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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 03/26/2013
The Bro and The Sis
Born 1998, F, from Bronx,New York, United States“The Bro and The Sis”
Chapter 1:
“Our story beings August 13th 1993, he was born before I, he was the lucky one, and he is 2 years older than me. When he was born as my mother tells me it was the happiest day of her and my dad’s life. She tells me that the feeling was the same when I was born. As for me I was born on October 10th 1995 at apparently 03:56 am. My name? Well my name is Idalis and his name is Noah and he is my older brother and also my best friend. I will move a bit forward in time, to the point where I was born. My brother said that since he was only two years old that he doesn’t remember a lot about when I was born, so I asked my parents Lilly and Philippe they said they remember everything about when I was growing up. My mom said that I was a very good baby because I always ate well, I ate vegetables, fruits, rice, beans, and just about everything else, and I was a good sleeper, I always behaved, I never shouted or raised my voice, I was always good and my parents like that about me and my brother to because he was the exact same way as a child. I guess you can say my brother and I have a lot of things in common. Now let’s go further in time to my first day of school. I was scared a little like any kid would be, but mostly I was nervous because my mom wasn’t going to be there but she said this “now don’t worry dear you will be fine your brother and your cousin will be here with you and you will make a lot of friends here it will be fine.” I said “ok mom I believe you.” And so I did but I was still nervous it was my first class and I had English and on my way to class I met my first friend a nice boy about the same age as me, his name was Jake his sister was just as nice as he was and she was in the same class as my brother. My teachers name was Ms. Stewart, she was incredibly nice to everyone and she was a fun teacher, everything was going ok until lunch time.”
Chapter 2:
“When lunch time came I was even more nervous there were so many kids there and for some reason I didn’t like the food at the school. So I only took an apple and went to sit down, Jake had saved a seat for me. So I sat down with tears welling up in my eyes Jake asked me what was wrong I said that I missed my mom and brother, at lunch time you go in by grade not all together, it goes by youngest grade like First and Second graders my brother was in 4th grade so in other words I had lunch first. Then the tears started coming down and I felt sick but then the bell rang so I wiped off my tears held my stomach and when’t to finish school. Finally the final bell rang we all went outside when I saw my mom I ran to her with open arms I hugged my mom tightly and said “mom I had the best day ever beside what happened at lunch but I will tell you about that when we get home right now I want to introduce you to someone.” So I introduced her to Jake we all had a good time Jake and his sister was happy to meet my mom and the feeling was mutual with my mom. So I had to say good-bye to Jake and we all went home. When we got home I did my homework and got a snack afterwards. After I ate my snack I brushed my teeth and when’t to my brother. I asked him “Noah what do you want to do? Do you want to play a game?” Noah said “yea sure but what do you want to play? “Hum how about hide-n-seek?” He agreed we play rock-paper-scissors to decide who seeks and who hides I wound up becoming the seeker. My brother was always good at games it took me at least 15 minutes to find him; we kept switching to different games all the time until it was time for bed. The bed that we had was a bunk-bed I slept on the bottom, I said good night to everyone, gave my parents a good night hug and kiss and went to sleep.”
Chapter 3:
“Let’s go into time more. It’s my birthday I'm turning 6 I wake up and my mom and dad wish me a happy birthday. After I tell them thank you and my dad goes off to work I eat my breakfast and get dressed for school when I get to school Jake also tells me a happy birthday and so does his sister. Noah tells me happy birthday too and after I tell them all thanks I go off to class and my teacher says happy birthday as well after school on that day I felt very happy that everyone remembered my birthday when we all get home my grandparents say hi and happy birthday. So I go and thank them and go to do my homework when I’m done I go to fix my messy bed and hair. When I'm done with everything my parents tell me to wait in the room I wait for a while wondering what this is all about, also think (whoa am I in trouble?) Noah comes to get me and I come outside to a beautiful table with paper plates, plastic cups and forks, and a pretty birthday cake that says “happy birthday Idalis” in my favorite color orange. They all sing happy birthday to me and I blow out the candles. We all eat cake and be silly, my brother drew up a pin the tail on the donkey game and used tape instead of a pin for the tail I got it wrong a bunch of times but it was fun none the less. When everything was done I said good night to my grandparents and Noah and mom and dad. Then went to bed, and fell asleep.
