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  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Biography / Autobiography
  • Published: 03/29/2013

SWIFT RIVERS SMOOTH ROUGH STONES

By L Douglas St Ours
M, from Baltimore, Maryland, United States
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SWIFT RIVERS SMOOTH ROUGH STONES



Yeah I was the rebel who loved babies

cool in the down hill run from glory

the car called hope was the taxi I hailed

looking for that breeze to billow my sail



for I was that mere boy who took to carousing in the face of the conforming fifties

when nothing much changed except the gurgling going down in the underground

till the tummy beat bopped and burped that quipster's scheme into a hipster's dream

alive in the demands and desires done in by protests and promises hitching through

the highs and hell awash in war and wandering with the wonder

of shocking shaking shooting within and without me

like a cacophonic fantastic sur-electric

foundry molding melting pot

mind blown head trip

journey to the spellbound...otherwise known as the sixties



where I caught myself admiring an alluring woman

extolling all that was important to me...dirty puddles

...sidewalk cracks...the thick rich foliage of a tropical island

on which a luscious tree showed off her peacock flowers

to no avail they paled in the wake of that girl in the short white dress

prettier than all those fade to jealous blossoms

heralding the rock odyssey of iron maidens



on the trail to barns in woods

I spot that smiling girl on a barrel bridge

but does she sense or can she see

what lurks in a shallow stream

black in the low of the looking up



the sugar sand...icing on aqua water mirroring an azure sky

making lacy clouds out of a great white heron spearing anorexic fish

when suddenly this same what's her name...caramel licorice beauty

arose and stole all the loveliness from the sea



perhaps because there was no one left but the three of us

heart soul and mind tucked into a defenseless four wheel rabbit

alone looking at the looming...on the road forever looping

bisecting unsuspecting rolling green hills

laying in their jaded wait for a brooding spreading alien saucer calamity convention

as a little lass crossed her legs unable to hold it any more



strangely enough...life felt good on the cupcake edge of the purple abyss

that little girl with her mom staring out at unimaginable distances of futures unforeseen

while barely hearing the awesome silence of a swift river smoothing rough stones.



by L Douglas St Ours
November 2012

SWIFT RIVERS SMOOTH ROUGH STONES(L Douglas St Ours) SWIFT RIVERS SMOOTH ROUGH STONES



Yeah I was the rebel who loved babies

cool in the down hill run from glory

the car called hope was the taxi I hailed

looking for that breeze to billow my sail



for I was that mere boy who took to carousing in the face of the conforming fifties

when nothing much changed except the gurgling going down in the underground

till the tummy beat bopped and burped that quipster's scheme into a hipster's dream

alive in the demands and desires done in by protests and promises hitching through

the highs and hell awash in war and wandering with the wonder

of shocking shaking shooting within and without me

like a cacophonic fantastic sur-electric

foundry molding melting pot

mind blown head trip

journey to the spellbound...otherwise known as the sixties



where I caught myself admiring an alluring woman

extolling all that was important to me...dirty puddles

...sidewalk cracks...the thick rich foliage of a tropical island

on which a luscious tree showed off her peacock flowers

to no avail they paled in the wake of that girl in the short white dress

prettier than all those fade to jealous blossoms

heralding the rock odyssey of iron maidens



on the trail to barns in woods

I spot that smiling girl on a barrel bridge

but does she sense or can she see

what lurks in a shallow stream

black in the low of the looking up



the sugar sand...icing on aqua water mirroring an azure sky

making lacy clouds out of a great white heron spearing anorexic fish

when suddenly this same what's her name...caramel licorice beauty

arose and stole all the loveliness from the sea



perhaps because there was no one left but the three of us

heart soul and mind tucked into a defenseless four wheel rabbit

alone looking at the looming...on the road forever looping

bisecting unsuspecting rolling green hills

laying in their jaded wait for a brooding spreading alien saucer calamity convention

as a little lass crossed her legs unable to hold it any more



strangely enough...life felt good on the cupcake edge of the purple abyss

that little girl with her mom staring out at unimaginable distances of futures unforeseen

while barely hearing the awesome silence of a swift river smoothing rough stones.



by L Douglas St Ours
November 2012

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