
one with a gun and one with a knife,
in bar fights one year apart,
and that's why the Shot Man
warned me not to rile Joe up,
back in those days
of toil and turmoil
in the rural south
during the summer of 66
and the unspoken jim crow custom
of condoning murder when the victim was colored.
by L DOUGLAS ST OURS
April 2010
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