Chapter 4:
“Let’s go further in the future. I was about 8 or 9 I really don’t remember, my parents get into a stupid argument I don’t know what it was about but my brother tells me to stay out of the room. I never liked to hear my parents argue. After they settle down my mom says has to go food shopping so my brother and I go with her after going food shopping we return home and you really feel the tension. My parents don’t really talk for the rest of the night and then I get ready for my mom comes to tuck me in I ask her mom why are you so upset at dad? She doesn’t really respond so I let it go she obviously didn’t want to talk about it so I just say good night but I don’t go to sleep I get up from bed in the middle of the night and I climb the ladder to my brothers bed I check to see if he’s awake he asks me Idalis what’s wrong go back to bed and go to sleep. But I can Noah I’m too worried about the argument mom and dad had. I know what you mean little sis why don’t you sleep with me tonight just for tonight. Ok thank you big brother. No problem Idalis now go to sleep ok? Ok good night Noah. Good night little Idalis.”
Chapter 5
“I wake up on a Saturday morning and the tension seems to have dropped I could because my parents were talking again. They were discussing where to go because they me and Noah out somewhere. They didn’t want us to hear because it surprise. They tell my brother and I to get dressed so we do and we all get in the car I ask my parents were we’re going they just smile and tell me it’s a secret. When we get I feel asleep Noah wakes me up and says, Idalis we’re here wake up. I’m still groggy from nap in the car but I wake up instantly when I see where we are, we were at a mall one of the biggest malls I’ve ever seen I believe it was called the Palace Ades mall and it was huge I think it was 5 stories tall. When we went inside w went through every store and we ate corndogs at the food court. The mall was closing when we left we get in the car my mom asks me if I liked it I shout out loud yes it was the best thing ever thanks mom and dad! Yeah thanks guys my brother says. We all get home and my mom ok that’s enough fun now get ready to go to bed so we do and I say thanks again and fall asleep as soon my head hit the pillow.”
Chapter 6
“Let’s go farther into the future to where I ‘am right now I’m 11 years old and my brother 13. My uncle invites me and my brother to a dance class that he’s been taking for a while. Uncle Ken when are we gonna get there? Now bear with me I didn’t like dancing at the time and this was a salsa class (and no it’s not the dip). So we get to the salsa class and I met his instructors Juan and Caridad they are very nice to my brother and me and so is everybody else in the class I met some of my uncles dancing friends and we have a good time and when dance class is over I ask Juan if I could join the class and he said it was fine and so I started to dance salsa I’m still dancing too and my brother joined as well. It was fun and I loved meeting new people. So we go to dance socials and parties and it was a lot of fun and of course we still made time for school and other things as well but we still went to dance classes until my brother and I got paved with a whole bunch of school work so we weren’t able to go to dance classes for a while but the story continues.”
Chapter 7
“Let’s continue into the present right now I’m 14 and my brother is turning 17. Right now I’m going to begin at Christmas time. My brother and I wake up Christmas morning and we have a little tree in our room and there are two present’s underneath it we both find the present that had our names on it and we tear it open I had gotten an archery set that I had been asking for the past 2 years and I was so excited when I saw it and then we go into the living room and find the big tree with a whole bunch of present’s under it. We get all our present’s (to tell you the truth I don’t remember any other gift except my bow set) and my uncles, aunt and cousins come to visit and we all have a big Christmas dinner with a huge turkey and bake potatoes and soft bread and everything else we all had a lot of fun and we all talked, played games, and had a really good time. We all said good bye and then went off to bed. So now I’m going to tell you what happened today, I went to dance classes again for the first time in months it was fun especially since Noah and my cousin Megan were both there my brother and I got off the train and got home just after my dad did and we had pizza for dinner and right now I’m writing to you guys to read my story but don’t think twice I will still have a lot to write about because my story isn’t over yet and Noah and the others will be there too so don’t go anywhere will write to you again soon but for now this is good bye.
