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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 04/18/2013
And yet again another miss ! Juke master for IPhone is the worst game ever. He should be out by now he said so, he promised me. It was June the twenty second , a dark foggy night all you could see was darkness with a vage outline of grey clouds as they were thickend by the extravagantly foroucios winds.
I was on job number four, at an old woman's house down in the west of Hampshire . It had been half an hour but still now jerry. The nabourhood was dead , now that was all exept for one. A young girl walked hesetentely towards me and she asked with a quire high pitched voice , are you hear with daddy and I repliyed no with a calm voice. There was a phase of silance for a few seconds and then I said shouldn't you be at home with your perents and she replied don't hav on house or no perents. There was another silance, I dident know what to say !
Suddenly I herd a dramatic bang against the door of the house that we where hitting but it was not jerry it was the old women !
She shouted so you must be the get away driver hey! Hey! I quickly put the here into drive and stepped on it I did not want no trobble cos I was FORCED to do it. Then I herd a bang I thought I had just hit the curv trying to get away but when I looked back all I saw was a six year old girl laying in her own pool of blood.
It's me(James)
And yet again another miss ! Juke master for IPhone is the worst game ever. He should be out by now he said so, he promised me. It was June the twenty second , a dark foggy night all you could see was darkness with a vage outline of grey clouds as they were thickend by the extravagantly foroucios winds.
I was on job number four, at an old woman's house down in the west of Hampshire . It had been half an hour but still now jerry. The nabourhood was dead , now that was all exept for one. A young girl walked hesetentely towards me and she asked with a quire high pitched voice , are you hear with daddy and I repliyed no with a calm voice. There was a phase of silance for a few seconds and then I said shouldn't you be at home with your perents and she replied don't hav on house or no perents. There was another silance, I dident know what to say !
Suddenly I herd a dramatic bang against the door of the house that we where hitting but it was not jerry it was the old women !
She shouted so you must be the get away driver hey! Hey! I quickly put the here into drive and stepped on it I did not want no trobble cos I was FORCED to do it. Then I herd a bang I thought I had just hit the curv trying to get away but when I looked back all I saw was a six year old girl laying in her own pool of blood.
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