The Bro and The Sis(Gwyneth)
“The Bro and The Sis”
Chapter 1:
“Our story beings August 13th 1993, he was born before I, he was the lucky one, and he is 2 years older than me. When he was born as my mother tells me it was the happiest day of her and my dad’s life. She tells me that the feeling was the same when I was born. As for me I was born on October 10th 1995 at apparently 03:56 am. My name? Well my name is Idalis and his name is Noah and he is my older brother and also my best friend. I will move a bit forward in time, to the point where I was born. My brother said that since he was only two years old that he doesn’t remember a lot about when I was born, so I asked my parents Lilly and Philippe they said they remember everything about when I was growing up. My mom said that I was a very good baby because I always ate well, I ate vegetables, fruits, rice, beans, and just about everything else, and I was a good sleeper, I always behaved, I never shouted or raised my voice, I was always good and my parents like that about me and my brother to because he was the exact same way as a child. I guess you can say my brother and I have a lot of things in common. Now let’s go further in time to my first day of school. I was scared a little like any kid would be, but mostly I was nervous because my mom wasn’t going to be there but she said this “now don’t worry dear you will be fine your brother and your cousin will be here with you and you will make a lot of friends here it will be fine.” I said “ok mom I believe you.” And so I did but I was still nervous it was my first class and I had English and on my way to class I met my first friend a nice boy about the same age as me, his name was Jake his sister was just as nice as he was and she was in the same class as my brother. My teachers name was Ms. Stewart, she was incredibly nice to everyone and she was a fun teacher, everything was going ok until lunch time.”
Chapter 2:
“When lunch time came I was even more nervous there were so many kids there and for some reason I didn’t like the food at the school. So I only took an apple and went to sit down, Jake had saved a seat for me. So I sat down with tears welling up in my eyes Jake asked me what was wrong I said that I missed my mom and brother, at lunch time you go in by grade not all together, it goes by youngest grade like First and Second graders my brother was in 4th grade so in other words I had lunch first. Then the tears started coming down and I felt sick but then the bell rang so I wiped off my tears held my stomach and when’t to finish school. Finally the final bell rang we all went outside when I saw my mom I ran to her with open arms I hugged my mom tightly and said “mom I had the best day ever beside what happened at lunch but I will tell you about that when we get home right now I want to introduce you to someone.” So I introduced her to Jake we all had a good time Jake and his sister was happy to meet my mom and the feeling was mutual with my mom. So I had to say good-bye to Jake and we all went home. When we got home I did my homework and got a snack afterwards. After I ate my snack I brushed my teeth and when’t to my brother. I asked him “Noah what do you want to do? Do you want to play a game?” Noah said “yea sure but what do you want to play? “Hum how about hide-n-seek?” He agreed we play rock-paper-scissors to decide who seeks and who hides I wound up becoming the seeker. My brother was always good at games it took me at least 15 minutes to find him; we kept switching to different games all the time until it was time for bed. The bed that we had was a bunk-bed I slept on the bottom, I said good night to everyone, gave my parents a good night hug and kiss and went to sleep.”
Chapter 3:
“Let’s go into time more. It’s my birthday I'm turning 6 I wake up and my mom and dad wish me a happy birthday. After I tell them thank you and my dad goes off to work I eat my breakfast and get dressed for school when I get to school Jake also tells me a happy birthday and so does his sister. Noah tells me happy birthday too and after I tell them all thanks I go off to class and my teacher says happy birthday as well after school on that day I felt very happy that everyone remembered my birthday when we all get home my grandparents say hi and happy birthday. So I go and thank them and go to do my homework when I’m done I go to fix my messy bed and hair. When I'm done with everything my parents tell me to wait in the room I wait for a while wondering what this is all about, also think (whoa am I in trouble?) Noah comes to get me and I come outside to a beautiful table with paper plates, plastic cups and forks, and a pretty birthday cake that says “happy birthday Idalis” in my favorite color orange. They all sing happy birthday to me and I blow out the candles. We all eat cake and be silly, my brother drew up a pin the tail on the donkey game and used tape instead of a pin for the tail I got it wrong a bunch of times but it was fun none the less. When everything was done I said good night to my grandparents and Noah and mom and dad. Then went to bed, and fell asleep.
Chapter 4:
“Let’s go further in the future. I was about 8 or 9 I really don’t remember, my parents get into a stupid argument I don’t know what it was about but my brother tells me to stay out of the room. I never liked to hear my parents argue. After they settle down my mom says has to go food shopping so my brother and I go with her after going food shopping we return home and you really feel the tension. My parents don’t really talk for the rest of the night and then I get ready for my mom comes to tuck me in I ask her mom why are you so upset at dad? She doesn’t really respond so I let it go she obviously didn’t want to talk about it so I just say good night but I don’t go to sleep I get up from bed in the middle of the night and I climb the ladder to my brothers bed I check to see if he’s awake he asks me Idalis what’s wrong go back to bed and go to sleep. But I can Noah I’m too worried about the argument mom and dad had. I know what you mean little sis why don’t you sleep with me tonight just for tonight. Ok thank you big brother. No problem Idalis now go to sleep ok? Ok good night Noah. Good night little Idalis.”
Chapter 5
“I wake up on a Saturday morning and the tension seems to have dropped I could because my parents were talking again. They were discussing where to go because they me and Noah out somewhere. They didn’t want us to hear because it surprise. They tell my brother and I to get dressed so we do and we all get in the car I ask my parents were we’re going they just smile and tell me it’s a secret. When we get I feel asleep Noah wakes me up and says, Idalis we’re here wake up. I’m still groggy from nap in the car but I wake up instantly when I see where we are, we were at a mall one of the biggest malls I’ve ever seen I believe it was called the Palace Ades mall and it was huge I think it was 5 stories tall. When we went inside w went through every store and we ate corndogs at the food court. The mall was closing when we left we get in the car my mom asks me if I liked it I shout out loud yes it was the best thing ever thanks mom and dad! Yeah thanks guys my brother says. We all get home and my mom ok that’s enough fun now get ready to go to bed so we do and I say thanks again and fall asleep as soon my head hit the pillow.”
Chapter 6
“Let’s go farther into the future to where I ‘am right now I’m 11 years old and my brother 13. My uncle invites me and my brother to a dance class that he’s been taking for a while. Uncle Ken when are we gonna get there? Now bear with me I didn’t like dancing at the time and this was a salsa class (and no it’s not the dip). So we get to the salsa class and I met his instructors Juan and Caridad they are very nice to my brother and me and so is everybody else in the class I met some of my uncles dancing friends and we have a good time and when dance class is over I ask Juan if I could join the class and he said it was fine and so I started to dance salsa I’m still dancing too and my brother joined as well. It was fun and I loved meeting new people. So we go to dance socials and parties and it was a lot of fun and of course we still made time for school and other things as well but we still went to dance classes until my brother and I got paved with a whole bunch of school work so we weren’t able to go to dance classes for a while but the story continues.”
Chapter 7
“Let’s continue into the present right now I’m 14 and my brother is turning 17. Right now I’m going to begin at Christmas time. My brother and I wake up Christmas morning and we have a little tree in our room and there are two present’s underneath it we both find the present that had our names on it and we tear it open I had gotten an archery set that I had been asking for the past 2 years and I was so excited when I saw it and then we go into the living room and find the big tree with a whole bunch of present’s under it. We get all our present’s (to tell you the truth I don’t remember any other gift except my bow set) and my uncles, aunt and cousins come to visit and we all have a big Christmas dinner with a huge turkey and bake potatoes and soft bread and everything else we all had a lot of fun and we all talked, played games, and had a really good time. We all said good bye and then went off to bed. So now I’m going to tell you what happened today, I went to dance classes again for the first time in months it was fun especially since Noah and my cousin Megan were both there my brother and I got off the train and got home just after my dad did and we had pizza for dinner and right now I’m writing to you guys to read my story but don’t think twice I will still have a lot to write about because my story isn’t over yet and Noah and the others will be there too so don’t go anywhere will write to you again soon but for now this is good bye.
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